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Posted: 11 years ago
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AT SAMEER'S CABIN

Aisha," may I come in Sir?"

Sameer (in soft voice)," come in"

Aisha thought that he is calm now.

She takes sign from him. She was going from there but sam stop her.

Sam," ruko Aisha."

Aisha's back was towards sam.

Aisha(MV),"Pata nahi subah itna gussa kiya ab kya kehana he inhe?"

Sam," wo I am sorry. Mujhe tumase is tarah bat nahi karni chahiye thi. Wo me tumhari vajah se pareshan nahi tha wo koi dusari bat thi. I am really sorry."

Aisha,"nahi sir aapako sorry kehane ki jaroorat nahi."

Sam,"accha toh tum mujhase naraj nahi hu main tumape chillaya."

Aisha,"nahi sir thoda dar laga but aap abhi shantise bat kar rahe toh thick lag raha he."

Sam," shanti? Kon shanti?"

Aisha laughs at him. and here sam lost in her smile.

Aisha,"sir Shanti I am silence."

Sameer pat at his head.

Sam," ok chalo me tumhe drop kar deta hu."

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AT PARKING

Shree calls liza,"liza... chalo me tumhe drop kar deta hu."

Liza,"are wa specky aj mujhape itni meharbani tum mujhe puch rahe ho kya kuch kam hai kya."

Shree,"ek to me tujhe lift de raha hu aur tu mujhe attitude dikha rahi hai nahi chahiye na ja."

Shree starts his bike.

Liza (MV),"ye kya hai liza jana free me toh lift mil rahi hai un dono akdu boss se accha ye specky hai chal."

Liza," rukna specky tu toh bura maan gaya baithati huna."

Shree was smirking at her.

His plan gets successful."

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Here Sakshi take sign from Sameer. She saw that sam is calm and Aisha also looking tensed free. She was happy. She thought to take lift from Sameer but the she thinks about Aisha.

Sakshi (MV)," mujhe in donoko vaqt dena chahiye pata nahi us Arjun ko kaise jelungi?"

Sakshi bid bye to Aisha and sam.

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AT PARKING

Arjun was waiting for Sakshi, as he knew that she would come to him.

Sakshi didn't ask anything to Arjun and sits in SUV.

Arjun also drive silently.

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Sam and Aisha reach at parking place.

Omkar stop car in front of them.

Omkar came outside.

Omkar (MV)," ye mucchad isake sath kya kar raha hai?"

Sameer (MV),"ye tharaki, kamina etc.. ye yahape kya kar raha he?"

Aisha (MV),"ab ye yahape kya kar raha hai kitne mushkil se sir ko manaya ye meri mehanat pe pani dalega. Aj agar ye jyada bolana me iske sachame dat todugi.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
ek hi din mein dusri baar first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Awesome update...

All acted in front of Aisha as nothing happened last night...😃😃😃
Suraj should have left his wife & not killed her...
Sameer can compare that girl with him...
Sameer barked on Aisha...
Sameer is doubtful of Omkar...😆😆😆
Shree wants to take Liza for reunion party & asked Sakshi to go with Arjun...😆😆😆
Who Shanti...😆😆😆
Again Omkar & Sameer meet...🤢🤢🤢 😆😆😆

Continue soon...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
AMAZING..
PLZ CONTINUE SOON
PLZ PM ME
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
really interesting. iam abig samsha fan. please continue👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Chapter 6 is amazing
Who is Omkar and what is his connection with Ayesha?
Continue soon please
Edited by rinku95 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Part 1:

Ohh God.

What a nightmare.

Or is it a nighmare or a fragmant of her deadly past.

Who was that maniac?

He killed her parents and friends and gave her a bloody knife to cut the cake.

Aisha is very brave.

She did the right thing.

But he is still alive.

Sameer caught her worry and lie.

Part2:

Sakshi and Liza fought over opening the door.

Arjun aur dudhwala!!!!!!!!!!!!

Like Arjun I also want to say "Yeh ladki sach mein pagal hai" ..

Abe Sakshi psychology rakho aur usske peche jao warna woh tumhara band baja dega.

They want to celebrate Aisha's b'day.

Sameer ek paid mein khada ho jyega..

Who is that Aisha was talking with?

Arjun shoot near Sameer's toe!!!

That too using Sameer's gun.

Aisha came in thinking problem.

Kya Arjun shadi se pehle hi bhabisa bulana shuru kar dya.

Sameer saw the fear in her eyes.

Kya Arjun not fare itna bada jhoot!!!

Sirf lift dene gye the ya iss bahane usske sath time spend karne gye the.

Part 3:

Wahh Sakshi tune to Sameer ko mana hi lya.

Arjun ne acchi pakdi.

Saksh ka pyed gobar mein chala gya tha!!

Gifts lene ke lye adha ghanta!!!

Chotu started eating but when Shree stopped him he grabbed bechara's neck.

Sameer pad gya musibat mein.

Dosto ko sambhale ya Aisha ko.

Headache ka bahana dekar rok hi lya.

Flashback was so painful.

Arjun bought the same earring he booked for Roshni.

Roshni told him to give a ittle place to Sakshi in his heart.

Skahsi ko usse ignore neh karna chahye tha.

Sameer khidki se ayega!!

Woww Sameer bought a suit for her.

But the scene reminded her of the day and she fainted.

Part 4:

Liza checked her and informed that she got a shock.

Arjun is quick to understand.

The case looks interesting.

Sameer is worried about Aisha.

Sakshi's quitness kreeped Arjun.

Sakshi bechari faas gyi musibat mein.

Kuch kaho to bhi problem kuch na kaho to bhi problem.

Flashback was awesome.

So, that's how Samjun got united.

Part 5:

Loved the battle in Arjun's head.

Thanks to God at last his heart won.

He went to Sakshi's house.

Sakshi is such a dramebaz.

Loved their intimate moments.

But Liza ne call karke sab bigad dya.

Aww Arjun took her name and felt comfortable.

Part 6:

Update was good.

Who is this Omkar?

Sach a badtamiz.

Bina jane kisi ke lye bhi koi bhi assumption laga baitha.

Aur Aisha ko bhi protest karna chahye tha.

Sakshi's parents are so cool.

Yeh Arjun hai.

Seesha seedha thodie na batyega.

Sameer was hurt.

So that woman's husband was the one who killed her.

When you introduce a new character try to give it in detail.

Because when you start straight with name we get confused.

Con soonz and please PM me.


Edited by EashaYousufzai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Chapter 7

Omkar,"Hi Aisha."

Giving fake smile to Sameer.

Omkar," hello ACP"

Sameer," hello nice to meet you again."

Omkar (mv),"and I am feeling like hell."

Omkar to Aisha,"chale Aisha kafi late ho gaya."

Sameer feels bad, as he want to spend some time with her in the name of lift.

Aisha sense that Sameer feels bad.

Aisha to sam," sir aap bhi chaliye hamare sath waise bhi ap roz hame lift dete ho aj hum apko drop kar dete hai. Ap mana toh nahi karenge na?"

Sameer,"ok thik hai."

Omkar,"me driver nahi hu ki sabko lift deta phiru me backside bhethuga jise drive karana wo kar sakata hai and he seats in car."

Aisha (in angry tone),"Omkar."

Sameer,"koi bat nahi aisha me drive karta hu."

Sameer was driving silently.

But Omkar can't seat silently.

Omkar,"ye kya ACP ek ACP hoke itni slow driving agar me hota toh

Before he complete his sentence Sameer increase his speed.

Aisha was experienced with his driving as he drives very fast while catching goons.

But Omkar was rolling here and there and his head hit.

And in 15 minutes they reach at sam's house.

Sam,"ok thanks Aisha. Goodnight."

Sam,"by Omkar."

Omkar didn't response him and take driving position.

Sam enters in house.

Aisha was laughing continuously. She can't stop her smile seeing omkar's condition.

Omkar was seeing his lovely dovely sister laughing freely after so many years.

Omkar (mv),"aj teri vajah se mucchad meri behan hasi hai isliye chod deta hu varana mujhase panga lene walo ko me chodta nahi."

Omkar,"ab bas bhi kar kitna hasegi? Behan hai ki dushman us mucchad ke vajah se meri ye halat huyi aur tu has rahi hai."

Aisha controlling his laugh,"hasu nahi toh kya karu? tere sath aise hi hona chahiye jab dekho tab kisiko tang karate rahate ho usiki saja hai."

(Omkar: Aisha's cousin. After Aisha's uncle and Omkar's father death Omkar took Aisha's responsibility. He loves his sister that he can do anything for her. He gave her courage to fight with inside fear. Relationship between them was bro-sis and friends. Omkar share all things to her. Omkar already knew about Aisha's condition so he did all things to recover her and gain his lovely sister. Fighting, sharing, teasing was their favorite things.)

Controlling his anger Omkar was driving towards his home.

Omkar,"aj tu hamare ghar chal."

Aisha nods.

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ARAKSHI

Driving was silent. No one was talking. Sakshi also sat silently by big heart.

Sakshi (mv),"ye akdu kuch bolata kyu nahi? Koi bat nahi me hi start karati hu."

Before she could say anything to Arjun, her phone beeps.

Some unknown person sends her message.

Message

Tumhari jan khatare me hai dear. Apni jan bacha sakati ho bacha lo. Tumhara Arjun bhi kuch nahi kar payega.

Tumhara shubhchintak.

Sakshi get shocked.

Arjun sense that Sakshi is tense.

Arjun,"kya hua Sakshi?"

Sakshi," Arjun wo.. wo..." after reading that message Sakshi was not able to say anything.

Arjun take her phone, read that message, and stop SUV.

Arjun,"tumhe kya lagata hai Sakshi ye sab kaise aur kon?"

Sakshi,"pata nahi Arjun."

Sakshi was scare.

Arjun,"don't worry Sakshi tumhe me kuch nahi hone dunga."

He was assuring Sakshi but he was not sure about his word.

Suddenly 5 to 6 men come in front of SUV.

One man comes near to Sakshi's side and after opening door he grab her by elbow.

Arjun gave hard punch on his mouth that blood comes from his mouth.

Arjun,"Sakshi tum yahi rukana."

He come outside and starts fighting. He beat them blue and black. But from backside one man came and hit his heat by hockey stick.

Sakshi screams

Sakshi,"Arjunn..."

She starts crying.

Blood was coming from Arjun's head. His head was spinning he try to balance but he fall on the ground heavily.

Two man tie Sakshi's hand and seal her mouth.

And remaining men were beating Arjun by their leg.

(sorry guys I know Arjun is very brave that he could make someone to fall on his knees. Uff par me kya karu story badhani hai na isliye Arjun ko kamjor banaya. But our hero will back to save his love.)

Those men went to their destination with Sakshi and Arjun was lying on road.

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SHREE LIZA

AT ROAD

Liza," ye specky tu mujhe kis raste se leke ja raha he?"

Shree,"kyu kya hua tum dar gayi mujhape bharosa nahi?"

Liza," nahi bilkul bhi nahi."

Shree," accha thik hai tu bata is raste se tujhe kya yad aya?"

Liza,"oh come on shree is raste toh me college jati thi. Ek min. tum mujhe college leke ja rahe ho..."

Before she complete her sentence shree stops his bike before gate.

Shree,"thik pehachana madam aj na hamare college me reunion party hai toh chale."

Liza,"stupid... pehale batana thana me acchese tayar hoke ati."

Shree went closer to her, placing her lock behind ear,"tum aisebhi acchi lag rahi ho."

For 2 min. eyelock.

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ARJUN was faint.

From that road one truck came they saw that one man lying on road and he is injured.

One man stops truck.

1st man,"kya hua gadi kyu rok di."

2nd,"kyu tujhe dikhayi nahi de raha waha pe ek admi jhakhami halat me hai."

1st,"toh hume kya aise hajaro logoko sath hota hai tumane kya jan bachane ka theka leke rakha hai kya? Waise bhi ye police ka mamla hai hame bich me nahi padana chahiye."

2nd,"nahi yar mera man keh raha he ki me uski madat karu us bechare ke pariwar ke bare me toh soch aur upperwala sab dekh raha hai agar hamane uski madat nahi ki to upperwala hame maf nahi karega."

1st,"thik hai tu jeeta me hara. Chal uttar aur use aspatal leke jate hai."

They both keep Arjun backside and drive toward hospital.

Doctor,"are ye toh ACP Arjun Rawate hai."

Because of night and blood, they both men can't recognize him.

Doctor,"ap dono innake sath?"

1st,"ji doctor vo hame ye rastepe pade huye mile."

Doctor," ap dono yahi pe rukana jab tak me na kahu samajhe."

Doctor did his work.

Doctor calls Sameer.

(That doctor knows Sameer and Arjun very well as they come there for treatment.)

AT SAMEER'S HOUSE

While taking his shirt from cupboard his eye fell on suit, which he bought for Aisha on her Birthday.

He was imagining her in that suit and smile spread on his smile. His thought broke by call.

Sam," hello dr. itani rat ko phone."

Dr."ha vo Arjun ji ki halat bahut kharab hai aap jaldi yahape aayiye."

Sam," what? Kya hua use."

Dr." aap yaha aayiye me apko sab batata hu."

Sam,"ok."

They both cut call.

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Somewhere in dark place

That place was criminal adda.

All were drinking and commenting on girl.

1st man," kya cheez hai bhai."

2nd," pata nahi boss ne ise aise kyu rakha hai."

3rd," shayad boss ko pasand aai ho."

1st,"ha wo toh hai iss ladki me kuch toh bat hogi jo boss ne ise yahape rakha."

2nd,"ha boss ke piche tho sab ladki fida hoti hai par boss hai ke kisi ko bhi bhav nahi dete isme kuch toh hai jo boss ko itni pasand ayi."

He Sakshi was trying to open rope but she was fail.

1st," ha.. hhaaa... tu jitna jor laga sakati hai laga le par jab tak boss nahi chahate tu tab tak yaha se ja nahi sakati."

He went near to her to touch her cheeks. but one man nearly 25 well build body, handsome, brilliant criminal come and cut his hand.

That 1st man fall on ground and his hand on other side. And blood get spread all over. Sakshi close her eyes.

All were shocked to see that seen and get scare they stop drinking and stand at their respective place.

That man was their boss he went to his chair and seats by crossing his leg. (man's style)

Boss," jo mera hai vo mera hi rehata hai. Boss ki barabari ek mamuli isan karega hu?? Himmat kaisi hui tumhari use chune ki. Dekha jo meri cheezo ko chune ki koshish bhi karata uska me ye hal kar sakata hu toh phir jo buri nazar dalate hai unka kya anjam hota hoga?"

2nd,"boss mafi badme hum aisa kuch nahi karenge. Hame uske bare me kuch nahi kehana chahiye tha vo apiki hai mafi ...mafi boss."

Boss,"ha...ha... bachonge tab galati karonge na? meri duniyame mafi shabdh(word) he hi nahi. Galati ki sirf saza milati hai."

And after that he shoots all remaining man including 1st man (who's hand gets cut.)"

Sakshi was scare after seeing that sight she faint.

Boss come towards Sakshi, frees her from rope, and scoops her arm.

After that, they went to bungalow.

He put her on bed call dr. for check up.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awsommmeee!!!!!
reallly love it a lot...
lols just driving se itne haal kharab ho gayi...
ohhhooo!!!!they are bro sis...i knew it...
omggg!!!!!!arjun get injured...nd who kidnappped sakshi...
arjun will surely murder that dog!!!!😡
plz con.soon...sorry for late busy with examsss!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
sorry for late comment
awesome updates
ch-6

aisha cried while hugging sameer
who is omkar ???
aisha called sameer with his name
sakshi is confused of arjun's feelings
in front of aisha all acted as nothing happen
suraj ko apni wife ko marna nhi chahiye tha...he should leave her
sameer is doubtful of omkar
again sam n omkar meet

ch7

so omkar n aisha were bother-sister
arjun injured ...n who kidnapped sakshi
loved it
cont soon
😊



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update.
So, Omkar is Aisha's cousin.
Hmm Sameer ne accha sabak sikhaya iss Omkar ko.
Awww Shreeza scene was superrrbbb..
Oh my God!!!!!!!!
Those dogs beat Arjun and left him to die.
Thanks to God those driver saw him in time.
Poor Sakshi feeling very bad for her.
Who was the person that kidnapped her?
Con soonzz pliisshhh...

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