ARAKSHI: PIYAR HUA CHUPKAY SAY (PART 10 B...LAST PART)PG 36 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
I liked the title very much
awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
nice start
sakshi attracts arjun's dad's attention he try to talk with her and know what's her problem
hope they become friends soon and incourse sakshi meet arjun
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
wonderful update

Saakshi is depression and Arjun's dad trying to console her.

What is the reason for her depression?

Eager for Arjun's entry.

Do Arjun and Saakshi know each other already?

Continue Soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yams.s

wonderful update

Saakshi is depression and Arjun's dad trying to console her.

What is the reason for her depression?

Eager for Arjun's entry.

Do Arjun and Saakshi know each other already?

Continue Soon



No dear
This is a different story
Arjun don't know anything about sakshi
Yes she is depress
For reason you have to wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2

Mr rawte steps stop looking her sitting there her usual place and her usual pose...he start walking near her...and stand near her...and ask

Rawte: can I sit here sakshi baita?

sakshi raise her head and look him...then one smile crept on her lips...without saying anything...she move a side...give him place to sit...mr rawte pass her smile and sit next to her...

rawte: so, how are you?

Sakshi look him once then say: I am fine...but can I ask you something.

Rawte: hhhmmm anything (give permission to ask)

Sakshi: why you come and sit next to me...and why even bother to talk to me?

Rawte: actually, I want to become you my friend (he said while looking in her eyes)

Sakshi: and why you want me to become your friend (she ask with surprise look)

Rawte: I want all those make my friend...whom I like very much...like you my dear (he said)

Sakshi look him...he is very decent personality...he is above 50 with really good health...fair skin colour...tall and big black eyes...he has charming and handsome personality...in this age...she easily imagine how he look like in young age...maybe thousands of girls could be flat on him...he feel her thinking gaze on him and smile

Rawte: hhhmmm handsome hoon na (he become naughty and said) yeah toh kuch bhi nahi hay baita...young age main dekha hota toh...pata chalta kay main kiya cheez hoon...yeah saaray Hollywood aur bollywood kay hero pani bhartay meray agay (he correct his shirt collar)

Sakshi laugh a loud...uncontrollable...mr rawte see her laughing with amusement...she look so angelic and beautiful...while laughing like mad...sakshi laugh with her open heart after long time...she accept mr rawte explanation and become his friend...shake hand with him she stamp on their friendship bond.

Mr rawte start talking with her...like yesterday...he is talking and she just hear him...in middle she say something but mostly she prefer hearing him...cup her face in her palm...she quietly listen...mr rawte feel she is much concern and more pay attention rather than yesterday...of course after becoming his friend...she look more calm and interact with him...this thought feel mr rawte relax...after talking and spending more hours with her...again he way to go his home and sakshi go to her house.

Three months gone, but change lot of things...sakshi and mr rawte friendship bond become very strong...both become very good friend...and feel incomplete without sharing everyday gossip and activities...

sakshi find mr rawte very interesting personality...he has full of knowledge...sakshi like his positive attitude...like he never criticize youngster...although, he admit his generation mistake and accept it...his knowledge about everything amaze her...computer, iphone, mac, net chatting, new movies, new heroine...everything on his finger tips...he is talking with her in various topics...his funny comments make her laugh...she also never leave him and sometime reply with her bouncer...which make mr rawte laugh...mr rawte successfully break her silent wall...she comes park every day and mr rawte wait for her...then both are talking ...sometime walking...sometime sitting...spend quality time each other then walk through their own houses.

Mr rawte tell sakshi that he have only one son...talking about his son...sakshi feel love in his voice...and love pouring in his eyes...he is telling many things about his son...tell her that he is such a angry man and arrogant person but heart wise he is really soft and hearty person...sakshi surprise to haer that his son opposite from him...why? she ask.

mr rawte tell her in sad voice what happening with his son and his beloved wife...how can that criminal stabbed his wife in front of his eyes...and turn him a walking corpse...after that incident his son forget to smile and enjoy the life...until he get his revenge...but after getting his revenge...he still in same condition...that revenge didn't change him a bit...but yes, he love him a lot and take care him very well...push away everything he always look after him...he always prefer his dad health and well being.

sakshi like mr rawte style...he never dig her past and family...just telling everything about him...he is a retired business man...who wind up his big business and do resting in home...because of his health...he is enjoy his resting time...with some time spending in park...and some time reading books and watching TV and talking with his son.

Sakshi: kiya itnay dukh uthanay kay baad aap ko iss jeenay say nafrat nahi ho jati (she ask him after hearing whole his life story)

Mr rawte: nahi...mujhay upperwalay say koi shikayat nahi...uss nay mujhay jo bhi diya hay...aur jo bhi lay liay hay...mujhay koi masla nahi hay...main khush hoon...aur jo hay uss par usska shukur karta hoon (he said in soft way)

Mr rawte positive talk change sakshi views...she is not happy with her life...but after hearing mr rawte talk...her thought can be change...she start forgiving those people who did bad with her...and after doing this she feel so relax and calm...she say thanks to her god...who give her opportunity to meet that person...who show her what is life about it? She is not the one who is suffering from sorrow but others also have bare some deep sorrow...but they never leave a live...they live with that sorrow and try to squeeze happiness with every moment.

Sakshi is very depressed...nearly three days gone when she didn't see mr rawte in park...she start worrying if he is ok or not...sakshi admit that she build strong relation with him...she start caring him...she want him near her...she need him to pamper her...she tell him that she love him...he is the first who make her release her that her life is so precious...and she can't waste her life...she have to find out what happen with him...where he is?

After thinking a while... she decided to go his house and ask his well being...it's been four days gone...today, waiting for him long time...then finally, she leave park and come out...once he show sakshi his house...while both walking to go there home...sakshi never been there before but today she start stepping there...she become very desperate to know about him...taking step fast...she come near that house...which she assume is mr rawte house.

This is really big and beautiful mansion...big black and golden grill front gate close...one guard room near that gate...side pillar have name board...sakshi read...RAWTE MANSION...she come right place...but after that she stop and thinking what can she do now...how can she ask with anyone...standing in dilemma when she see gate about to open...and one SUV come out in speed but stop looking her standing in middle of the way...sakshi take a side and make courage to come near the driver seat.

One charming and handsome man sitting...he is tall and smart...wearing white crisp shirt with blue jeans...both hand gripping hard on steering wheel...his two black orbs fix on her...looking her head to toe...he ask

Man: yes, can I help you? (Asks in stern way)

Sakshi: woh...mujhay uncle ka pata karna tha (she ask in hurry)

Man: uncle ka (he repeat...looking her)

Sakshi: oh...I mean rawte uncle...un ka poochna tha...woh kahan hain (she scold her in mind and quickly correct herself and ask again)

Man: woh hospital main hain (saying this he about to move his vehicle...when sakshi ask)

Sakshi: what? Kiya hua hay unko (she become worried and come near him)

Man: he is suffering from heart disease...angina patient (he again start to move his vehicle)

Sakshi: woh kiss hospital main hain (she ask in hurry...before he move)

Man: city hospital (replies her in hurry and zoom his vehicle fast)

Sakshi turn back with heavy heart...she never think that he is seriously ill and admit in hospital...she is feeling cry...once in her whole life she meet someone...who touch her heart...who understand her...who show her the right path...without any blood relation...he show his concern...without knowing her properly... he love her...like his own daughter...talking her...guiding her...sharing many of his experiences with her...give her strength...give her power to face her fears...self control and spread happiness...forgive peoples who did wrong with her...how can she leave him so easily...he become her one important part of her life...sinking in these all thoughts...she is walking towards her house...while making plan in her heart...to go and meet him at hospital.

part finish here

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
loved it
loved sakshi and mr rawte bonding
Waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was really a good update...
I mean awesome and sweet...
Great work...
Thanks for PM...
Please do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
awesome
so sakhi learned again to live life
who vl fall love first
i wann arjun dear
and yes so meeting of sakshi and arjun happened
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
great work
loved it
thanx for pm
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
lovely update...
like sakshi& mr rawte 's bond...
shakshi comes out from depression its good for her...
is that meet is arakshi met????
like before eageerly waiting for next part n also for our sys's entry...
plz plz con.soon...

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