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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
wow nice concept.
so is it arni?
wow they had a baby
where is she now dead or alive.will riya b there

cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
i am thinking of turning it to a ss but for the time being here's the CS


Arjun Suryakant Rawte: a police officer. and a true son of his soul ...shares a healthy relation with his family
but not with his wife... he was made to marry her because she is the daughter if his father's friend...he somehow knows that she loves him but he never paid heed to it

Mrs. Roshni Arjun Rawte: wife of arjun ...and a wonderful artist ... she has everything in her life. except love of her husband. ... she cares for him and love him but she d oesnot expect anything in return

Sameer DhamSingh Rathore: close friend of arjun and after his marriage of roshni's also..h knows the complications in their relation and wants them to settle it down but in vain...he works with arjun as police officer

Mrs. Ayesha Sameer Rathod: wife of sameer and also arjun's sister ...shares a good bond with roshni and wants them to unite

Arav Arjun Rawte: son of arjun and roshni but lives with roshni 'younger sister

Now u guys will decide who it will be (roshni's younger sister) RIYA or SAKSHI
the majority of votes will decide

till then think and enjoy the part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2
SOMWHERE IN THE STATE :
.the window was open giving a passage to sun rays to fall on the bed ...the alarm clock started ringing and a voice came from kitchen ..."Arav"
this is how my day begins with the ringing of clock and shouting of mum...
a girl nearly of twenties came in running ...arav wake up u l be late.. and usually my reply to this line is mom please five minutes promise only five and i buried my face into my pillow
mom: sitting on the bed but you will be late.. beta. and miss your school bus...no wake up and with this she started tickling me hard and a laughing session began for me..i ran from her cluthes in the washroom ...and she left the room towards the kitchen..
i m arav ..arav anand and i live with my mom..she is my world...no dobt when i see my friends with their parents i.e. both mom and dad i feel bad but i never asked my mom about it ...i have heard people saying that my mother must b bad charactered that is why my father has left her... but i cant understand its meaning... mom usually says i m. too small to understand thoes big things so i leave them for future ... i have seen my mother crying in front of a pic but to my shock it was not of a man i mean my father... instead she was of a woman ..a beautiful woman...when i asked my mom about it ..she ignored it and changed the topic. . and my problem is my curosity of knowing about it increases. day by day
but at present this is not a only i have another is that today is monday...monday means skool...i hate it..
my mother came back with a glass of milk ... i was standing infront of mirror waiting for my mom to come and knot my tie..
she gave me the glass and i drank it and she tied the knot ...took me to the breakfast table and fed me and then my school bus came and i left in it... and knew my mother would get dressed and leave for office and her hectic day would start...
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ARJUN'S HOME
he opened the door and saw a pair of black eyes staring at him..but it was not a man indeed she was a women ...he came out of trance when she called
girl: arjun bhai kya huva... kahan kho gaye
arjun: nahi kuch nahi..ayesha tum yahan iss waqt aur sam kahan hai
the girl instead of saying anything hugged him... "bhai maine roshni ke baare mai sunna...sameer vahi gaye hai...apko sam ko batadena chahiye tha ki aap..(she said breaking the hug)
arjun : nahi ayesha ...(he said walking inside and allowing her to follow) har cheez ka ek waqt hota. hai. aur vo waqt guzar chuka hai...maine usse bohat dukh deye hai ..
ayesha: phir bhi...kam si kam jaane se pehle usse pata chalta ki aap bhi
he didnt let her complete and said" its okay ayesha..'," mai tumhare liye coffe lekar aata hoon" she didnt probe further and nodded... and he went to kitchen..
ayesha noticed a the lamp open on the table so she went near to shut it when she noticed the letter..she picked it.up and opened it...it took her no time to realize that it was from roshni as she had seen her writing many times and also she had written her name on it ...she read it. meanwhile arjun came out..with two mugs in his hands..he saw ayesha sitting on sofa with wet eyes and a piece of paper in her hand..
ayesha: ye sab kya hai bhai...
arjun didnt want to hide anything from her..she was the only family he had ...he kept the mugs on the table ... brought the laptob and sat beside her ...switched it on and played the video and passed it to her..she looked at the screen. and it was roshni saying something she increased the volume ...it said that arjun had to find someone who were in pune ...and she was not having any detailed info about them nor their address. she only had a pic of a girl that she had sent with the letter...after it ended.
ayesha turned to look at arjun who was in tears like her...
ayesha: to ab...ap unhe doondh rahe haina
arjun: haan ...shayad
ayesha: common bhai dont worry aap use dhoond lenge ...vaise aap kab nikal rahe hai
arjun: in the afternoon...pehle comminer sir ke paas jaake leave application deni hai
after few minutes of silence ...he began
arjun: ayesha ...
ayesha:hmm
arjun : promise me ki jab tak mai na bolu tab tak tum sam ko kuch nahi bolugi...promise me
ayesha: lekin
arjun:lekin kuch nahi. .promise me
ayesha: ok..ab aap jaake fresh hojaye aur packing kijiye mai breakfast bana deti hoon phir mujhe office jaana hai..
she made the breakfast and left
sorry for mistakes...do coment guys plz
dont forget to tell me which one i have to include (riya or sakshi ). and also if ypu dont want me to turn it into ss do tell me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: sakshiarjun

SAKSHI SAKSHI SAKSHI PLEASE...


read the update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Thanku thanku...
If Aarav's surname is Anand then I guess it is Sakshi hmm...
I don't know whether I'm right or wrong... Still I loved the concept
Carry on dear...
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
i want sakshi ..👏... not riya plzzz 😉... continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Great update
loved it
continue soon
I want Riya and not Sakshi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awesome update...
If Arav's surname is Anand than it must be Sakshi...😉😉😉
Arav's day start was nice...😃😃😃
Arjun-Aisha convo was nice...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Awsumm Start Dear! So itz Aarav Anand..So it has to be Sakshi.. :) If u want to turn it into an ss no problem! :) Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Sooz!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
IMPORTANT
guys plz tell me should i xonvert it into ss or end it in the next one... the next part will depend on it...plz tell me plz
Edited by misakiscarlet - 11 years ago

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