FF: ASTITVA - STRUGGLE FOR EXISTENCE PT. 9 PG. 101

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

brilliant update dear

it was too good

loved iteagerly waiting 4 next part

con. soon

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harshijeshnu

@harshijeshnu

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

love the update..

it's really awesome..

ohh my god what kind of people...

they're disgusting..

i dont like Riya's father..

Arjun is really caring for Riya..

waiting for the next update..

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607
Wow! Superb wala update!
Loved the new characters...
Ri's past...still shady...but her family cut her off...7 she also avoids that topic..anyways loved Arjun's concern for her... he took her side! Good!

Aisha's lif is also a mystery..not only for us but for the team also...shadi chupana tak toh thik hain..6yrs ka boy!! well...let it be.
Rathod...I hope he'll reach there soon.

do continue..& thanks for PM.

Thanks Atisha dear

Glad u liked it

Well about aisha why she was doing this will be shown in next part her marrige kabir every thing wil be cleared & regarding riya some more things coming on the way so thodawait karo

stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: farana786
first of all new cs are amazing
lovely update
sad n suprising
beautifully written goldie n sneha

secondly yeh arjun aur rathod toh haath hokar ayesha ke piche par gaye uski past n family ke baare mei jaane ke liye
what? when arjun told riya ayesha is married n hav a son she was shocked n told arjun ayesja is single
akhir ayesha ka chakkar kiya hai

aur idhar why were rias friends were dusgusted seein her n askd her dota why she bot ria there
aejun was confused
why were riyas father saying bad things ti riya
was she also raped? or brutually assaulted.
di m getting frighten for riya poor her
img arjun was shocked n suprised hearung bad words from riyas father when riya told him it was her fathee

loved ta way arjun stood for riya

thnks for pm darling
cont soon

Thanks Farhana dear

well first its not sneha she edits its by me & rimi 😆

I think what samjun are doing is justified yadi aisha nahin batayeg to wo kaise madat kaenge uski ? & well she has not told anyone about all this

About riya her friends support her dear but their parents are doing this ur all questions will be answered soon

stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld
brilliant update dear
it was too good
loved iteagerly waiting 4 next part
con. soon

Thanks Dear Shreyanshi

Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: harshijeshnu
love the update..
it's really awesome..
ohh my god what kind of people...
they're disgusting..
i dont like Riya's father..
Arjun is really caring for Riya..
waiting for the next update..

Thanks Dear harshi

Glad u liked it

Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

nice update new cs is nice and why riya
parents and her friends parents treat her
like this update soon

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 33

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

awesome concept di

loved it

the poem was fantastic..prologue was mindblowing..beautiful banner

ch 1

loved the team's convo about their bosses..sab rathod ke baare me kitna sochte he..so sweet of them..

rathod ki gf-kaam aur mooche😆 loved aisha's concern for sam..she helped him too😃

omg!!yeh kya tha..aisha ko dhamki..itni danger tarike se..😲ye karanveer singh koun he..loved rathod's concern too..sab aisha ke ghar n aisha missing😲 ab aage kya hoga?? very interesting update😊

ch 2

captivating update di..finally aisha safe n sound..aisha ne dhamki ko lightly nahi liya par aisa dikha rahi he..

sam annoyed..loved his n arjun's concern..😃..riya ke saath arjun ne accha mazaak kiya..bechari ri shocked😆..etf ne case acche se handle kiya..oh! aisha hurt😭😭..sam ko bacha liya😊..owner ne to badi asani se sab ugal diya..arjun ke dar se😆last me ek aur jhatka..aisha ka baccha😲loved the kid..so adorable..sam ko kitna bada heart attack aaya hoga😲😉😆

ch 3

sam at aisha's house..bechara abhi tak shock mode par he😆..loved kabir's concern for aisha..😃itne chote bacche ko hostel me..aisha n anvesha's convo was sweet😃..new case..psychopath killer..😲

very interesting..ri ke saath kya hua hoga ye hum guess kar sakte he..uski friend acchi he..some more secrets to be revealed..do case ek saath solve ho rahe he..ek ho gaya ab dusra..is story me sab ke pasts he na..waiting for revealations😊do soon

ch 4

riya ka past bahot horrible hone wala he..priyani is such a sweetheart😃loved samjun's convo..both r caring for their team very nicely..sam is helping aisha😃wow..ariya convo..superb..ri shocked to know about aisha's marriage..hona bhi chahiye..aap to sabko 440 watt ke jhatke diye jaa rahi ho..ab yeh kya..ruhi..very sweet..par uske dad..he is very angry at her..loved arjun's reaction..sasha..the silence between them..bolna kab sikhoge sam😈 n now..aisha ke ghar me koi ghusa he zabardasti..i guess i know who is he..ab agli update ka intezaar he..jaldi update karo..can't wait..aisha ka past reveal hoga..i just wanna know what i guessed was correct or not..interesting story..very captivating

continu soon😛

thankx for pms😃