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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Superb start
i would say ek nayi subha is my choice of title
thnks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
So time for update
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Next day riya comes to ETf there she saw arjun is running behind roshni and roshni is having a plate of samosa and chutney in her hand

Arjun- roshni stop right there woh samosa mera hai tu aapna wala pehle hi khaa chuki hai
Roshni- so what jiski laati usski bhees ( buffalo)
Arjun- ok tu bufaalo rakh le pr samosa mujhe de de
Roshni- nhi chahiye mujhe bufaalo tu hi rakh i am not going to give samosa

Suddenly roshni stop running seeing riya but from behind arjun was coming in full speed toh roshni ko dhakka lg gya aur plate mein se thori si chutney neeche gir gyi

Riya shouted- yeh kya kiya!!!!!!
arjun to roshni- dekha!!!!! mene toh pehle hi mana kiya tha mt bhag daat pari na
Riya- roshni ko nhi tujhe daat rhi hui arjun
Roshni to arjun- ab dekha!!!!!! kisko kitni daat pari
arjun- pr yeh saaf kone karega
Roshni-arjun
rIYA LAUGHED
Arjun- what?????
Roshni- ab ETF ka chief chaaru pocha marega office mein

Roshni and riya laughed
Arjun- NO kabhi nhi!!!
Roshni put plate on side table then arjun aur roshni fighting 4 samosa then sakshi comes and scretlty eats samosa

arjun saw- saku ki bachi tujhe chorunga nhi mein
Sakshi- pehle pakaad ke toh dikha
Arjun- nhi pakaad pakaadai toh sirf roshni ke sath khelne mein mazaa aata hai
riya attend a call then she goes from spot
sakkshi- haan bol toh aise rha hai jese roshni pata nhi ho aur Etf ka chief hai fir bhibacho wale game khelne hai
kya lgti
Arjun- my best friend forever and ever got it!!!! hena roshni
Roshni lost in her own world- haan
Arjun- kha dhyaan hai tera
Roshni- kuch nhi

Then sakshi and roshni chatted and then arjun goes to riya
Riya- hi
Arjun- i love u
Riya- me too
Arjun- so what about taking our relation on next level
Riya- means?????
Arjun sat on his one knee with a rose in his hand- I love You will u marry me?
Riya shocked but happy too that time riya was not able to think anything else-yes

riya took rose and then arjun hugged him

then finished for next part do leave feedback becoz i am writing 1 st time on ariya
give me any suggestions if i made any mistake

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Its lovely update dear
Arjun's bond with everyone was nice
Arni nd Arakshi nok-joks was awesome
and the way of Arjun proposing to Riya was lovely
Nd she accepted his proposal
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon dear
Next time please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
loll I thought u forgot abt this ff
anyway finally got update im very much happy 😃 😃
wow arjun propose riya for marriage ❤️ ❤️
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Nice concept.

Please continue.

Story title- " EK NAYI SUBAH ".
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Yes I liked the story title-EK NAYI SUBAH
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Nice Sheru dear
Samosa fight was so good
hmm so Arjun loves riya
let see aage kya hota hai
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
glad tht it is an ariya story. n and he proposed so sweetly wow arjun.
thank you very much for this is nice update and update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
thanks for pm
nice story
but riya ko kuch math karna
relation between ariya,rosh and sakshi is good
i think ek nayi subah will nice title

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