Raesha- The First Time..updated on blog..note pg 15

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deffa

@deffa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Great update 😊
Sam banging d bonnet of d car in frustratn 😆
Sam lost seeing Aisha in saree 😳
killer smile 😳 😆 perfect 😳 the first gaze 😳 Sam's pov wz awesome n funny too 😆 😆 😆
Their first dinner date... 😳 loved it vry much 😳
Cont soon

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Annu

@Chulbuli_Annu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

ye batting wala case kal hi star ustav pe aaya tha...ahaan aaj dobra padhne ko mil gya

waise bhi ye case kaun bhul skta hai 😉 rathore to sach me jhadu hai iss mamle me...

jo harkate wo kr rha tha naa road side romeo bhi nhi krte clip khol dena...etc 😆

additional scenes are good...

aur wo dialogue goli maar dena...sach me aisha ko goli maar deni chahiye thi rathore ko jab usne kaha main aur meri tanhai 😡😡😡 sabse sada hua aur gisha pita dialogue huh...

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angle1shanu

@angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

superb...

rathore to lattu ho gaya.😉...

love..me bade bade pagal ho jate.. hai to ye dammit kya chij hai..😆

sameer lost in his old memories .😊...

ayesha ko almost dara diya sameer ke stupid joke ne...🤢

continue soon..

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

loved it ishi

awesome update

POVS of neckless scene were written beautifully

Loved both the POVS

OWW dinner date wa really awesome

Liked it a lot

Sam teasing aisha lovely

& Main ar meri tanhaayi was superb dear

n last was too cute

I loved that in point of views

u started from the pick up

n expressions were written nicely

loved the update

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

it was nice...the extra things you added was nice too...

but in rathod's pov there wasnt any mention of dinner..why??
i missed that part...

love is brewing up slowly...continue...😊😊😊