T#2 || Arjun SS-Zehnaseeb || Part 17- Pg 20 And 21 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
was there with him but still...That didnt stop his mind from the thoughts..The Murder Of Roshni..His Roshni..
Uljhe Kyun Pairon Me Yeh Khwaab..Kadamo Se Resham Kheech De..Piche Kuch Na Aage Ka Hisaab Iss Pal Ki Kyaari Seench De..
"Sir?" Shanaya's voice broke his thoughts.. He turned his head to look at her. "Aapki Chai.." She forwarded his glass.. Arjun took the glass from her and sipped the hot soothing liquid. He acknowledged her efforts by nodding with a faint smile.. She smiled warmly at him knowing he appreciated her handmade tea..
Aag Zubaan Pe Rakh De Toh Chot Ke Hoonth Bhi Gayenge..Ghaav Gungunayenge..Tere Dard Geet Ban Jayenge..
The whole night passed by.. A New Morning Dawned In.. Sameer Lukd at his watch and ordered.. "Its 6 am Team! Lets Move! Aaj hume uss Bhalla ko kissi bhi haal me pakadna hi hoga!" He spoke up and all nodded..Arjun took the wheel and Sameer sat beside him..All others in the passenger seat. The drive to Mahe was a 40 minute one..
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Arjun drove with a good speed and they reached the dockyard At 6:30 due to early morning and less traffic.. They enquired the local fishermen and came to know that A Steamer by the Name Of "Star" stops here every morning at 7 to drop off his passengers. Arjun lukd at his watch it was 6:45.. It wud be here in 15 minutes! All waited patiently..Just When the clock struck 7,they heard a loud honk and a chugging sound. The RR duo lukd towards The Sea and Yes..They can make out the thin outline of the steamer.. "He is here team! Be ready.." Sameer ordered them.. Everyone became alert and active.. The steamer came closer and Arjun saw "Star" painted on its body.. It halted near the jetty and a horde of passangers came down.. All lukd for him in the crowd.. "Sir! Mil Gaya Bhalla! Brown T-Shirt me!" Shree spoke up.. The team forwarded towards him with firm steps.. "Rakesh Bhalla?" Arjun asked.. "Ji Aap Kaun?" "Tumhare Sasural Wale!" Sameer replied.
TBC..
Precap-Will ETF Catch Bhalla?
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
yippiee!!me first!! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
awesome update di
loved it
aww!! so many dhamakas!😆
bechara monty..pehle dhulai aur phir sys🤣
chotu..kya dialogue maara..dimaag se hi nahi dil se bhi sirphire🤣🤣
itni mehnat bekaar gayi..bhalla aaya hi nahi😭par clue to mil gaye😊
aisha ne garage dhundh liya😊
muft ki mehmaan nawazi bahot mazedaar thi😆😆ETF in action👏
the song..perfect one!👍🏼👏👏😃
ETF ke sabhi bande ek se badhkar ek hai😃 shanaya bhi fight mein expert😃
arjun saved her😃 n she saved sam! woohoo!!🥳
chotu doing his favt task😆dhulaai
garage ko dhobi-ghat bana diya😆😆
aurat ka scarf..phasi ka phanda😆very true😃
ETF ki khatirdaari khatam huyi😆
arjun caring for shanaya😃n loved raesha talk
remembering roshni😭me too miss her!😭
ETF yeam dock yard mein!!😃sasural waale aaye hai😆very true!
waiting for next update
continu soon😃

Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
*unres*
superb and amazing update.
Loved it...
Mujhe monty keliye taras araha hai...
Ek larki se pitt gaya...
Accha hi hai...arkiyo ke saath battameezi karega,toh,aisa hi hoga,Monty puttar...
Oh ho...
Bhalla nahi araha hai... Itni koshsish karli but,finally,found a clue of Bhalla...
Aayesha found out abt the garage where Bhalla used to keep stolen cars...
Whoah...
The action scene was awesome...
ETF ki mehmaan-nawaazi was fabulous...
Chotu ka favorite kaam dhulai aur sabka favorite kaam criminals ki band bajana...
Wow...
Shanaya is also expert in fighting...
Arjun saved Shanaya and she saved Sam bhai... Good girl...
The ride to ETF hd,quarters was silent yet nice..
Shanaya taking care of Arjun,while,Bhai and Aayesha remembers Roshni...
Aayesha and Bhai sees glimpses of Roshni in Shanaya...
So,everyone in ETF office toiling hard to find Bhalla..
They will catch him in the morning...
Finally,morning came and all went to dockyard to catch...
Aha...
Arjun's dialogue, ''Tere sasural wale'' was awesome...
Ab hogi Bhalla ka raam-dhulayi...
The song was a perfect fit...
Loved it a lot...
Precap is amazing...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by ...anika... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Awesome update
Loved it
Poor Monty😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
pehle pita fir Arjun ka SYS😆😆
loved the case
Sam thinks Shanaya takes care of arjun just like Roshni
Finally Bhalla mil gaya
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
wow awesome update shanu
loved reading it yar
beautifully written
kiya dhamaka kiya yeh log ne !😆 monty ki khatir daari lol as in dhulai 🤣 and kiya dialogue ke agli baar larki cherne se pahele 1000 baar sochega lol
hahaha it was fun to see monty go closer to his mum when he sees shanu which mmade her gigle more
chotu ka dialogue wah wah
ETF in action👏
the song..great choice dear
loved the way etf fought
arjun saved sahnu and she saved sam!
arjun concern n care for shanu n raeshas convo
loved the way sam said ''tumhare sasuraal walee Clap
thnks for pm
do continue jaldi di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesome.. Thanks for pm dear.. Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
wow
mind blowing update
omg monty ki to kya ha;at hui🤣
monty puttar ab kissi bhi ladki ko ankh utha kar mat dekhna
khas kar ACP arjun rawte ki wife ko🤣
oh wao chotu ne kya explain kiya arjun ki baat ko
n his dialog awesome👏
wow kya dhulai hui goons ki
nyc arjun cares for shanaya
loved it
conti soon
thnx for pm

Edited by neitka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Loved you shanu dear awesome 🤗
beautiful update 👏👏
Poor monty I was laughing while reading his condition
& arjun marathi dialogue was too good 😆
kyu panga leta hai galat logo se 😆😆
so the case is very much solved
Action sequence at the garage was really god
So arjun saved you haan 😉😉
So bhalla tak paunch gayi ETF 👏👏
Lets see aage kya hota hai
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Loved Arjun's concern for Shanaya...
Finally they will caught Bhalla...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

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