Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart
Res again!! Don't shoot me.
Unres!
Well hello again. Now that you have finally decided not to shoot me (At least I hope you've decided) I am here to drop in my useless reviews that probably will not make any sense. 😆 Don't call them useless. Each and every comment is important to me. Even if the commenter thinks it's worthless. I don't 😉 and about the shooting...I was going to shoot you but then I became selfless and decided not to.
Part 1:
Well tbh, I loved the title of the OS in the first place. Moving on...Riya feeling his gaze was a marvellous way to start off. Then the shots, had me worried for a second because I thought she would end up getting drunk and doing something stupid but thank god that was only my imagination and that didn't happen. Glad you liked the title of the OS. It was inspired by Shakespeare's original play 😆 THat's why the shots are called Aquila shots. Harmless right...just mix a little sprite or 7up with Apple juice and you haeva refreshing drink *wink*
Ahaan, Shree trying to coerce Riya into confessing her feelings for him. Was expected but still, their friendship is one in a million. Then her later dialogue about her life beginning and ending with him had me cooing while at the same time wanting to slap her. Uh uh. Well It was an indirect confession kind of if you think about it form my brain Lol. Plus Shree already knows I mean isn't it kinda obvious. Awww don't slap her she is a nice girl if you slap her I'll probably cry.
Aww, loved how she is playing cupid for Liza and Shree by bribing the spotlight guy and forcing them to share a dance together. Romeo and Juliet indeed. 😆 Yeah see the Shakspeare's Touch "Cupid" 😆 i AM SOOO classic! 😛
Okay, not a big fan of Taylor Swift but I can totally see why you would choose this song. Seems to really go with the flow so kudos for the song pick. 👍🏼 Aw, she's happy that Shree and Liza have found each other. That's so sweet! Now after the Shree and Liza hug, I definitely saw Nabi's little input. Only you would ever say "chaching" and that had me smiling at my laptop screen. Yeah I know Taylor swift isn't my first preference but I only like some chosen songs from her like this one. plus it matched the situation perfectly or at least I though it did. Yeah I like celebration my little victories through the "chachings" hehe that's what I made Riya do as well. My touch on her character Lol. awww i made you smile! hehe! 😃
The best way to end the first part with the most sweetest bond of friendship. Like I said, I've always admired their friendship and for some reason, that friendship reminded me of the friendship you and I share. 🤗 I wuv yooo! ❤️ Awww! it is kinda like the friendship you and I shareee! That was a smart relation there Ra.one hehe! YOu know when I was writing that part I remembered you and it made me smile 😳 Huh we share a strong bond *hugs*
Onwards ho!
Part 2:
Oho, so now someone is being ogled at by the hot-headed smoking sexy beast of a man, Arjun. Good point, how indeed are you supposed to ignore a handsome man in the party? Specially when that said man is the aforementioned smoking sexy cop Arjun Suryakant Rawte...Gutter mind, go away...ah, my rationality is back. Omg Now those are perfect description for the cexxy Rawte! hayeee! I mean you can't ignore a handsome personality anywhere! And this is coming from experience *ahem ahem* lOL the gutter minds always on! 😆
Lol, Riya and Ayesha's convo made me laugh. Ayesha trying to be subtle and innocent but failing miserably in front of Riya. Although I do have to say, Riya's thought "I know how it feels when you lose someone you love" was a bit cryptic and had me going "Hmm, kuchh toh chhut raha hai" 😆. Yeah Ayesha trying to be casual and all but failing miserable. That's what happens with me :P Well Keep dwelling on that such to choot raha hai part cause there is a reason behind that too. hehe
Well I was awaiting the dance, but I wasn't expecting them to end up on the dance floor like that. I was thinking Arjun would either drag her onto the dance floor or be forced into dancing with Riya by the undeniable Forces of Attraction 😆. But nonetheless, that was the best. Well I wanted to make it different from the mainstream reason you know. Not that I don't like those reason but still I wanted to try something new. hehe! Plus it was the "Undeniable forces of attraction" if you look at it from my point of view. *wink* from both sides
Another good choice in picking the song. Truly a wonderful one and the aftermath of the dance was even better! The tension between the two, the sizzling chemistry, the unrequited love (for now), and most importantly, the desire to stay in each other's arms. I am glad you liked the song. It is one of my favorite ones! and it suited the situation perfectly so I was like why not?! hehe! Glad you liked the passion and sizzling chemistry. It was very intense. I had to keep a glass of water beside me while writing that part hehe!
Then came the teasing session which once again had me giggling. Shree and his techno savvy wit with recording the entire dance sequence. Now if only I can get my hands on that phone and watch it 😆 sEEE pERKS OF BEING A TECHY!!!! 😆 Lol...Trust me I wanna snatch that mobile too...and keep looking until I am either sleepy or my eyes get tired! *sigh* MIss Ariya so badly!
Then another glimpse of Nabi as Ayesha uttered the words "Har ek friend kamina hota hai" because if I'm not mistaken, I've heard that coming from you many a times. yES I say that a lot to everyone! Even my gori friends Lol...They don't get what I say and I am just like I just complimented you in a "good way" hehe! I am so sneaky sometimes!
❤️ 🤗❤️ 🤗❤️ 🤗❤️ 🤗 Awww! Itni saara pyaar and hugs!
Now I really wanna physically hug you yaar! Oh well Virtual hi sahi A biiiggg cudddlllyyy hug from my side mixed with Jaddoo ko jhappi 🤗
Love you!!!!! ❤️❤️ X Infinity!
Sorry for taking so long I was in school then I had badminton practice and now my hands hurt! I was "multitasking" 😉😛 Sorry again!
But thank you for such a long commenttt! Means a lot to me 😃 Love you again!
Ufff Yeh Love Hai Mushkil
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