OS: Romeo and Juliet ~ Part 3: Pg 24 {Last part} - Page 12

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

hayee !! so romantic..

n y r saying sreedevi..its sreesen nah..

ya thats true har ek fried ka***a hota hai..jarur hota hai...but most of the times this ka***apan is good n funny

oh the intensity was relly good..

best of luck shree n very good 2

cont soon...if possible 2morrow.

thnk for pm

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

it was really awesome..

arjun make riya dance with him..

the song u selected is just perfect..

riya is blushing..

shree n aayesha don't loose chance to tease her..

shree has recorded their dance..

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm..

Originally posted by: clementina

amazing update ... wow ria nd arjun 😃

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow dear..
I am just lost after reading this update.
Hayee i am blushing so much.
Mind blowing dear.
So this ariya os.
Thank you so much..
Loved ariya dance.
It was so hot.
Me blushing.
And the song was also awesome.
You described very beautifully.
Loved riya, shree and ayesha antics.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Live-life

Thank you!

Sreedevi isliye because I like calling people names!😆Muhahah

yup this kaminpan is good for health mostly!

Glad you liked it!

thanks again!

😃

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

so when is the next update?

Originally posted by: Jo_Pinchy

That was Magical update Naby! Omg Jojo!

Glad you are here!

I always love reading and writers the story from the first person point of view. Like how you have here. Everything narrated by Riya. And there were so many quirks and crazy monologues you added in the story. Last one I laughed...Har ek friend kamina hota hai. hehe! Heheh! glad you liked the new style i used! I am not that good with first person point of view. I tried it for the first time..glad you liked it! hehe! yup had ek friend lamina how hai is history now! 😆

Aquilla shots! Jezz! Only Naby can come up with this. Riya is such darling and cares so much for her friend. Yeah I have actually tried those...they are pretty delicious! *wink* Yup A caring and loving friend! so nice na

Songs! Enchanted is one of my favourite piece of songs and I sing that in karaoke's 😃 That was a beautiful narration on Shree-Liza dance seq. How perfectly and smoothly Riya gave a kick start to their love story. Bichari, apni love story ek hi patri peh stuck hai. Enchanted was the song I got stuck in my head for a while now so I just had to get it down! hehe. Glad yo liked Shriza'a dance! Don't Ri ki love story bhi jaldi patri par aa jayegi

*fingers crossed*

Anjanna Anjaani! Ariya dance seq was just perfect. I love how he messes up with her state of mind and body. Peering her through his hawtness filled eyes! Glad you liked the Ariya dance sequence! hAYEEE! Wo to sab ka aisa hi haal karts hai! Maar dala...allaahhh! Mar dala!

It was a beautiful update. I am looking forward to some romance.. so update soon please.👏😃 Thank you again! Promise next update will be romantic! Pakka!

Will update soon!

This one's dedicated for the OS! Do see Ariya Faces in them!😉 Awww! thanks JOJo! that is such a cool gif! I already see Ariya faces in them! hehe! 😃

Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl

Super cool and cute story...

Haayyee..ARIYA dance...love itt...

sorry fr not commenting earlier..

But really wonderful story...

update soon