SEQUEL TO RAAZ- HEART. CHAPTER 6 ON PG 9. (DISCONTINUED) - Page 3

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Chapter 3

Her laptop is busy humming nearby as a girl taps furiously on the computer. She checks her laptop and groans in frustration. Removing her glasses, she rubs her eyes and is going to put them on again, when a glass of milk comes in front of her. looking at the girl holding a glass, her face sets itself into a stone expression. riya puts the glass of milk on the table and said "drink it anjali." Anjali folds her hand across her chest and turning her back to riya said "no, I won't". riya turns her face towards her and said "why not?"

Anj: because, I am angry at you.

She smiles and asked "now, what did I do to make you angry?"

She gets up and putting her hands on her hips asks "who told you to go to the ETF office in the first place? I could have easily got the video from the backdoor to the ETF computer system."

Ri: shree was upgrading the whole security system. he would have discovered the backdoor and tracked it down to you. with me going over there, they would not know that there is a backdoor to the security system.

Anj: di, you could have created some other distraction. There was no need for you to go over there and put yourself in danger in the first place. You know that they are being watched over and could track you.

Ri: okay, sorry mom. Next time I will think twice before putting myself in danger. Pakka promise. Now drink your milk.

Anj: do I have to?

Ri: yes, now drink it.

Making a face anjali drank the milk. Riya smiles and kisses her forehead and lets her get back to work. She goes to the kitchen and washes the glass. After putting the glass to dry, she wipes her hand and sees the mark on the palm of her hand. Stroking the mark she remembers how it came to be like this in the first place.

Flashback

Savitri and raj mukherjee considered themselves the happiest people in the world. Their daughter riya and the adventure of finding a piece of history gave them tremendous joy. But today, they were a little confused. Their sweet riya was acting in a weird manner. Today, she was feeling irritated and restless as if waiting for something to happen. Putting the matter aside to check why she felt like that, they continued digging at the archaeological site they had found at jaipur. The rock had covered the entrance to the tomb of the emperor who may have been the oldest person before anyone. They move the flashlight along and riya moves along with them. with every step, riya felt something was pulling her, calling her. when savitri left riya's hand to check the writing on the wall, riya immediately ran down the tunnel with her parents calling behind her. she did'nt stop and continuously ran until she fell. The ground trembled and the way from which she came from was blocked with a wall coming down covering the only way she could get out. but riya did'nt worry, she went towards the call and found that she had reached a room. glancing around the whole room was empty, barren. Nothing covering the walls. Her curious mind wonders why in such an important find, there is no writing. She hears the call again and moves in that direction and enters another room, this one holding a tomb. As she approaches her sense of fulfillment, wonderment enters her being. She slowly becomes aware of entering into a trance and shook herself out of it. cautiously, she climbs up the platform holding the tomb. Before, she could touch the cover of the tomb slowly opens to the side revealing the skeleton of a man his hands folded in a cross manner across his chest. There are two places where there were supposed to be eyes. His robes seemed to have decomposed along with him with pieces clinging to his body here and there. But what caught riya's eyes was the necklace. The necklace was thick, silver colour not even an inch of rust covering it. the pendant was a butterfly in shape with a bright blue colour seemed to have made out of something which gave it the ability to glow brightly. Wonderstruck, riya put her hand on the necklace and felt a sharp burn on the palm. Giving a cry, she was going to remove her hand when the skeleton caught her hand and from where there was supposed to be a mouth whispered "protect it."

Flashback ends

Riya snaps out of her thoughts hearing her cellphone ring. flipping it to see whose call it was, she became confused and picks up the call. But as she hears what is being said her expression slowly turns to one of anger. The glass she had kept to dry shatters with a silent sound. She then said "okay." And cut the call and walks out of the room with the shattered pieces again joining itself into a glass.
sorry guys no pm this time. my exams have arrived so i am just posting the update. hope you like the update and please comment or hit the like button.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its wonderful update dear
does she took that necklace
eagerly waiting to know what happened next
please continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
interesting
eagerly waiting to know what happened next
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting continue soon dear
Eagerly waiting for read
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Chapter 4

The door opened with a force as riya walked inside, the air heating around her with her anger. The man barely looked up as the door closed by itself. Riya stood in the center of the room her hands balled into fist and the air becoming hotter and hotter. The man calmly said "you better watch your powers riya. And cool the air down."

Ri: why?

He looks up at her and just looks.

Ri: why did you set aisha as bait?

Man: I never set aisha as bait.

Ri: don't you dare lie to me mr samrat kashyap. Why would they kidnap aisha if she is of no use to them?

Sam: I told you I never set her up as bait. Why would I? she is of no use.

Riya wanted to grab his shirt and wrung him but instead she shattered the glass vase seated on the table near the window. samrat calmly looked at it and said "too bad. I really liked that vase."

Ri: I am going in and getting her out.

She spun and the door opened but the next instant it shut. The locks got engaged and she turned to see samrat still seating on the chair staring calmly at her.

Sam: no you are not. I have already fulfilled your ridiculous wish of setting your ETF team on the sikander trail. Now you are no more going to interfere in their business. How they handle it is their problem.

She stalks towards the table and placing her hand on the table she leaned towards him and said "if you think that I am going to let them die, think again. It is my problem. samjhe ya samjhau?"

She walks towards the door when samrat said "you do know that they would be much better off if they are injected?"

Her hand froze on the doorknob.

Sam: you have to only give your permission riya and they would be made into the most powerful people in the world. And who better knows the extent of power than you?

Ri: who better knows the cost of that power than me?. she turned. "do you think that I enjoy having this power. Do you think that I enjoy shattering things. Even I don't know the extent of the damage I have done or will do. And you think that I will expose them to the biggest curse in this life. Then think again."

Sam: when are you going to start trusting us riya.

Ri: the day you start having a heart.

And she stalks out of the room with samrat staring at her back morosely.

After 6 hrs,

Her eyes started paining from looking through the binoculars for a long time. Removing her binoculars, she rubs her eyes and whisperes into the microphone "karan, you are on standby. Until I give the signal don't come looking for me."

Kar: I give you 1 hr. if you are not back within that time. I am coming in.

Ri: karan.

Kar: 1 hr riya. No arguments.

Ri: simran, tell your boyfriend to stop hovering over me.

Sim: its his job honey to hover over you. and he's right also. this place gives me the creeps. Remind me again why can't we destroy this place.

Kar: because then it will send them all over our backs which we cannot afford right now.

Sim: right point.

Ri: if both of your bak-bak has stopped, then let me tell you that a car has just passed through the gates. From the silhouette I can tell it's a girl. I am going in.

Kar: riya, please be careful. Its not safe. You can still change your mind.

Ri: I am going in karan. Wish me luck.

Sim: luck.

Riya followed the jeep jumping from one tree to another. The jeep seemed to be running at a high speed as if it is trying to escape from someone. It then stops at the edge of the cliff and a girl steps out. she removed her hair from her cap and thick curly hair fell down. Riya started to have a sickening feeling from seeing the hair. The girl breathes the hair as if she had'nt been breathing it for a long time. Riya jumps from the tree without any noise but the girl spins around her gun at the ready. Both of them gasp.

Ri: aisha

Ais: riya.

The next second the smell that came to riya made her think "oh no please not her too."

Precap: riya's fear came true.


next update after 30th october. please comment or hit the like button.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Awesome updates...
What's going on???😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What's going on???😕
superb
loved it
thnx 4 pm
cont soon
jeharshu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Its wonderful update dear
Nd please do continue soon
Eagerly waiting to read more
Nd thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohh.. the girl on the chair was aisha..😛
but in trust... how is the cctv footage of aisha can b true?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update..
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm

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