ARAKSHI: INTEZAAR (part 9 B) pg 32 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rehana25




Sorry dear to keep you all waiting
But good news wait will be finish soon
I am back and update my story soon


EAGERLY WAITING DEAR
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashmijoseph



<font size="2" color="#990099">EAGERLY WAITING DEAR</font>



Oh god please
Itna bhi na chaho Kay dum nikal jaiy
UFf yeah mohabbatain
Thanks dear
I will back soon
Inshahallah
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rehana25



Oh god please
Itna bhi na chaho Kay dum nikal jaiy
UFf yeah mohabbatain
Thanks dear
I will back soon
Inshahallah


I am waiting as well 😉

But take your own time dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rehana di where r u missing ur update very badly
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI

Rehana di where r u missing ur update very badly



Sorry dear
Stuck in many things
Can't make to come
Even though no time to active on forum
But inshahallah back soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rehana25



Sorry dear
Stuck in many things
Can't make to come
Even though no time to active on forum
But inshahallah back soon


OK COME BACK SOON DEAR 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago





PART 9 A

After leaving arjun for sometime sakshi feel sad but soon basanti pull her out for sad feeling...sakshi start doing household work with the help of basanti. Sakshi never did household work before...her interest is only in cooking and decorating house but now she understand how to clean the house...how to do dusting...sweeping...moping...washing dishes. Under basanti instruction she starts doing work in home...basanti stop her doing things but sakshi refuse her ...she want herself keep busy...after all she has to do something for time being.

Two days gone, sakshi misses arjun badly but thankful basanti who always try to keep her busy whole day but at night when she go to bed sakshi miss arjun badly...his fragrance, his touch, his strong arms, his broad chest...everything make her restless and whole night she tossing on her bad and god know when sleep catch her.

Sakshi know arjun safely reach on Mumbai and her dad is also safe but after that she get no news about them...sakshi brush up all thought and get busy in different works.

village woman accept sakshi presence in their village...they all give her respect and love...they all like this beautiful girl and her handsome husband...village people accept this perfect couple with open heart...after arjun leaving house in that morning...whole village pay extra care for her...sakshi have many visitors...yes, many village woman and girls...finish their house hold work they gather at sakshi place...sakshi best place her swing...which is situated in her entrance...she is swinging there and enjoy talking with village woman...who sitting near her on floor doing embroidery and making different handmade items.

Sakshi like this simple village life...far from city life...she enjoy interact with simple woman...they all sitting near her...share many things...sorrow, pain, happiness, laugh, tears...sakshi listen most but when she talk...everyone become quiet...just listen her sweet voice...sakshi like those all woman love for her...

Every day, sakshi goes with basanti to fill his house tank with water...goes outside river and fill her mutka with fresh water then empty in her water tank...this work is really hard and tough for every woman but village woman use to do this...sakshi see them holding three mutka at a time on their head...sakshi goes with basanti but only once she hold one mutka and half way she can't manage and that mutka slip from her hand and broke.

Sakshi: oh my god, yeah toh toot gaya (she feel shame)

Basanti: koi baat nahi chalay hum aur buy kar laitay hain (she console sakshi and took her hand and goes to one house)

Sakshi see that is same like village kaccha house but that house ground fill with many mutka...some are plain and some are decorated with many dark colours and give beautiful effect...one side one woman sitting and busy making another mutka...sakshi sitting near her and see her making beautifully mutka and bowl with that tool...soon, that woman finish and sakshi buy two mutka from her one decorated and one plain...sakshi like the way she make mutka.


sakshi: didi...aap hum ko bhi teach karain gi (she ask)

Woman: haan kyun nahi...bi bi ji...jab aap kahain (she reply)

Sakshi become happy and promise her that she come every day for some time and learn how to make pots and bowl. Sakshi really like the village woman courage and the way they work...she feel they are out of world...like in these days when the world standing on up position but in her country some places has same problem...and they live life like in old days.

Days pass in quiet good manners...then one day sakshi come to know that basanti sing nice and she has one bamboo flute (musical instrument)...sakshi ask her to bring that...basanti bring that and play one beautiful song on it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ThnEHtK64QQ

becharay bhi toh hum bas kal parso

jioon gi main kaisay iss haal main barso

honton pay aai hay duhai...haye

lambi judai...char dino ka pyar o rabba...

bari lambi judai...lambi judai

sakshi heart goes deep down...basanti flute tune disturb her...shake her from inside to outside...flute sad tone make her restless...she count the days when she live without him...it almost 15 days gone...in these days she try her best but last two days she is very disturb...she miss arjun more than any other days...

Today, basanti flute make her more restless...sakshi laying on bed lazily...she don't feel hungry and don't feel to participate in any other usual activity which she was doing last 13 14 days...she don't want basanti to stay with her...she send her back home...sakshi want to be alone...she want to live in those moment which she spend with arjun...although that moment is not very long but sakshi feel alive in those moment.

It's almost midnight, when sakshi leave the bed and come out from her room...some time she stand in front room window then realize that today is full moon night...she decide to go up on the roof and enjoy the night with arjun memories...open the roof gate she become happy to see the whole area cover with moon light...walk slowly and enjoy the light...standing near the edge of roof...

she look down...whole village area sink in beautiful white and silver light...cover in deep silence...sakshi hear a beautiful voice comes from far...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdqkN95Y5QE

Aye dil e nadan...aye dil e nadan

aarzo kiya hay... justuju kiya hay

Aye dil e nadan...

Hum bhataktay hain...

Kyun bhataktay hain...

Dasht o sahra main...

Aisa lagta hay moj piyasi hay apnay darya main

Kaissi uljhan hay...

Kyun yeah uljhan hay...

Ek saaya sa rubaru kiya hay...

Aye dil e nadan...

Aarzo kiya hay...

justaju kiya hay...

sakshi heart start questioning for her...why she become restless...is she really miss him...is she really accept arjun as her husband...she know that her dad judgement is always right...he chose arjun after reject many proposal...and arjun prove sakshi that he is best...those days when they live together but he never cross his limit...although sakshi accept the fact that he have full right on her but he didn't use his right to force her and fulfil his wish...he stand on his words...sakshi feel so low herself...she is irritate on his behaviour...she want him...is she really ready for him...these thought make storm in her mind...make more desperate her...she become irritate for her own feeling.

kiya qayamat hay...kiya museebat hay

keh nahi saktay jiss ka armaan hay

zindagi jaisay khoi khoi hay...

hairan hairan hai...

yeah zameen chup hay...

asman chup hay...

phir yeah dharkan si char su kiya hay

aye dil e nadan...

aissi rahoon main kitnay kaantay hain

aarzoo nay har kissi dil ko dard baantay hain

kitnay gayal hain...

kitnay bismal hain...

iss khudai main ek toh kiya hay

aye dil e nadan...aye dil e nadan

sakshi heart become that song voice...she leaning herself with half wall of roof...her lips singing with that song voice...when it finish...sakshi feel more down herself...she desperately want arjun...she miss him badly.

sakshi: oh god...yeah humain kiya ho raha hay...aaj hum ko arjun ki itni yaad kyun aa rahi hay...oh god, please sab kuch theek rakhna...un ko apni hifazat main rakhna...un ko kuch bhi na ho...warna hum mar jaiy gay...

sakshi close her eyes...sitting on the floor...joining her both palms...unknown of her tears...who start rolling down...she deeply busy in her pray...her restlessness on peak at this time...she unaware of surrounding.

Suddenly, one warm touch wipe her rolling tears and two pair of strong arms pull her in his tight embrace...sakshi lose her connection and feel some one arms around her slender waist...she comes in sense and before she push that person and scream...she feel very familiar fragrance...she touches him...is he in real...or she is imagining...but no he is real... she whisper...arjun.

this part going big

so i split it into two part

i update soon

but do comments

happy reading

thanks

rehana25

Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res before pm
Unres
What acute update
Sakshi is trying to get mix in the village atmosphere soon
N doing all the household works .
But missing Arjuna very badly
N the basanti,s song make her more desperate
But I love the lyrics of the song
N in the end I knew it will be Arjuna who touches her tears
Wonderful update
Continue soon rehang di
Keep giving us your updates
Edited by NATURESHIVANI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sakshi tried different means to keep herself busy

She tried it for 13 to 14 days. Basanti took her outside the house.

Sakshi saw how mutka is made. She used to bring water

But after listening to flute Sakshi's restleness increased. She missed Arjun very badly. She realized her feelings for Arjun. She had already accepted Arjun as her husband

Arjun came back. Wow! tht's a great news.
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Posted: 11 years ago
chalo... will read next part... phir ek saath comment! :D

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