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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
its so beautiful ritu...
I just loved it...
Thanks for the pm...
PS : how are you dear ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Yayy me first
wow
superb
just love it
amazing Os wonderful
veri beautifully written
no words 4 ur this awesome story plz write more n more on Arakshi ur writings are just fabolus n thanks 4 pm

Heylooo Maha!๐Ÿค—
Awww thanks so much! Dont worry, main itni jaldi nahi jaane wali๐Ÿ˜›


Originally posted by: shreya09

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I am speechless !!!!!

Rituuu !!!! i love your 'ordinary' (like u said ๐Ÿ˜‰) writings ๐Ÿค—

Hahahaaa thank you Shreyaaa๐Ÿค— It is strange how the most ordinary things are made extraordinary by readers like yourself๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Awesome di.

U made me speechless.
It was just mind blowing.
Loved it.
A request.
Can u make it a TS and bring them together?
Please please pretty please.

Heylooo Easha๐Ÿค—
Awww, i never imagine i would be writing a second part to it, but i did all thanks to you and everyone else's love ๐Ÿ˜ณโค๏ธ

Originally posted by: anu91

another awesome fantastic OS...

ur such a beautiful writer ritu!!!!!!
plz plz plz write another part and unite them...
the letter was picture perfect...
thanks for PM...

Anuuu๐Ÿค—
Thank you soo sooo much! Deffo shall write more, but maybe two parts instead of one๐Ÿ˜‰

Thank youuu๐Ÿค—

Thank youuu๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: PavithraKrish

hi ritu

this is one of the most lovely os i have read ๐Ÿ‘
awesome & so moving
pls do cont this one ๐Ÿ˜ณ
thanks for pm ๐Ÿค—

Heyloo Pavithra๐Ÿค—
Awww thanks sooo much it really means a lot!๐Ÿ˜ณ
hehe will do since so many requested๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: crazysakshi_19

๐Ÿ‘

๐Ÿ˜Š
๐Ÿ‘

Thank youuu๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome
It was just amazing
Beautiful
Just loved it
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thank youuu๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: Humairaa

wow awsm os

it was just beautiful
loved it

Thank yoouuu๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwssmmm OS
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Thanks for PM

Thank yoouuu๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

why are you so superb in your writing...!

ot ws beautifully etched out...like a person craving for love have wrote it directly frm heart...as if th words r running on frm heart nd impringting on th paper themselves!

it ws awesome!
keep writing

love
Aisha

Heylooo Aisha!๐Ÿค—
ahhh that really means a lot to me! those words u wrote...wow๐Ÿ˜ณ
thank youuu๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: sakshiarjun

Touching... Its just not a letter its Arjun's heart pouring into the paper...
Love u dear... U always comes up with ideas with which we all could relate our feelings...
The OS was awesome... Hats off to u๐Ÿ‘
Agree with Easha... Whats say??

hehehe first of all thank you sooo much! Loveee you more for loving my work so much! and i am glad you liked reading it ๐Ÿ˜ณ i guess it was a part of me as well๐Ÿค”
Thank youu and yes, will write a little bit more!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: NainaSM

Awww super cute confession .๐Ÿ‘... lovely ... Ms sakshi ka jaadu .๐Ÿ˜ณ... really nice ...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Heylooo Naina๐Ÿค—
Ahhh thank youu it means a lot!๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: laila1994

Just one sentence

I am speechlessโค๏ธ

Thank youu Laila๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: yams.s

Wonderful Update

Emotions beautifully potrayed

very well written

Thank youuu๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

woweee...
awesome...amazing..
ur r a fabulous writer
loved every bit..
thnx for pm

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Awww hank youuu๐Ÿค— that means a lot to me!!

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘awesome that was one hell of a love letter only because it came from arjun's heart

it felt so right arjun never spoke his love or concern in show also but it could have been fun if they showed him penning down his real feelings specially for sakshi ๐Ÿ˜Š
can write sequel of this by sakshi actually receiving the letter and she replying back ๐Ÿ˜ณ with all her love
thanks for pm and do keep writing because now a days there r so many less people writing arakshi
may be because show has ended and most of them have lost interest the one who read as well the one's who write ๐Ÿ˜”

Awww Shefali know what you mean... a couple of my friends have left the forum
but anyway, life moves on! hehe dont worry, i still shall keep writing as long as i have readers like you๐Ÿค—
thank youuu ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

The letter from Arjun reminds me of a proverb that goes "The word that is heard perishes, but the letter that is written remains".

Thank youuu Farheen๐Ÿค—
Awesome quote as always๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thank youuu๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: angle1shanu

superb update..,fellings of arjun were beautifully expressed...it so well written that it touch the reader's heart...plz make this an ss...

Thank youuu๐Ÿค—
hehe maybe not SS but a three-shot๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Rituuu rituuu ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Arjun feeling about sakshi going away,his pains of not seeing her,feel her was all sooo sooo perfectly expressed ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

I totally felt the pain...especiallly the last paragraph where arjun want sakshi to return back to him..it was really very emotional

Yaar you writeee sooo awesomely..no words define that โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ haan haan pata hain there's always room for improvement ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Saw this quote...it actually suits arjun situation ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
'You can clutch the past so tightly to your chest that it leaves your arms too full to embrace the present'. ~Jan Glidewell

Thank you sooo sooo much ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— and yes yes do continue soon warna SYS ๐Ÿ˜Ž ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Ps-Am not gonna leave you until you completeee the story and am sure no one will too

Poooh Bearrr my BHarateeeโค๏ธ
Awww i love that quotee! I am gonna note it in my new quotes book hehehe
Looove you for the awesome comment and i see you used my fav colour too hehhe๐Ÿค—
I shall be writing more as u know๐Ÿ˜‰
waise bhi, tune request kiya hai how can i refuse eh?๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: Areesha566

Awesome dear..
Too gud,
continue

Thank youuu๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

beautiful update.

really nice.
written very well.
loved it very much.
but plz dont stop it here.
plz cont it.

Thank youuu pariii๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: magati

its so beautiful ritu...

I just loved it...
Thanks for the pm...
PS : how are you dear ???

OMGGG Priya!! I cannot say how happy i am to see you here!!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
havent spoken to u in ages! hope everything is good with youuu!
its ok with me, hehe trying to manage work uni and then trying to find time for myself tooo
but yeah i m good! how are you?
and thank youu for the comment!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Holaaa๐Ÿค—
It is the weekend of updates! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† When the writer goes so crazy that she has to empty out herself before she goes even crazier!
I never imagine I would be writing a part 2 to this! It was meant to be an OS, but it is now becoming a three-shot!
All thanks you my wonderful readers who I love very much๐Ÿค—

And so, this one is just for you all.
Here is Sakshi's reply.

It had to be written before they met๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

Part 2

Arjun,

I am a writer. And yet, for the first time words are failing me as I sit on my desk near the window and hold this blank piece of paper in my hand. You must be thinking, what am I doing writing a letter back to you? I sit here and think, why am I not flying back to you right now, bursting through that glass door of your office? Why is it that I am sitting here writing to you? Not in darkness but in the sunshine that streams in through my window.

Maybe because there is so much I left unsaid. So many words that failed me when I bid you goodbye. The words that need to be poured out onto paper, before I actually see you.

For I know, I will weaken when I see you.

And the words will remain unsaid.

I fell in love with you a long time ago, Arjun. Every time you were around me, I felt myself change. I saw the pain in your eyes and I wanted to heal you. I wanted to see you smile. I wanted you to laugh along with me. My heart longed to hear you laugh. It longed to see you smile. And sometimes, it did. You ignored me, you snapped at me and yet, I felt myself falling for you. I felt myself drowning in your eyes every time you looked at me.

I felt as if I could talk to you about everything, whether you wanted to hear it or not. I felt as if you understood me, in a strange sort of a way.

But I knew, my heart was hoping for something impossible.

You never said anything. Your eyes never confessed anything.

And I knew, I needed to distance myself from you.

I sit here by my window that looks over the garden of the cottage I am residing in right now. There is an eerie silence that surrounds me all the time. No city sounds, no voices. Just a soft rustle of the leaves on the tree outside my window. And my own thoughts.

Here, in this silence, I was trying to move on.

I was trying to drown out your voice in my head. I was trying to forget the way I felt every time you looked at me, even though I attracted only glares from you. I was trying to forget the way you made me feel. Vulnerable and yet, protected.

I was trying to forget the happiness I felt when you were around me.

And yet, I failed.

I couldn't drown you out. And perhaps, a part of me didn't want to drown you out. For I feel your presence everywhere I go. I feel your touch every time the cool breeze brushes past me. I hear your voice every time I try to sleep. I feel your anger every time the strong gusts of wind blows into my room, strewing the blank sheets of paper around me. I feel you all around me, even in the darkest of places. I turn around every time someone calls my name. I wish it would to be your voice calling out my name. Every single time.

You wouldn't leave me alone. You don't leave me alone.

Just like you lost a part of yourself in me, I lost a part of myself in you. I left myself in Mumbai, Arjun. I left my smile, my laugh and my liveliness with you. They remain there, somewhere in the corners of your office. For I forgot to smile ever since I looked into your eyes that one last time. Wishing that you would stop me. Wishing that you would call out my name and say that you needed me.

But you didn't.

I never thought you felt the same about me.

And here I am, with your letter in my hand. Saying that you love me.

That you wait for me behind those glass doors in Mumbai.

I want you to keep those doors open. For I love you. I have loved you for a long time. And even though you are at a distance, I still feel you close to me. By my side, always.

And one of these days, you will find me bursting in through those doors.

I will have my smile back then.

I will live once more. And this time, with you. The paper isn't blank anymore. The words have been said.

Keep the door open. Always.

Sakshi

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I don't know what you were expecting, but this just poured out of me๐Ÿ˜†

There will be one final part๐Ÿ˜‰

Don't forget to leave your comments!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayy me first again
wonderful update
so blank paper ne dil ki puri dastaan suna di
just amazing
w8ng 4 their meet n thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Ritu!!! Another fantastic work of pure art!! Are you married sweetheart because if you are then he's one lucky man who I'm sure gets to read love letters that cause goosebumps. If your not then there's some very fortunate dude out there in the world that will one day be blessed. Lol

My fianc always makes fun of how sentimental and emotional I am. I'm always writing him goofy love notes. Nothing written as brilliantly as the way you write. He's told me often that he secretly adores the letters and silly notes.

Anyways back to topic...brilliant work darling! Another masterpiece.

Cheers,

Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww di soo sweet.
Awesome one.
Loved it very much.
Sakshi's reply said every unsaid words to Arjun.
Thank u fro continuing.
Love u..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rituuu ๐Ÿค—
it was beautiful once again
and thank you sooo much for making it a ts
we are loving it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
lovely writing
very very very nice ๐Ÿ‘

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