*speechless*
Huh! I do not know what to say yaar. I mean...for a moment after I was done reading the prologue. I was actually speechless! Literally. How can you write so perfectly? I can't even do half of that!
I liked that you started with talking about love. Love really is different for everyone but it speaks the same language. As you said for some it is their reason to live and for some it's death. Love really is weird. Jab kiske liye apna sab kuch wwar dene ka man karta hai na...tab log kehte hai ki pyaar ho gaya hai. But jab koi chale jaaye to jeene ki wajah nahi milti. Tab bhi isse pyyar kehte...Ajeeb hai. Pyar mein khushiyan bhi hai aur pyaar dard bhi deta hai. Definitely weird! It's like fire on ice...
Annika Rawte...Arjun Rawte's sister. So this story is tolf from her point of view. That is a nice touch! 😃 It be intresting to read it from her POV! Excited. Occultism...Knowledge of the hidded! Wow...now that's the first I have heard of that word. It definitely is something pretty interesting. Nice choice.
So they were in Shimla..when her interpretation towards love and life changed. It is a nice city and cold! 4th APRIL you say...My Birthday month! 😆 Lol...
Wait...who is Nitima and Arav? But Arav sounds like a mishcevious little gal. 😆 Aw he was trying to lighten Arjun;s mood. So cute. And Arjun has a fiance, Aryma...That is a unique name. Sounds pretty modern and beautiful.
They had hit a girlll...more like Arjun had hit a girl. That moment that passed between him and Anamika. When he just stared at her for just a little longer...there was a spark! 😉 Dil jumping jumping jhapak karne laga...and the Anamika name itself is so mysterious. Ooo!
It leaves me with wanting to more! I seriously am eager for first chapter. There are loads of questions in my mind...Who is Anamika? Who is Aryma? And what happened in this one year? Why did Annika's pov change about love and life?
I am really eager for the next part...Please Do update soon!
And Megha DI...Thank you so much for the PM
Love,
Nabi...
P,S- 18th April, 2015...Just one day before my birthday next year. 😆 Nice choice of day! Lol...mera advance gift. Haha.
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