Talaash-Zindagi ki

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hey guys ...um back with a three shot.. i dont is it gonna work or not i was listening to a song and thos came into my mind...i tried a lot to keep it away but i couldnt help writing it...so here it is
if you. think its a copy of any ff..os..or ss going on..do tell me


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Posted: 11 years ago
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he sat in a dark room lit only by a small lamp.he sat quietly tears rolling down.. having a piece of paper in his hand. yes he had begun to realise his mistake .but now its too late she has left. he wished if he could change the past. change everything he had done to her but alas! life has no retake .you cannot go in the past and change your actions but he had a chance nature had given him that chance..chance that could change her life and his as well ..a chance that would help her to be with him but he
lost it.. not only he lost the chance of. stopping her..he also lost her completey. the thing that he has today is nothing but a piece of paper on which her handwriting is digged . beautifully written words but now they are meaningless at least for him... he reached for the switch board of the room and lit all the lights so that he can see her handwritten letter more clearly may be for last time..the letter said
"arjun
may be when you read this i might not be around but belive me i believed you..trusted you more than myself...loved you more than any one could ...
i know you hate me but now a i have gone to a place where there is no space for hatred and so i have decided to wait for you here always because i know my love for you is immortal...
writing this letter meant not to hurt you but to tell you the truth..truth that i khave kept inside me from years..but now when i know that i could not hold it anymore i want to tell it to you.. and for that you have to open a packet near you...life has shown me diff. colours but this one was the most special one... find him arjun he is the last ray of our...my love...and then give send him to the orphanage i dont want him to be a burden on you ... or on her... i know she has kept him like her own. but she also has a life ahead...so please find them
i know its very late but still i m waiting for you to accept him...he is ours ..please
yours forever
roshni"
tears rolled down..he knew now she was away far away to be reached by him...he opened the packet kept on table and it contained a CD... he played it and their she was on the screen..she looked pale and week..he kneely listened to what she said..after hearing it he kept it aside..he moved to his room..no their room ..opened the wardrobe and took a pic of her ..he sat down near the bed ..hugging the picture close to his heart..and cried as much as could.. .
he woke up with ringing of the doorbell he thought it might be the milk man..he got up and opened the door and ...
to be continued
do you lyke it...should i continue or not
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itz Awsomee Dear! Very Intrestingg!! Plz Do Continuee Soonz..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds interesting
cont soon👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start dear
it sounds interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear...
cont soon..
plz pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it ws wndrful!! beautifully writn
jst cn't wait 2 read d nxt prt
do cntinue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting .👏... continue soon😉 wana know more ..👍🏼...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept and update
waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start dear... So now Arjun has a baby? What happened to Roshni??
Continue soon and thanks for the pm...

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