Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75 - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Rituuu ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
you stopped at this point ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Update soon !!! Samjhi ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
great part it was ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
& it never looked like your first attempt in writing action... it was very nicely written. well done ๐Ÿ‘
Piya got the chip !! after all she is a Rawte
very very very nice writing. waiting for the next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cool down Farheen. Remember Arjun is shot & there is still a scope of some Kuch Kuch Hota haiโ˜บ๏ธ
& you, The writer, Ye lo along with my curses that I showered on you a while before๐Ÿ˜Ž
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Posted: 11 years ago
did u see that knife i throw at u ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ and that knife was not for giving less arakshi but for
stopping where u stopped arre arjun ko goli lagi and then fire par fir kya hua
so sakshi has more or less remembered everything what few things r left she will get once she reaches her home
so varun was involved in the scam or he saved sakshi as he told โ“
those gun shots did it killed varun ๐Ÿค”
oh my piyu is true daughter of police man and investigative journalist she figured out how to open the locket and now have that evidence varun was talking abt ๐Ÿ˜Ž
thanks for pm and update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...

Sakshi is not ready to leave Arjun alone...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Was Varun involved??? I m still confused...
Duplicate painting...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Piya is worried for her parents...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Piya found the card & Sakshi remembered about the card...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Last sequence was ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Stopped at wrong point...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Arjun's anger was justified because he doesn't want to loose her again
so sakshi came to know about the painting
sid and piya was cute
piya found the chip
ohh why did you stop there
waiting for next part
update soon
Edited by anitasharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwsssmmm update
Loved it
Supperbbb..
Cont Sooon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie


Haaye!
Phir le aaya dil. . That song has got a unique soothing ring to it. .. Reminds me of the old 60's n 70's..
And you're right! Such a deadly combo..Rain and ARIJIT SINGH!! *Thud* *Thud*


Gets up.. Add Arakshi to it.. And I am lost!
Pshhh your comment makes me want to slip into Arakshi dreamland again and Phir le aya dil playing in the background *thud*
And I just remembered my request to you *thud*โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Besharam me..never stop asking! But friend hoon, haq toh banta haii.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†



-Unres-

Bechara Siddie.. Doesn't he remind u of our gundi angel.. Kuch kare na kare, gaaliyan toh padti hi hai.. ๐Ÿคช

LOOOL maine toh socha hi nahii.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Haan you are right๐Ÿคฃ

Awwie.. Piya is such an adorable sweetheart! Matchmaker toh hai, and an evil one at that.. But of course, she has to be one.. ๐Ÿ˜†

Ha ha.. Aisha is the partner in crime, this time huh? Not bad.. I absolutely adore Arisha relationships that are portrayed in most of your fics.. Too bad, Aisha is a tough nut for even ACP Hotwa to crack.. Sakshi ki sangat ka asar, perhaps.. ๐Ÿ˜›

Thank youuu.. I expected so much from them on the show ..since Aisha was a favourite of mine.. but
Anywaay... I'm loving them in ASD๐Ÿ˜ณ

So, the trap is set and he falls into it; willingly, I dare say.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ <3
OMG! That walk uphill.. I think, I must've been a caterpillar crawling beside him.. So real, I was right there.. Looking at the grey clouds, listening to the thunder and feeling the cool moist air..
Bwahahhaa.. Newspaper attack! ๐Ÿคฃ

Bechara ACP, aate hi dhul gaye biwi ke haathon.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Awwie.. But Sakshi was soo cute there..
Ahem! Wall pe slam karna zaroori tha? โค๏ธ I got lost there for a moment.. Scroll hi nahi ho raha tha..

He he he he ..that was a spur of the moment kinda thing๐Ÿ˜† It was raining that afternoon and voila! It just came into my mind๐Ÿ˜›

And behold! He finally realises that the khichdi was cooked by his daughter dearest.. ๐Ÿคช

To be honest, if there's any colour in the world that I absolutely dislike it's got to be sunshine yellow.. I don't own a single piece of clothing in yellow..
But now I think, it's not so bad, is it?! ๐Ÿ˜›

Ok, here's the truth! I used to detest..like absolutely detest yellow! A year ago if someone asked me what colour I hate the most it used to be yellow and orange. And now.. it's quite contrary!๐Ÿคฃ
Guess what changed it? Well, yellow was when I watched Safe Haven.. you'll know when you watch it๐Ÿ˜‰ and after that I wrote "World through your eyes" and I don't know why I kinda got attached to yellow even more and then a bit to orange too..even though I don't have orange clothes.
Yellow is such a "happy" colour๐Ÿ˜ณ (Safe Haven)
And now I am kinda obsessed with yellow.. I changed the entire colour scheme of my room๐Ÿคฃ
And I made some people fall in love with yellow too I see ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ So yaaay๐Ÿคช

Their convo.. ๐Ÿคฃ So typically Arakshi.. No one really wins ever, do they? ๐Ÿ˜›

Hahahaa I knoww๐Ÿ˜†

And the rain! Darn it.. I am so tempted to plug in my earphones, but nahi kar sakti..
Gosh! woman, I won't ever get tired of confessing it aloud coz u honestly weave magic with words..
It felt like I was right there, watching them; his helplessness and love, her confusion and attraction towards the strange man..
I really have no words to express how I felt.. โค๏ธ

Ahhh itni tareeefff๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thank you soo muchhh.. you inspire me so so much! And your comments motivate me to no end๐Ÿ˜ƒ

And that below.. is my most favorite bit.. Pata nahi, casual sa hai, but something about it gave me woh melting wala feeling..

My gaze stops momentarily on him as he runs his fingers through his wet hair, the drenched mint-coloured shirt clinging to his skin.

His hand freezes in mid-air as he catches my gaze and asks, "What?"

"Nothing." I shake my head, my cheeks warming slightly and gather the brushes in my arms.


He he he glad you liked it๐Ÿ˜ณ
I think it's the thought of hotwa drenched in rainโ˜บ๏ธ *Thud*
And the flashback.. ๐Ÿ˜” I wish someday, they get to relive all those moments in present time..

And the lollipop..

Teeheee tumse aur KK se hi toh seekh rahi hoon๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Running off to the next one.. I get to read it all over again.. ๐Ÿฅณ

Thank you so much, Rittuu.. ๐Ÿค—

I love youuu for the super long comment.. even though you are so busy you took out time to write such a large comment๐Ÿ˜ณโค๏ธ





Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie

Laal ishq.. I'll be imagining flickering candles under the microscope today, for sure.. โ˜บ๏ธ


-Unres-

Awwie.. Thank you sooo much! This means a lot.. โค๏ธ

We should stop with the thank yous๐Ÿ˜† I know you well enough now and the same goes for you..โค๏ธ And you take up all my silly requests too..๐Ÿค—

Piyaaa... I just want to give her a tight bear hug! An angel, really.. ๐Ÿค—

The reunions.. Sigh! Everything about it feels so surreal.. I could actually relate to Sakshi's emotions and everyone else's too..
But what struck me here was the intensity of the bond between Aisha and Sakshi.. I had goosebumps when I read this.. Again, pata nahi kyun!

Hehehe ๐Ÿ˜ณ I wanted it to be a special moment.. a moment of friendship๐Ÿ˜ณ

And that confession to herself!

That was soo well written, with not an iota of 'fiction' stamped over it.. Penning down your emotions is the most beautiful feeling on earth.. Especially a confession of that magnitude..
Kudos to you partner! That was brilliantly written..

Haaye ni!
A love letter to her husband.. (but of course she doesn't remember it..) Ab isse zyada romantic kya hoga!
Oh wait.. Don't answer that.. Coz I know you'll probably stump me the next time.. Chaddo..


I just said no thank yous but here I am saying thank youuu againโค๏ธ
That came from the heart.. I feel rather sorry for whoever I marry in the future..bechare ko chitthi likh likh ke pareshaan kar doongi๐Ÿ˜†



It was so much fun to imagine Piya bossing over her father.. And he's simply the best too.. Wine silk shirt!


Such a *whistle podu* moment.. โค๏ธ


Teeheee the daddy-daughter moment was fun to write๐Ÿ˜ณ
Wait, I think this was my most favourite chapter that I have written he he๐Ÿ˜ƒ

And then it begins.. Laal Ishq! Clean bowled..
I am honestly at a loss of words, Rituu.. Why, pray tell me.. Kaahe! Woh toh thank god, mujhe swimming aati thi, varna Darjeeling ki sardi mein Lily pond ke andar... That too with laal ishq in the bg..



And with that, I declare myself officially insane.. Arijit and Arakshi! Marwaaogi kya?! Their subtle romance, confessions and candles..


Haaayeee I can imagine.. Laal ishq๐Ÿคช
Ok, I am off to listen to it again... I declare myself mad too๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Candles๐Ÿ˜ณ

Oh and the last bit, bwahhaa.. I could soo imagine Gundi running after you with that bloody axe.. ๐Ÿคฃ

But seriously.. โค๏ธ


I could imagine that too๐Ÿคฃ

I don't think I can concentrate on anything other than laal ishq today.. Mere samples gaye tel lene.. Aaj toh bass moonlit night and laal ishq.. And Arjunwa in the wine silk shirt..


Thank you sooo much.. ๐Ÿค—

(Will be back to read and unres the 11th one later.. ๐Ÿ˜›)
Filhaal, laal ishq time! โค๏ธ


Enjoy enjoyyy and now me off to listen to it too๐Ÿ˜ณ
Dreamland timee...oh and not to mention, I am still a bit lost in In lamhon ke daaman meinโ˜บ๏ธ


Reserved for replies๐Ÿ˜ณ
I love youuu๐Ÿค—

Repliedd๐Ÿ˜ณ
Your comments make me all happyโค๏ธ
Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu

Bhag Ritu bhaag

I can see a knife axe n punches on yr way
Escape!!
Will b back soonish if u r alive

back: ye kya hua? kaise hua??
Gb tujhe maar dalegi yaar
Action and suspense pack, something different from you
But of course it had your that spl touch in it.
Piya proved she is a junior Rawte.
Painting, Micro Sd cards, shooting, fire...
Lord.. jaldi update karo

LOL LOL LOL the shower of curses on me ๐Ÿคฃ
Mujhe kya hoga! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thanks for the commenttt.. and yaaay I hope I did justice to it..coming from you that's a huge compliment๐Ÿ˜ณ
Update karing๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Arjun ke mana karne ke baad bhi Sakshi aayi

Ye Varun itna dara dara sa kyu hain? Someone attacked them. Arjun ko goli lagi

Piya aur Sid ki nok jok tho kabi rukegi nahi

Piya found the chip jisse Sakshi ne chupaaya tha locket main

Hope Arjun is fine

Thanks a lot for the comment! Hmmm...more details on that soon!
Keep reading๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: NainaSM

Omg

Fake painting
SD card
Arakshi
Now what next agar arjun ya sakahi KO kuch bhi hua naaa
Tum gayi sys
Continue soon

Thanks soo much Naina!
Hahaha achaa aage read karo.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Awsmee update di! !!
love thiz...
piya find chip...i love little nok jhok sis nd piya...
arakshi n dsnger...
hope everythjng goes welll...
con.sooonnn!!!!!

Thanks soo much Gausiya! hehehe am continuing!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: jia03

Superb update! ๐Ÿ‘

so sakshi came to knw about the fake paintings...

But why did you stop here? I want another update ASAP! ๐Ÿ˜’

Thank youuu Jia๐Ÿค—
LOL yes updating now!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skrafty

Run away Ritu dear
because I already have a knife in my Hand๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Jokes apart
Sakshi's past seems interesting and Mysterious
Hope they are fine
can't wait more
Next update jaldi dena
else ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Hahaha I did..with the running shoes๐Ÿคฃ
But anyway, I am back with the update simply coz the knife missed me๐Ÿคช๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks for the comment! Hope u like the next part๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi

awesome

interesting update
sakshi's past seems interesting
sakshi came to know about the fake painting
piya find the chip
loved it
waiting for the next part
cont soon๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks soo much Aditi! Hope u like the next๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: shreya09

Rituuu ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

you stopped at this point ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Update soon !!! Samjhi ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
great part it was ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
& it never looked like your first attempt in writing action... it was very nicely written. well done ๐Ÿ‘
Piya got the chip !! after all she is a Rawte
very very very nice writing. waiting for the next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thank youu Shreyaa that means a lottt๐Ÿค—
EEKS itne saare dhamkis lol๐Ÿ˜† Updating nowww..

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

Cool down Farheen. Remember Arjun is shot & there is still a scope of some Kuch Kuch Hota haiโ˜บ๏ธ

& you, The writer, Ye lo along with my curses that I showered on you a while before๐Ÿ˜Ž

You and your innovative emos and curses (none of which worked btw๐Ÿ˜›)๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Hahaha I hope the next part is up to your expectations...coz your words scared me ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ehmmm...thoda zyada ho jaye toh don't blame me!๐Ÿ˜›

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

did u see that knife i throw at u ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ and that knife was not for giving less arakshi but for
stopping where u stopped arre arjun ko goli lagi and then fire par fir kya hua
so sakshi has more or less remembered everything what few things r left she will get once she reaches her home
so varun was involved in the scam or he saved sakshi as he told โ“
those gun shots did it killed varun ๐Ÿค”
oh my piyu is true daughter of police man and investigative journalist she figured out how to open the locket and now have that evidence varun was talking abt ๐Ÿ˜Ž
thanks for pm and update ASAP

Hahaha yes I did..and hence updating sooner๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
LOL so many threats..๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks a lot for the comment.. phir kya hua woh abhi pata lagega๐Ÿ˜›
And more details soon!๐Ÿ˜‰

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