ARAKSHI: INTEZAAR (part 9 B) pg 32

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hello
my dears readers...i write this story very long time ago...as i inspire of one song...that song comes in next part may be...I love that song very much...so, use it...
but I feel resemblance with easha story
so, I stop doing upload
then make little bit change
but again my thought crash with easha
i am surprise...how it possible?
but I think we love and care each other
that's why our thought match
or like easha say
kumb kay melay may bechri hui behnay hain
any way...because easha push me to upload
this story...so, I do it...today
I don't know how many parts of this story
i just stop in middle but now I try to finish it soon
I hope that you like my this story
like others
I am waiting for your comments
thanks

INTEZAAR PART 1




Full green lashes garden fill with flowers and decoration lights...uniform waiters roaming around holding drinks and starter trays...city high gentry gathers here...women and men wore beautiful dresses...holding drinks glasses in their hands...busy talking with each other...this is the welcoming party of new appointed chief of police...everyone very curiously waiting for him...actually, not only for him but waiting for his daughter...as nobody see his daughter before...only few people get this opportunity to see his only daughter and they said that she is nymph...she is not attending any party but today she definitely comes.

ETF also present here...not only ETF but sameer mom and dad as well...because sameer dad is a well known business man and friend of MR ANAND MALHOTRA...chief of police... mr anand is also very rich man...his ancestor leave many property and wealth but mr anand love his country and want to serve his life for his country ...that's why he choose police force...and join the force but his friendship with sameer dad is very old...

arjun and sameer are the best friend and buddy...as arjun mom and dad died few years ago...then sameer parents make him his own son and arjun never feel that he is orphan...today, both standing and discussing new appointed chief...and recall their memory when they work under him and always idealize him...yes, both ACP idealize mr anand and like him very much...so, like others they also very curious to meet him.

At last, waiting time is finish and one black Lexus with tinted glasses comes and stop in entrance...all press photographers and host quickly move towards the entrance...getting ready garlands and their camera...car stop...first Mr Anand comes out...many flash light flashes and in a minute he feel that he is blind...he stop and wait...when cameras quiet...then he turn and raise his hand inside the car...everyone sight fix on that...one creamy hands hold his hand and one creamy and delicate foot comes out from car...capture in black high heal sandals...arjun stop to see that foot...

arjun think...jiss kay paoon itnay khubsurat hain ...tu woh khud kaissi hogi.

He can't wait long and he see that personality completely comes out...wearing pure black long anarkali frock...tight on her waist and wide on her daman...with hit of silver thread and stone work...big chiffon duppata have silver corners...and plain silver choori daar pyjama... Silver jhumkiyaun...silver ankles...silver bangles...her long hairs open and comes on her waist...she apply only kajal and lip gloss...but she look awesome...standing holding with her dad arm...she look marvellous that every camera and person statue...they forget to click their cameras.

Arjun admit that she is really the owner of breath taking beauty...for the first time in his life he feel his heart beat disturb...and some strange emotion heading up in his heart...he snap...when host come forward and welcoming them.

Everyone just back in present and camera starts flashing again...start blinking...arjun easily see that poor girl is a bit irritate with these flash lights...and try to avoid the reporters cameras and their bombing question...her wide and doe shape eyes...remind arjun one innocent deer...who feel herself around wolves...arjun feel pity on her.

Party host welcoming and take them inside...she is taking step with her dad...maybe her dad sense her confusion and he said something in her ear...she looks him like helpless...when he nodded like assure her for something...she composed herself and pass smile...her smile is beautiful like her...arjun mind said...he admit and feel lose his heart...shocked his heart wish...he become puzzle...this all happening with him very first time in his life...he brush up everything and join sameer...arjun eyes follow her everywhere...she find some her age group girls...so talking with them...dinner start and everyone having food while talking with each other's...finishing dinner...they are enjoying soft drinks...some have alcohol in their hands.

Sameer and arjun talking with some his senior then Mr anand join them...and meet them happily...both ACP surprise that he remember him very well...both feel very proud himself that his ideal personality remember them...soon, only trio talking to each other then arjun see that beauty queen comes.

Girl: papa (mr anand turn to her side...and smile...she said in slow voice) papa...kitna time hogaya hay...ab hum chalaiy...ya phir aap kaka ko kah daiy kay humain chor aain...please...papa (talking in very innocent way...and saying herself hum...she look so adorable that arjun steal his gaze...and change his sight)

Mr anand: haan ek minute...pehlay in say tu milo...yeh meray sab say acchay student and junior hain (he introduce them with her) ACP ARJUN AND ACP SAMEER...aur guys...yeah meri ekloti baiti hay SAKSHI...SAKSHI ANAND.

Sakshi join palm and said: Namaste (both ACP shake their head and accept her greet...when mr anand said)

Anand: yeh sameer hay...sakshi, tum ko yaad hay...jai pur walay rathod uncle...abhi un say milay bhi thay (sakshi nodded...he said) yeh un kay baitay hain.

Sakshi: humain aap say mil kay bohat khushi hui...aap kay dad bohat acchay insaan hain...hum abhi un say bhi milay hain(she innocently tell sameer)

Sameer: thank you... (before he say something more someone call him...he excuse and go...while anand sahib busy talking with someone...arjun and sakshi stand with each other...sakshi look here there then arjun said)

Arjun: tu... aap painting karti hai (he speak and start talking with her)

Sakshi: aap ko kaisay pata (she surprised)

Arjun: my guess... (Looking her and leave incomplete)

Sakshi: accha...aur kiya kiya guess kiya hay aap nay humaray baray main (she shows interest)

Arjun: agar aap ko bura na lagay toh bata sakta hoon (he said and increase her interest level)

Sakshi: aur aap ko aisa kyun laga kay hum bura maan jaiy gay (she ask in innocent way...with flattered her eyes)

Arjun: iss liay kay aap ko kissi ka bhi apni personal life main interfere karna pasand nahi hay (he clear her habit...which amaze her)

For the first time...sakshi notice him and look him in detail...wearing two piece black dinner suit with white crisp shirt and black and white tie...hair settle in good style...tall and owner of well toned muscles...sakshi feel his two intense eyes fix on her...pure and innocence pair of eyes...she impress for his personality...off course, he has proudly owner of charming and dashing personality...can't be ignore so easily...arjun raise his brow and sakshi back in presence and said

Sakshi: nahi aap kahain...hum apka guess janna chahtay hain (she gives permission)

Arjun: ok, tu phir sunay...aap ko painting ka junon ki hadh tak shuaq hay...aur yeh bhi kay aap best sketcher hain...am I right?

Sakshi: right...everything right...I must say that you are truly genius but kindly can you tell me that how come you know me...ya phir aap humain pehlay say hi jantay thay (she asks in soft way)

Arjun: nahi...main nay aaj pehli dafa aap ko dekha hay (he admit)

Sakshi: tu phir itna sahi guess (she still on doubt on him)

Arjun: aap ko junnon ki hadh tak painting ka shauq hay...aap kay nails nay bataya (he point on her nails...sakshi look her nails and find some paints on it...she smile) aap yahan aanay say pehlay bhi kuch paint kar rahi thi... ek larki jo party may aanay kay liay tayyar ho rahi ho...uss waqt painting ka kiya matlab...zahir si baat hay...woh apka junoon hay...aur junoon ka koi time nahi hota...right...phir aap ki fingers...(he again point out her long and slender fingers) a perfect painter fingers...and clearly show to anyone that you do painting and the way you hold the pen and sign...like sketcher do and mainly when that person give you your sketch...the expression on your face clearly said that you don't like it but you accept like don't want break his heart...you accept and decide do some correction on your own...your expression clearly show your thought...hhmmm (he clear and look her...she is hearing everything with open mouth and wide eyes...flattered her eyes...she can't utter a word)

Just then sameer interrupt and start asking other things with sakshi...they all chit chat...sakshi stand with her dad quietly and enjoy their talking...until then sakshi dad call his driver and ready to go home...sakshi and her dad say bye to their host and others...they about to go...driver open car door and wait for them to sit...sakshi just stop for a moment...turn and look arjun for once in detail look then pass him her gorgeous smile...unknowingly arjun lips spread and he smile in return...sakshi and her dad leave the premises.

i finish part here

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Rehana it's aweosme yaar.
Loved it.
Venue is soo good.
And those feet..
Kash yeh mere pair hote.
Dress was lovely.
Sakshi is a painter and moreover their mentor's daughter.
Arjun ji ladki patana start kar hi dya..LOL.
But the detection was awesome.
He did it just like a magician.
And at last Sakshi throw a smile that was mind blowing.
Con soonish..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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arre wah
lovely
kya yaar arjun to pura latto ho gaya
pataofuing sakhsi
cool loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Hey Rehana it's aweosme yaar.

Loved it.
Venue is soo good.
And those feet..
Kash yeh mere pair hote.
Dress was lovely.
Sakshi is a painter and moreover their mentor's daughter.
Arjun ji ladki patana start kar hi dya..LOL.
But the detection was awesome.
He did it just like a magician.
And at last Sakshi throw a smile that was mind blowing.
Con soonish..


thanks yaar
sakshi role a bit different here
when story move then you all know
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arjun pehle he impress kar diya sakshi ko
awesome start
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start
arjun with no past and sakshi a painter
arjun being supercop noticed things abt sakshi and talked to her and made good impression on her
arjun guess has fallen in love with her
i have one question for u rehana why in all ur stories sakshi is this fair g beautiful girl with long hair
innocent eyes a very shy girl and always wearing indian outfittes 😛 not that i have any problem with it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start...
Pics were...😃😃😃
Arjun lost on seeing her...😆😆😆
Arjun judged her very correctly...😉😉😉
Sakshi also liked him...😉😉😉
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwsssmmm start
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Loved Arakshi convo...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice start
arjun with no past and sakshi a painter
arjun being supercop noticed things abt sakshi and talked to her and made good impression on her
arjun guess has fallen in love with her
i have one question for u rehana why in all ur stories sakshi is this fair g beautiful girl with long hair
innocent eyes a very shy girl and always wearing indian outfittes 😛 not that i have any problem with it
thanks for pm



Because I look like the same with Asian dresses
And long hair with big eyes
SYS
Hahahaha

I am the symbol of Bangla beauty
Although I am not Bangladeshi and my skin colour no very fair but fair enough with hint of pink
And yes because I am also a shy and reserve person
So I portrait sakshi character same
Woh kahtay hain na writer ki personality
Uss ki writing mein nazar aati hay
So you know me
Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago

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