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Anjali

@Angel_Arya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

How does it feel for an introvert person to be in a new collage???
All unknowns around,poor Riya was also thrown like a football/basketball

Very well described the situation
Riya is new in her collage
She doesn't know anyone
and wants to hide from everybody
But the crowd throws her here and there
Finally she lands on her locker with a bleeding nose
Poor she

The characterization of Riya,
well written
Her appearance,
she being far away from all the typical girls
well shown

And there is a surprise for her
she has dance classes
of which,she is totally unaware of

let's see what happens next
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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aleena

@atharin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

nice start

wating for more

thanks for pm

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

asom updt

loved it

cont soon

thnx fr pm

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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+ 32

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

interesting start

loved it

continu soon

thankx for pm

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

dear 1 part dekar bhul gai ho kya 😲 😲

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Black_Angel

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

@minamma, thanks

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Black_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

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Black_Angel

@Black_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: zubiya92
Nice update
Love it
Cont soon

Thanks😊

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chandrima

@chand91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

soo swet prt dr

lvd it

plz cnt

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fairy shah

@fairyshah

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

first of all di i didnt get a pm of this ...

please next wala mei do pm me

secondly coming to update it was lovely update

humorous tha

i enjoyed reading it even though itna chota sa tha

please next time thora lambaaa wala update daiyoo 😉

i loved this part very much , cant stop laughin the way you wrote it and the way ri replied to the guy ,i guess must b arjun nah

Talk to me , Flame ," he says cocking his head

to the side .

quote ;

"Flame?" I raised an eyebrow at him.

He reached out and fiddles with a strand of my hair .

"With hair like this I can't call you' ice ; can I ? "

I laugh humorlessly I move my head back ,

pulling my hair out of his fingers.

I've heard way too many stereotypes and jokes

about my hair .

It's just annoying now. When you head2

"the redheaded Stepchid" and "hothead"

all your life , you get bored of it

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Edited by fairyshah - 11 years ago

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