T2: ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA COMPLETED ON PG 91 - Page 52

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

part 13

awesome update...
so finally ariya decided to give their relationship a chance...
loved the small close encounters...
sumitra galat time kaki...bechare kitne embarrass ho gaye..😆
now IG's party...ab ayega maza...
i am off read the next part...😊

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Wow this is just awesome


Tune har ek point ko kamal ka pakada hai..awesome


I love it...

Originally posted by: Swara85

Awesome update..
loved the way they understand each other and are trying to maintain their relation..
lol..Arjun couldn't take his eyes from her..
Ariya's dance was superb.
that inspector..😡
Riya hurt and him consoling her..that part was nice..
precap sounds interesting..cont soon and thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

chap 14

awesome update goldie...
Arjun danced with her in the party..i am loving their mutual understanding...though i felt it a bit too early..but its okay..chalta hai..you dont strech anyways..😃
next came the drunkard...sidhe kamar pe haath dal diya 😲..usse to pitna hi tha..🤢
rathore ne kiyu roka?? sab mil baat ke marte na..😉 aisha bhi do char haath laga deti,..

then you brought in the shower scene..it was beautiful...

continue soon...precap is interesting..

thanks for the pms...

gosh finally read all your pms..😃

Originally posted by: sdutta

haila GOLD ,

What a update 🤗

FREAKING AWESOME 👏 2 GOOD 👏

that drunken man 😡😡😡 mera srap lagega 😡

ARIYA ,kya kahu ,paheli bar alfaz kam padrahe mera 😳 they are BEAUTIFUL,PERFECT 😳

Originally posted by: farana786

wow goldie wat an update
amaxingly n beautifully written

aww party mei jaa rahe hai sab
wow love ta way arjun was lost in riya
omg arjun n riya ko sindoor n magalsutra pahenaya

wow ta dance was just like cherry on ta cake

yeh sala kamina police officer drunken state mei kiya kar raha hai
thnk god arjun punchd him
oh he was nt drunk as he said all rubbish hy arjun married riya

thnks for pm
cont soon

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow awsm update

loved it

ariya were super

continue soon

Originally posted by: halima_zaka

superbb

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

Hmmm...wow great one...!!

Originally posted by: harshijeshnu

super update..😉 that is first time Arjun is putting sindoor and mangalsutra for Riya when she in sense.. 😃 i love it.. waiting for the next part.. 😆