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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
felt nice to see liza after so much time
so now all r in delhi and they have shifted to safe place anticipating that sikki's boss will try to kill them all and now they r trying to collect the clues as to who is he
nita dropped the car bomb at CID office 😲but why she is toh sakshi's very good friend
aww shree wanted to go with liza 😆
arjun wants his wife to eat and rest properly on time soo cute
and karan teasing him for this 😉
bhai arjun ko abhi sab ke samne toh asse hi romance karna padega 😉
thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
I know you are waiting for next update.I will update it by tommorow morning.Here is a small assignment for you if you likeI am giving list of the team tell me what opinion you had on each and thier expertise you feel.
Sameer(level headed and eligible leadre with good moral and combat skills,loves his team and duty.little dumb in real life values)
Arjun(Hot headed ,strategic minded,great figter,loves evryone in team but fears to express, good husband and friend)
Shree(good friend .techy freak,good fighter and little emotional)
Ayesha (cool headed.good friend,disguise expert,clue collecter,good fighter.can hide her emotions)
Chotu(brawny,good friend,and emotional,pride of strength and team worker)
Liza(chirpy,and energetic and intelligent)
Anoop (disguise expert,stealth fighter and prankster and wonderful driver and of endless energy)
Raaji(emotional,good fighter,expert in shooting,loves her team)
Sakshi(too many qualities cant list)
Karanveer/Karan(good leader,cool headed,expert fighter,team worker)
Abhiram(same as Anoop)
Sonali(Little naughty,but good fighter and code breaker if encouraged)
Maya(techy freak and naughty ,good team worker)
Ashok(brawny and fighter and team worker)
Shekar(brawny,fighter and team worker with full of contacts and network)
Alok (Good driver,fighter and fun loving and dudy loving)
Rajeev.(same as Alok)
Ranveer(hot headed and mission minded loves to lead but loves his team)


In bracket my opinion share your opinion.Copying and silent reading is strictly banned.
Above crime is punishable by act 420 of vc's act of conduct and punishment is severe .

I am dreaming my dream track now and will share my dream with you by morning.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice buddy..
bt character scatch starting me hota hai... 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Nice buddy..
bt character scatch starting me hota hai... 🤣


I am not introducing them.I am just asking what comes to your mind listening that name in your imagination.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM



I am not introducing them.I am just asking what comes to your mind listening that name in your imagination.


honestly don't know..
I said before opinions mujhse bekaar koi nai de sakta.. 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 26

Scene starts in forensic lab where Shree and Liza were waiting for the report.Liza was looking at shree continuously she has almost tears in her eyes.

Shree "Kyaa ho gaya aisey kyo ghor rahee hon?"

Liza "Stupid tumney mujhey phone karkey bataaya naheen kit um zinda hon.Tumhey patha hain mujhey kaisey lag raha tha yeh sunkar tum zinda naheen hon."

Shree "Arjun sir ka order thaa main kaisey daal saktha hun."

Liza "Arjun sir ka kyaa,who tho hummesha orders detey rahatey hain unko naa pyaar ka kadar naa doosro ka."

Shree "Liza yeh suno hummare poorey team ka jaan Arjun sir key wajaha sey bachey hain hume ney issliye kisse ko contact naheen kiya jab thak situation control mey naa aye."

Liza "Unko kyaa patha chalega kee main kaisey feel karongi jab tummhara marney ka news sunna pada."

Shree "Arjun sir acche sey samajhtey hain pyaar key baarey mey shaayad tumsey jyaada.Arjun sir ussey situation mey they Sakshi almost death bed mey thee do din pehley."

Liza "Sakshi aur Arjun sir?"

Shree "Mainey bataya naheen naa.Arjun sir ney Sakshi ko transfer karvaaya tha yaad hain"

Liza "Han yaad hain .Uss din Sakshi kitna royee thee."

Shree "Ussey din Arjun sir aur Sakshi ney shaadi karley.Distance relationship maintain kar rahey they ek saal thak."

Liza "What ?Sakshi ney humey bathaya kyon nahee?"Shocked

Shree "Humey bhee yaha aaney key baad patha chala.Janthee hon Sakshi abh maa banne walee hain."

Liza "Mujhey Aabhee Sakshi sey milnaa hain aur usska kaan pakadkar sorry kehelaana hain."happy and super excited.

Shree "Hum base jaakar milengey."

Both Shree and Liza waited for report and left to base after receiving it.

In base Ranveer and Abhinav come to meet Arjun and team.

Abhinav "Arjun ghar mey mujhey joo saaman mila who bomb banaaney ka thaaa."

Arjun "Aur kuch."

Abhinav "Mera experience sey yeh kehsakta hun kee ussney aisey total then bomb banaaya hain."

Ranveer "Ussney kissey admee sey bar mey milla tha uske baad sey who gayab thaa."

Sameer "Shayad ussey ney bomb banaaney key liye kaha hooga."

Shree and Liza coming at same time.

Liza "Right sir,report key hissab sey ussey slow poison diyya gayaa tha who bhee daaru key saath milaa huaa tha."

Karan "humey uss insaan ko pakadna hoga"."Ranveer tumney usska koi photo ya sketch banaaya."

Ranveer "Han mainey banaaya ."showing him some sketch.

All look at him but they din't find any clue as they have never seen him.

Anoop and Abhiram come there at same time.

Abhi "Sir,mujhey pataa hain who kahan hain."

All become happy knowing that and relived thay got some lead.

Anoop "Sir who Nita key office key pass mey ghar ka nazar rakha huan hain."

Sameer "Shayad uss ghar mey who log hai aur who admee bahar sey unpar nazar rakh raha hain kee koi aye tho usey alert kar sakey."

Arjun "Mujhey lag rahan hain kee .doosra bomb uss ghar mey hain.Lekin hum kuch naheen kar saktey."

Ranveer "Kyon?"

Karan "Kyon kee hum zinda naheen hain.Aur tum log check karney jaongey tho who log doosra blast kar saktey hain."

Sameer "Uss office mey hazaaro log kaam karthey hain.'Speak Up' community key liyen.Sab log ka jaan hum khatare mey naheen daal saktey."

All are thinking what to do.

Arjun "pehley humey confirm karnaa hooga keybomb hain ya naheen.Shree mujhey ek device chahiye."

Shree "Kaisey sir."

Arjun "Humey pathaa karnaa hooga key bomb ghar key andhar hain yaa naheen.Humey bomb key saarey details patha hain.Issliye yeh try karoo key humey 100 m distance sey patha chalnaa hain ke bomb hain ya naheen."

Shree thinks for some time .Maya also understood need.

Shree "Ho sakta hai sir,Mujhey kuch time chaahiyen."

Both Shree and Maya go for the job.

Sakshi signals everyone .

Sakshi "Arjun hum emergency exit sey kissey ko andhar bhej saktey hain."

All get happy listening this.

Sakshi "Mujhey pata hain exit kahan hain aur who koi dekh bhee naheen payega.So hum kissey ko uss jagaha protection key liyen bhejdeethey hain."

Sameer "Nice idea."

Ranveer "Main andhar jaaonga."

Karan "Yaar kuch sooch beta pehley,hummarey pass sirf teen log hain jho bahaar ghoom saktey hain aur baath kar saktey hain.Tum andhar rahongey tho kyaa case kaun solve karega."

Every one laughs at what Karan said even Ranveer.

Ranver "Tho thum log mey sey koi jaayega."

Arjun "Mujhey ,Rathode ko,Karan ko who loog asaani sey pehchaan lengey."

Karan "Abhi aur Anoop humey bahaar kam aa saktey hain."

Sakshi "Main jaoon main waha ka member bhee hun."

Arjun "Bilkul naheen ."

Whole team "Naheen Sakshi tumhey hum field naheen bhejengey.Tum jiss haal mey hon abh ussey risk naheen lengey hum."

Sakshi becomes sad as she could'nt help.

Chotu "Sir main jaaonga ,Alok aur Rajeev mujhey bahaar cover dengey apney gaadiyon mey."

Karan "Arjun yeh sahee raheega .Lekin issko dekhkar kisey ko shak naheen hoga kyaa."looking at chotu from top to bottom.

All laugh at tha way Karan is looking at Chotu.

Alok and Rajeev get ready.

Sameer "BPV key jaroori hain kyaa tumhey."

Alok "Sir ,BPV key koi jaroori naheen .Humaree haath gadee tho usska mathlab speed ka watt lagegi."

Rajeev "Humey who log naheen pakad paayengey.Aap hummarey driving skills key baarey mey pooch saktey hain."

All agrees as they know the two brothers drive their ride in a reckless and highspeed it is tough for anyone to look without blinking.

Chotu leave along with Alok and Rajeev.

Shree comes there and gives Arjun the device to check about bomb.

Arjun "Ranveer ,Abhinav tum donon apney gaadi mey issey fix karoo aur Nita key ghar jaon puchtach key liyen,confirm hothey hee tum Chotu ko khabar deena.Koi checking naheen hoga bass bath keejiyen."

Both Abhinav and Ranveer leave to their assignment.

All are waiting for the result of present mission.

Sakshi was sleeping in couch made by team specially for her.Liza and Ayesha are sitting beside her.

Raaji was practicing with sniper rifle while Anoop was helping her in fixing targets.(a 9 mm bullet place about 50 m distance tough for a common eye to see but sniper rifle can do).Both are enjoying others company.

Here Sameer was checking files related to druglords .Shikandhar was cuffed to chain trying to escape but no use.

From distance Arjun was looking at Sakshi who is sleeping.

Karan comes there and tells arjun about his son Ayaan.

Arjun "Tumhaara beta hain."

Karan "Ayaan ,aath saal ka hain.Hostel mey rehtaa hain."

Arjun "Tumhaare biwi."

Kran "Mar gayye the cancer tha."

Arjun feels sorry for him.Karan don't mind it .Karan tell about his experience when his wife was pregnant and shares some ideas.Arjun listens them carefully.After few minutes Arjun goes to Sakshi near couch.

Karan was looking at them from distance and Maya comes near him.

Karan asks Maya straight forward "Tumhari koi boyfriend hain."

Maya was shocked at question but know the reason as it is mutual.She also likes Karan a lot and was ready to be mother for his son.

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update...
dream bohut achcha tha prankster...
now liza shocked...like their convo...
karan is so funny...
aww sakshi ko field pe jaane se mana kar diya...
karan is married nd he has son...
new couple of team...nice..

tumhe arakshi scens dene me kya problem hai...
now con.soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

awsome update...
dream bohut achcha tha prankster...
now liza shocked...like their convo...
karan is so funny...
aww sakshi ko field pe jaane se mana kar diya...
karan is married nd he has son...
new couple of team...nice..

tumhe arakshi scens dene me kya problem hai...
now con.soon...

sab log ek hee jagaha mey hain.who Anoop naheen key sabkey samney kiss kare.Naheen Karan kee direct baath karey.Arjun key liyen tho privacy chahiye.main abh kahan sy laon privacy uss room mey.tim lagega mem shaab.intazaar karnaa padega.sabko bahaar bechney key liye.Arjun aur Sakshi ko chodkar 17 loog aur hain waha sabko bahar bhejnaa kitna mushkil hooga.
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM


sab log ek hee jagaha mey hain.who Anoop naheen key sabkey samney kiss kare.Naheen Karan kee direct baath karey.Arjun key liyen tho privacy chahiye.main abh kahan sy laon privacy uss room mey.tim lagega mem shaab.intazaar karnaa padega.sabko bahaar bechney key liye.Arjun aur Sakshi ko chodkar 17 loog aur hain waha sabko bahar bhejnaa kitna mushkil hooga.


😆to jaldi karo we are waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update buddy!!
Damn good!
Rgdg chararcters I think what u wrote was absolutely perfect n i have ditto thoughts on those ppl.
A new couple in the making!
Nita...got to know abt her as well..
Waiting for the plan in action!

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