Love And Deception.. part 15/ blog update.

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Before i begin... Rimi di... dont call me a saddist! Ye idea bahut mahino se tha dimag me...but one song has taken a toll on me! n i find it perfect 4 my story! others ...if not interested..plz dnt do silent reading...it really hurts a lot... another thing...if i dont get proper reviews...i will DC it without any notice! To my other friends..thanks a lot 4 being with me"
Part 1 - Pg 1
Part 2 - Pg 6
Part 3 - Pg 11
Part 4- Blog😉
Part 5- BLOG
Part 6- BLOG
Part 7- BLOG Trailor page 23.😉
Part 8- Blog😛 teaser pg 24
Part 9-BLOG 😉 NO teaser😊
Part-10 Blogwa me updatewa!!😆
Part 11- blogwa me jhaanke😆
Part 12- Blog
part 13- blog😳
part 14- blog😳
part 15- blog😳😃



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There was an unusual silence in the ETF office today... Everyone seemed to be hurt...disapponted ... the marks of worry visible on their faces...no one dared to voice out a word... the usual gossips...non stop rantings.. everything was missing...Even arjun's glare was missing...the cup of tea in front of him was untouched...


Arjun took a lot of effort to speak up finally..."Shree... aisha ke phone pe jo private number se call tha...track hua? and did u decode the chip she found? aur wo pendrive..kya hai usme?"

Shree nervously glanced to Rathod..who was immeresed into a file with a blank expression.."Sir wo...wo..mai..matlab.."
"Jo bolna hai bolo shree..duty ke bich personal life nahi ati...",He spoke up..

"She ...handed over all the details to us !! and i cross checked too..sab details sahi hai..that number...wo switched off a raha hai...still i tracked it... details apke pas wo file me hai sir...aur...ek baar aur ...i am sure THEY know ke humare pas sare details hai...so they will try their best to go underground ...because mumbai se to bahar jaynge to pakde jaynge...we need to find them soon!"

"Good work shree",Sameer replied in a calm tone shocking everyone to the core...
Then left for his cabin..closing the door behind ...

"Ye sab kya ho gaya? She should not have done this ... mujhe Sameer ke liye bahut bura lag rha hai...usne ekbar bhi humare bare me nai socha? hum sab ke bich rehkar wo humare khilaf kaam karti rahi? humara na sahi ... sameer ka to sochti ... she played with his feelings too...",Sakshi remarked annoyed and disappointed...

"Usne bahut se jhoot bole...par Rathod ke liye uske feelings jhoote nahi they.. she loved him!",arjun spoke up lost in thoughts..
"Cummon arjun...ye sab hone ke baad bhi tum ye bol rahe ho? evidences ka kya? and she admitted herself too... aur ye pendrive amd stuff...usne khud handover kia...phir bhi...",Sakshi started but Arjun snapped her "Har chiz ke bare insan jhut bol sakta hai...par pyaar ke bare nai sakshi...waqt ane pe samajh jaogi...kal hospital me bhi wo sirf Rathod se milna chahti thi... because usko khud bhi pata tha ke she doesnt have much time!"

Shree and chhotu looked at each other...they did not know what to say...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arjun took a deep sigh..."hospital se phone aya? hosh aya usko?"

Shree- sir wo subah call kia tha maine...aur...news achi nai hai...
All glared at shree...
"Mera matlab... wo kal...behosh ho gayi...phir...she slipped into coma..and...dr ne bola head injury zyada hai...they need to operate ... but... operation fail bhi ho sakta...aur kal raat se to...coma me hai...she is not responding!"

The faces turned sadder... "thik hai...try to keep a check on the case too...jisne humare sath jo kia so kia...but she was attacked too... and as our duty...we need to find the person too jisne uski gadi me brakes fail kiye... aur hospital me bhi civil dress me police bhejo...if they come to know ke aisha zinda hai...wo log usey phir se marne ki koshish karenge...not to forget ke uske paas abhi bhi kuch crucial details hai...aur zahir si baat hai...wolog nai chahte ke details hum tak pahuche...we need them to trap those people"


"Shree...us ladki ke ghar jao..and get her laptop... hack her mail...do whatever you want..but i am sure waha se kuch milega... here is the warrant... uske ghar pe search karo!",Rathod came all of a sudden...

The others were actually stunned by his behaviour ... they expected him to be upset... to yell..but nothing happened..he was in his usual self ...only one thing changed...the way of addressal... his hatered was pretty visible when he referred to her as 'us ladki' not once...but many times now...
"She has a name!",arjun glared at him

"Is it? maybe...yah...criminals and backstabbers deserve so much respect..right rawte!?",He replied back in d same tone...
"Rathod tum...",Arjun stopped when Rathod raised a hand,"Mere liye sare criminals ek hai...chahe wo mera koi bhi lage...ek time pe shayad wo mere liye important thi..but now..she is dead for me!"

He turned around and left stomping his foot!

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He drove mindlessly and then finally reached the hospital . ...
He asked the doc about her recovery chances but did not get a positive report...He nodded and left..but his feet stopped on their own in front of HER corridor...
He moved to the ICCU door and saw her through the glass pane...
Her body lay lifeless surrounded by numerous wires,pipes and machines..her face was pale...she had numerous bandages on her head...her right hand was in a sling...her face had bruises too...
He touched the glass pane as if touching her... *********** scroll down...
Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago
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"She will be fine", He heard a voice saying that and turned to find Arjun and gang standing there..
"Tumlog yaha kya kar rahe ho?"
"We came to check with the docs ..bolna tha ke agar kabhi hosh aye to hume inform kare..we need her statement..right?",Arjun replied with a smirk...
"Sir...mujhe uska laptop mil gaya hai..i am trying to get anything useful",Shree informed...

"Tumlog...yaha kyu aye ho?",came another shrill voice..
"Alia...hum doctor se..",Sakshi started
"Please chale jao... agar usko hosh aya to mai inform kar dungi...yahan rukne se kuch nai hoga...",alia retorted

"Hmm..",Arjun sighed
"Sameer...",she called back...
"Usne tumse jo bhi kaha...shayad sab galat tha...but uska pyar galat nahi tha...dont judge her without knowing everything... kal tumne jo kia..wo nehi karna chaiye tha...",Alia said turning to the glass door with teary eyes...
"Acha? apni gaddar behen ko defend kar rahi ho?",Sakshi said angrily..
"Sakshi...mind your language! meri behen gaddar nehi hai...usne jo kia..galat behkave me ake kia... but jis din se usko sach pata chala usne... tumlogon ko samjhane ka fayda nehi hai...kyuki tumlog saboot mangte ho... jo mere pas nehi hai...par ek baat puchungi... meri behen ko ETF join kiye kitne din hue the? 2 saal... agar uska aim tumhe khatm karna hi tha..have u ever wondered tum 2 saal tak zinda kaise ho? because jab bhi wolog tumhe target jar rahe hote hai ...wo tumko bacha leti hai..kabhi last minute plan change karke..kabhi jan bujh ke tumhare samne ake..kabhi bullets badalke ...but she saves u always! wo unke games unhi pe khelti hai...aise jisse un logon ko doubt nahi hota...kamaal ki baat hai na sameer...jitne din wo galat karte rahi..tumhe uspar zara sa bhi shak nai hua...bas ekdin wo sahi karne chali...n u guys caught her ...aur wo jhoot nehi bol payi...aur chup chap surrender kar dia...us din wo waha bomb plant karne nehi..us bomb ko defuse karne gayi thi sameer... tumlogon ko shayad nehi pata...par uski mechanics aur technicals bahut zyada strong hai...she can defuse 99% bombs ...she was protecting u all...sochna zarur is baare me... aur dekhna..sach janne me der mat kar dena...ek akhri baar gmhi sahi...uskumi saasein rukne se pehle..ekbar usko bol dena ke tumne usko maaf kardia..kam se kam is bojh ke sath to nehi jayegi ke jisne usse itna pyar kia..usko dhoka dia..kash kal ekbar usse bat kar lete...",Alia said with tears in her eyes slumping on the bench...
****FLASHBACK*****

Her wounds were being dressed and the doctor was pushing in some injections and tying the oxygen mask... Everyone stood there tensed..worried...Alia sat by her side clasping her palm..continuously crying...
Her fingers stirred and she took a sharp breath..
"Give the second IV now...usko hosh aa raha hai...get the OT ready...isko immediately stiches dena hoga..her head is bleeding..n its uncontrollable!",the doctor rushed...
Alia came closer to her...she was trying to speak something..but was failing..she was too weak to speak...she looked around...alia felt her grip getting tighter...and saw -tears trickling from the corner of her eyes..
"bolo..",alia said softly..
Aisha looked at her once...and then her eyes darted to HIM...he stood there with a disgusted look on his face..Taking great effort she forwarded her left hand to HIM..and her fingers moved..
"She is calling you..sameer",Alia said crying..
Sameer didnt budge..he still stood there with the same expression...
Arjun nudged him to move...and he moved...not towards her..he left the room..everyone else saw him leaving...
Her hands tried to reach him..and she tried to stop him...trying to speak...
They heard a sob...and slowly everything went quiet..she had subsided into sleep... she was unconscious again...
******FLASHBACK ENDS*******
Shree's phone rang and thar brought everyone back on the earth...


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Done 4 now...kaisa laga?
well..lemme clear something...Aisha lovers...Aisha is not a villain..so dont kill me please...
baki questions will be cleared as u read it..

Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres ...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Awesome start...
Ishi...mujhe story yaad aa gayi...😆😆😆
But yeh toh bohat 😭😭😭 😭😭😭
I don't know what to comment...😭😭😭
Everyone is now hating her...😭😭😭
Glad that Arjun atleast saw her true feelings for Sameer...😊😊😊
She is in comma...😭😭😭
Sameer addressed her as "Us Ladki"...😭😭😭
Sameer is very hurt...but he is not showing...😭😭😭 😭😭😭
Sakshi...😡😡😡
Alia's outburst was 😭😭😭 😭😭😭
Sameer...😡😡😡...kash woh ek baar uske pass chala jata...😭😭😭
Continue soon...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept
great start
loved it
continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES / Loved it Ishi awesome
So emotional
This angle of sasha really nice
Loved it a lot
Mujhe samamjh nahin aaraha kya comment karron 😕
Emortions of everyone so true
& right at places '
Poor aisha 😭😭 & sameer 😭😭
ALl knew samkeer loved aisha a lot
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehajain

unres ...me first...🥳

Awesome start...


Ishi...mujhe storyyaad aa gayi...😆😆😆

But yeh toh bohat 😭

I don't know what to comment...😭😭😭

Everyone is now hating her...😭😭😭

Glad that Arjun atleast saw her true feelings for Sameer...😊😊😊

She isin comma...😭😭😭

Sameer addressed her as "Us Ladki"...😭😭😭

Sameer is very hurt...but he is not showing...😭

Sakshi...😡😡😡

Alia's outburst was 😭

Sameer...😡😡😡...kash woh ek baar uske pass chala jata...😭😭😭


Continue soon...




thank god..yad a gyi :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dnt have words to comment...
Just one thing,Aliya is a great and a very supportive sister...
Her bashings to Bhai was great.
Atleast,Arjun identified the pure and true love for Sameer bhai in Aayesha...
I hope Aayesha becomes alright...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tune toh senti kardia yaar... 😭

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