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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Etfpradnya

story is nice after so many dayzzz i read but i didnt get pms after 10th part

sorry I dont know how you got out of list.Glad you read all parts.I will not repeat mistake
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 27


Scene starts with Chotu entering Speak Up Community building from the secret way told by Sakshi.While both Alok and Rajeev brothers were on their vehicles(bikes) hid in a closed vehicle.They both are very attentive and listening to every move of Chotu carefully and both have hands ready on their vehicle and gun.Alok was observing the man who was keeping eye on the house.

Chotu goes inside and was hiding from everyone and observing the situation.Their was a hostage situation in the hall which Chotu observes from distance and finds a safe place from which he can observe everything and get in action at any instant.

Nita was crying as she became the reason for the death of Sakshi and other members.Chotu informs te situation inside the house to Alok and Rajeev.Their are total ten members inside house and one person observing from outside while one on the terrace of house whome Alok and Rajeev noticed.They are armed and bomb is placed in centreof hall .

As planned Abhinav and Ranveer come there and before they reach all became alert and hide their weapons and bomb.

They acted as if everything is common.Nita tells them she din't did anything and tells she just came for regular visit of Sakshi as she is her friend.

Both Ranveer and Abhinav leave as their mission was just to find about the bomb and deviate them while Chotu can enter the house.

Both Abhinav and Ranveer check the position of Alok and Rajeev and goes from there.While the person who was guarding the house follows them(Ranveer and Abhinav).

Here in ETF office Karan asks Maya "Tumhara koi boyfriend hain?" while no one is noticing them.

Maya "Naheen Sir.Aap yeh sawaal kyon poonchrahen hain?" she was excited but controls her emotions as she know how Karan can turn table with his talks.

Karan "Bass aisey heen poonch rahaan thaa." Karan loose his nerve this time and Maya gets disappointed.

Karan observes this and again gaining courage "Mujhsey shaadi karoogi?"

Maya's happiness burst and she collapses down with smile "Han." She was blushing but Karan dint make any romantic advancement.They are happy but they know very well about the situation they are in .

On other side both Raaji and Anoop were discussing about their future plans about their house and everything.

While others are sleeping in arrangements they made for themselves.

Arjun sat beside Sakshi and they have an eye lock .Sakshi gives a side hug to Arjun holding his arms tightly .Arjun keeps his hand over head.Sakshi sleeps peacefully holding Arjun's hand.Arjun not even missing a blink on his wife.

Arjun then observes Karan looking at a photo in his mobile and wishing something (happy birthday).

Arjun saw Maya looking at him from distance and understood she know something.

Arjun goes near Maya.

Arjun "Ayaan key baaray mey hain kyaa?"

Maya initially puzzled and understood nothing can be hid from Arjun Suryakanth Rawte.

Maya "Han.Kall Ayaan ka birthday hain.Issliye dukhee hain kee usskey pass nahen jaa payenga."

Arjun was silent as he is thinking about situation.

Maya "Karan sir hummesha hustey rehtey hain lekin Ayaan ko bahuth miss karthey hain.Woh yahaan rahega tho uskey khyaal rakhney koi naheen hain issliyen hostel bheja."

Arjun "Ayaan ka school kahan hain?"

Maya "Sir .aap yeh kyon pooch rahen hain."

Arjun "Janthee hon ya naheen?"

Maya "Janthee hun sir."

Arjun observes Sakshi sleeping and slowly goes toward Sameer.

Arjun "Rathode main bahaar ja rahan hun.Thoda kaam hain."

Sameer "Kyan kaam hain?"

Arjun "Aaney key baad bathaaunga."

Arjun signs something to Shree and Anoop and Abhiram.

All meet outside the hall and Maya was also with them.

Arjun "Maya ,tum,Abhiram aur main Ayaan ko hostel sey leekar ayengey."

Arjun "Shree tum yaha sab kuch samhaalna .9 saal ka ladkaa ka birthday hain hum yahan manaayengey.Tum arrangement karloo."

All understood what Arjun was planning and leave for their plans.He signs something to Anoop and Raaji .They sign as if they are there don't worry looking at Sakshi.

There Chotu was comfortable and same are Alok and Rajeev outside.The person eho was following Abhinav and Ranveer is back.He was just confirming that they really left the place and not enacting.

Abhi was driving the BPV while Arjun was sitting beside him and Maya behind.

Abhi "Itney raath ko who log humey andhar allow karengey kyaa ,karengey tho Ayaan ko hummarey saath bhejengey ?"

Maya "Tum uskaa fikar math karo.Main hu naa Ayaan mujhey achey tara pehcanta hain aur staff bhee .Main bahut bhaar aye the Karan sir key saath."

Arjun was silent thinking about something.He was constantly maintaining position of all teams divided.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yay! Me first 😃

Already read before I got ur PM!😆
Amazing job buddy...
hmm as suspected Nita was used for the villains to launch their plan...
Hostage situation going on...
Chotu and ppl doing good job! 😊
Poor Nita...😭
Karan's proposal was short and sweet...😳
Maya's reaction was lovely as well..
What really amazed me was their level of maturity, their decision to act according to situation - lovely...
Loved Anoop and Raji's small scene
Even Arakshi was cute😳
Karan missing his son...
Arjun and gang planning something for Karan...
Really have started loving the bond they share... they all have become on team now 😃
Good Job buddy! 👏
Keep up the good work!!!!

Hope exams went well!
Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update buddy.
Loved it.
Great job Chotu.
He is doing everything with great carefulness.
Feeling very sad for poor Nita.
At last Karan asked Maya for marriage.
Yayyeee it was awesome.
Loved Arakshi's small but cute scene.
Arjun is planing to bring ayan!!
That was so sweet of him.
Waiting for the next part eagerly..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
karan proposed maya with no frills but iss situation main aur kya kar sakta hain woh
anoop raaji cutest couple
mere saare bal safad ho gaye per arjun sakshi ka full on romantic wala update toh kaya moment bhi abhi tak nahi aaya lagta hain ubb ye hasrat leke hi upper chali jaongi 😆😆
arjun gone to pick ayaan from hostel but is it safe i mean they r dead for world so ?
thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 24

awesome update
loved it
shooting game is nice
raaji won it... Nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 25

nice update
thank god all are safe... So its all the plan
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 26

awesome part
loved the start... Shree and liza part
liked karan ... And the other team too
Nita in danger
the last part arjun and karan talking about pregnancy is nice
sorry for the late
I didn't get pm ... So thought you didn't update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
arjun planning birthday party
continue soon

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