Ariya:: Meelon Ka Fasla

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi frnds... An idea came in my mind just thought to write. I m not gud in writing, just trying my hand. Plz frgv fr mistakes. PROLOUGE:: In dis story Arjun and Riya are like two sides of same coin. Jo sath hote huye bhi alag hai. Dono kabhi mile nhi par unki zindagi Ek dusre se judi hai. CHARACTER SKETCH:: All BOYS are same as show except GIRLS. But Riya is not the part of etf at first. She vl join etf during a case. Sakshi is also here but her entry is after Riya. And Aisha, She is also not in etf. Frnd of Riya and workning in MNC. Liza, She is the only lady power in etf. Share bro-sis relation with RR duo, frnd of Chotu and Enemy of Shreekant sen urff Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Tring* *tring* He received his phone. Hello..!! He answered. Thik hai. Hum aate hai. He said and cut the call and type a msg and sent it to many. After some tym at roadside few ppl are gathered and police is investing a murder case. Far frm them a guys with his huge body is struggling to get himself out of a narrow lane whr he was gone to find a clue. But poor boy get stucked. He is Commando Chandrakant Patil, ETF. Apart from him an another guy is peacefully sitting at the bonet of ETF SUV and working sumthing on his laptop which has a name written on it "SHREE". He is Shreekant Sen, Tech Expert ETF. While working he is passing comments to a girl infront of him. "Yaar kuch log kitna slow kaam karte hai. Pata nhi apne aapko kya samjhte hai." He said. "Aur kuch logo ko to khamakkha galat fehmi hoti hai ki wo kaam karte hai" The girl answered him. "Tum kehna kya chahti ho...?? Ki main kaamchor hu. Dekho Liza apne kaam se matlab rakho mere muh mat lago.." shree replied back. Girl turned her face to him. She is Liza D'cruz, Forensic Expert. "Tumhare muh lagega bhi kaun...SPECKY SEN" She fought back.. Before they cont their fight chotu called them for help. "Are lado mat aur mujhe bahar nikalo warna wo do rakhash permanantly is deewar me chunwa denge." Chotu said. Liza and Shree helped chotu and now waiting for thier So called Rakhash Boss. "Kya baat hai yaar aaj dono k dono crime spot par late ho hai." Shree asked. "Arjun sir ko commissioner sir ne bulaya to wo unse milne ke baad aaenge and Rathod sir ka kal se pata nhi. Kisi se milne gaye the kal. Arjun sir ka msg sayad mila nhi. Warna wo abtak aa jate." Liza replied. "main call karke puchta hun." Chotu said nd dialed Rathods no. In a hotel room a man is sleeping peacefully. His cloths are at d corner. He turned in his sleep nd tried to search sumthing. When he didnt get he opened his eyes lazily and sat on bed with his rare smile. "Miss, where are u..?" he said nd wait for reply but it didnt came. He searched room but cant find her. "Sayad chali gayi hogi. Lekin main use dundh nikalunga. " Then he checkecd his phone and read msgs. Same time he got a call. "Ok. Main aa raha hu." He answerred. He got ready and while moving out a anklet came beneath his foot. He picked it up nd remember abt d girl. He kept it with him. And went to reception to check out. "Gud mrng, ACP Rathod" receptionist wished him. Yes the man is our ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD. "Gud mrng." he wished back nd headed for crime spot. At commissioner office. " To ye tumhara akhiri faisla ha.?" Comm. asked him. "Yes, main us case ko nhi chodunga. Kahi na kahi us case ka Sikander se koi connection hai." He replied. " Arjun, main samjhata hun pr kya karu uski family ye case reopen hone nhi de rahi hai. Sath hi politicali pressure bhi hai unka." comm said. " Mujhe kuch nhi malum aap kya karoge but Mukherjee case ki file mujhe chahiye." Arjun argued further. "thik hai. Main ek baar aur uski wife se baat karta hu." comm. said. "Ok, then i vl leave first." Arjjjun said and get out of comm. office. Here comm. dialed a no and wait for response. "Hello, This is commissioner of mumbai. May i hv a word with u." he asked d person on phone. After sumtym. ... "Dono pagal hai. Ek case reopen krne pe tula hai to second uuse open hi nhi hone de rah. I pray ki ye kabhi ek dusre se na mile." He talked to himself.
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kaveriw2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting dear...

Do update soon and add me in ur pm list..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing
Very different concept
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow the first part is just awesome one...


Who don't want to open the case of sikandar


Who was the girl with rathore...


Why etf late to solve the murder case

Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome yaar...!!!!!
Who was the girl with Sam...??????
Wow Arjun wanted to reopen some case but couldn't do it coz of that peron's relative...!!!!!
Commissioner's comment in the end was a bit funny...!!!!!
Continue asap...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept story look interesting
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept cont soon,...dun delay n never discont like other brats
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aoosum concept di
whose that girl , riya?
well thnks for pm
do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsom concept
cont soon
annd do pm me

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