Raesha- The First Time..updated on blog..note pg 15

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Ishi...update milega kya...😳😳😳...plzzz...😳😳😳

Quote

laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Sam & Ayesha's POV was hilarious.

Some dialogues were out of the word. E.g "Buy one get one free". and "Cute guy"

Aisha.. nice name...", my heart spoke... but i feared saying that out.. who knows... she may beat me up too...🤣🤣🤣

Loved it ❤️

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Super amazing ishi Loved it

WOW Awesoem

Both POVS were written beautifully

WOW Aisha is truly female version of Rawte 😆

Poor Sameer I pity him😆😆

By One get one free 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 that really cracked me up

Poor Sameer Rawte v/s Aisha jhel raha hai

Very nice & a beautiful start

Thanks for this lovely gift

Thanks for the Pm

n continue soon 😊

Quote

MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

ha ha cool one..

aisa laga dono ki diary ka page udke tujhe mil gya & tune hume bata diya..

Quote

Priya SINGH

@FLOREY

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

ya rathore b careful nadia can beat u up 2..lol

o u remembered the date..very nice...appreciable..

good we got a new story..hey but dun u delay other...plz

pov nicely written

Quote

Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow...

awesome update...

felt like the pice of writing was written in a diary...

loved the POVs'...

continue sooonish...

thanks for the pm.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

Quote

ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Ishi...update milega kya...😳😳😳...plzzz...😳😳😳

no no... ishi cake bana rahi hai...😳

Quote

Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

no no... ishi cake bana rahi hai...😳

meko bhi dena cake... 😳

Quote

Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Ishi...update plzzz...🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢

Quote

rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

it was brilliant start..but i hope you are continuing...considering your index i think you are..even if not you should...

you have loads of potential to continue trust me..

the aisha's pov was bang on...you included arjun in a different angle but good...

much better than the usual cheeky romantic stuff..

sam's pov was a bit clichy but nice...he was scared...well well accepted..aisha kapoor isnt an ordinary lady..

the femal version was superbly explained...

continue soon...and thanks for the pm... will read the other stories and comment..later..😊

Quote

1 2 3 4 5 ... 11

Raesha- The First Time..updated on blog..note pg 15 - Page 2

Related Topics

Explore Topics