Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#411

aah what kind of a man is Mr. Anand

arjun maai part was sweet and touchin

jab tak arjun hai sakshi se uska or uski maai ka dream kisi ko bhi chenne nahi dega

swing part was beautifuly written

thanks 4 pm

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#412

With love from me to Saakshi's father😡

Cool down Farheen.Dekho Maai bhi hai yaha

MAAIBach gaya Saahil Anand😈

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#413

Awesome update...

Sakshi's father left them for money & went to US & got married again there...😡😡😡

Maai saw him with his & wife & son & she was hurted...

Sakshi came to know that her father is behind the notice from Arjun...

Sakshi's anger & hatred is justified...

Saanhil Anand is such a 😡😡😡

Cafe belong to him but How??? 😲😲😲

He demands 50 Lakhs for the cafe...😡😡😡

How Arakshi are going to arrange such a huge amount of money...😕😕😕

Arakshi missing their childhood...😃😃😃

FB was 😃😃😃

Arjun dont want to push her high...😆😆😆

Arjun was missing her carefree laugh...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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yams.s

@yams.s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#414

Nuce Update

Mr Anand is not worth calling himself Saakshi's father

Loved the way Arjun supported Saakshi

Loved the Swing part

Maai and Arjun's bond is something very beautiful

Continue Soon

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#415

Teri muskuraahatein hai takat meri...
mujhko inhi se ummeed mile...

chahe kare kitne sitam ye jahan..
inme hi hai sada hifazat meri...

Such a beautiful part ritu
the end and sweet swing part is the one which highlightens the whole update...

i m helpless...i cnt think abt any of the pains and problems whn i read such beautiful chapters!

continue soon

love

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: fly.high
Teri muskuraahatein hai takat meri...
mujhko inhi se ummeed mile...

chahe kare kitne sitam ye jahan..
inme hi hai sada hifazat meri...

Such a beautiful part ritu
the end and sweet swing part is the one which highlightens the whole update...

i m helpless...i cnt think abt any of the pains and problems whn i read such beautiful chapters!

continue soon

love

I HAD to reply back like right now!!

First of all - you're backkk!🤗

Second of all - YOU just wrote the lines from my favourite most favourite song! So I am going ->🤪

(for the umpteenth time). And I actually did have the song playing in the bg when I imagined the whole sequence and wrote about it! Call it my Humdard obsession😳🤪

Anyhooo..thank youu for the comment! It's good to see you here after so long🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: Areesha566
plz update ritu

waiting

Hey! Sorry was busy with my dissertation submission..which is done now!

Will be updating soon😳

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#418

again sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

both the updates was superb yaar...

loved it...

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#419

Hi HI...

First I checked if I had commented... seeing nothing am like okie!

What you wrote about unpleasant memories is so true...

The worst part being that the minute you feel the past is gone... that's the exact minute it strikes back... *sigh*

The flashback was beautiful.. in the sense how Arjun supported his maai...

One key thing that has always attracted me to this story is the relationship of Arjun and Maai's relationship..

The mother child bond in them is so strong... really...

Agh... Saahil Anand... one man can really be the disaster of one's life...

Sakshi's reaction to his name was beautifully sketched...

And even I have the same question... why... is he back...

SOmething tells me Ritu it's more than just "being the bad guy" game for Saahil Anand...

Kuch aur baat hai... am positive about that...

50 lakhs... shoot.. one week and 50 lakhs.. not an easy thing...

Though I would like to know what was actually the feeling Saahil had for his daughter...

For his wife... heh.. it's pretty evident...

**lost**

Oh... actually I re-read the story and became lost... again!

Loved the way you highlighted Arakshi's romance...

Everything was just perfect...

Even the title...

I won't write anything further cause I don't have anything else to write... hihi...

I forgot what to write..

My next wods would be jogsrgnuhjiort.. iotrgoisfor..oirnfavw..nretre

SO yeah... better stop it here!

Awesome update Ritu!

Loads of luv,

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#420

Heylooo! Sooo sorry for the super late update... I am in India and no WiFi :( I'm posting from my phone so please excuse the formatting!

To those who celebrate.. happy Durga Puja and a happy Navrattri!

Here's the next updatee.. Kk urf Kunchu.. This is for youuu..the end bit was your idea.. Well this is half..the rest will follow in the next update hehe

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Dooo leave your precious comments! And sooo sorry I couldn't reply individually this time...

Tethering not working

Thank you sooo much for reading my story and commenting.. You know how much it means to me 😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago