Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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yams.s

@yams.s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Nice and beautiful update

The bond between Arjun and Saakshi is indeed unique

Saakshi's father is behind all this

Continue Soon

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Oh really dear
I can't accept her dad comes after so long time
Or should I say first time in this story
As we know some hints of Arjun parents
In this story but sakshi dad
First time but why he give the legal
Notice to her

Is he buy that cafe?
Or he want to tease his wife again?
What the reason if separation of sakshi parents
Or did he know that sakshi his daughter
Oh many question comes in mind
Oh please dear do continue

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@Arakshiya_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

awsomeee updates appi...
love love love it...
the proposal is awssmmm...
again twist...arjun ke perents ka pata nahi sakki ka dad aa gaye...
plz do con.sonnn!!!!

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Aadhya

@AadhyaAashutosh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Hi Ritu

awesome update 👏

arjun & sakshi were too cute

bt sakshi's father is behind all these??? 😲

thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: kunchu
Res
Nope I didn't see that coming
N sorry to say someone is gonna kill u
Will come back to unres soon

Back
Loved yr maai a lot
Kithni achi hai wo
Her relation with Arjun n Sakshi was indeed unique
The fb hayeee
And i nvr saw that coming in climax
Mujhe laga it was Rawte Sr
But smart girl
Its Anand sr
That's grt
Waiting for nxt part

🤣🤣🤣

it wasn't that big of a cliffhanger thoughh..bada wala phir milenge ke liye preparing😛

coming back to your comment! thanks sooo much KK 😃🤗

yes yess hoon na main ehsmartt😉

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update didi.
No tension when Arjun is here.
Flashback was so beautiful.
Loved it very much.
Both of them had a story of their own.
Loved the way Arjun consoled Sakshi.
He never fails to bring smile in her face.
But the thing bothers me that how can a father stoop so low!!
First he left Maai and Sakshi alone.
And he came back again to make his own daughter's life hell.
Pliisshhh con soonz...
Waiting for the next chapter...

Thank youuu Easha🤗

yeah... but then arjun hai naa😉

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Flashback was Very Beautiful...
Sakshi's father is behind all this...!!!!
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

Thanks a lot Niki! Glad you liked it😃

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved Arakshi
Flashback was beautiful
So Sakshi's dad is behind all this
what next????????
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thanks sooo much Shravani🤗

eh..hope you'll like the next part..it's turning out to be horrible😭

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
FB of Sakshi & Maai's small own world was 😃😃😃
Arjun came to meet Sakshi & promised her that nothing vll happen...😃😃😃
FB of Arjun & Maai was 😃😃😃
Sakshi's father is behind all this...😲😲😲...But Why???😡😡😡

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thanks so much Sneha!!🤗

Why...you shall find out in the next one😛

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Maai!!!
This isn't for you.😡It's for Maai. Tumhe to main kuch aur hi dungi😈
Anyways back to the update.
Oho!!! Mujhe to laga her father is no more &the one behind the notice is Arjun's dad but ee to shocking twistwa hai🤔

P.S:My best wishes for your training which I pray it to get extended for another few days. And of course, you'll b asked to sit in the front row
I'll take my blessings back only if u give me wat I want,to b very precise where u cliff hanged me last time.😈

Wah kya smile hai! 😆

LOL..unfortunately the training didn't get extended (even though I ended up in that workshop..mehh) 🤣

Thanks for the comment and the best wishes hehe 🤗

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update!
Interesting twist,.. i didnt expect sakshi's father to be behind the notice...

Thank youuu Jia😳 hahaha got ya😆😉

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update
so it was sakshi's dad who sent the notice but why does he know who sakshi is
nice flash backs with sakshi and with arjun 😊
arjun trying to protect sakshi but then she will have to be told and then arjun will be there for her
and both of them will have to find a way to save the cafe
sleeping under the stars wow just few days back saw sky full of stars in jungle its amazing thing 😃
thanks for pm

Thank you soo much Shefali!🤗

aww that sounds amazing...lying under the stars is indeed an amazing feeling😳

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
awesome update.
just loved it.
thankx for pm.
cont soon.
sorry for not commenting on previous chap.

Thanks soo much Parii! It's okay😳

Originally posted by: sar88
Wow you are an amazing writer with beautiful imagination. I could really see that cafe, Sakshi's home, their boat play and that street everything. It's just beautiful.and the way you portrayed Arjun/maayi and Arjun/Sakshi is just awesome. It's so pure and fresh

Wow...thanks so much for all the kind words😳 It means a lot! Thank you again😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Amazing update
and yes we didn't expect this
thanks for the pm
take ur time

Thank you soo much anita😳

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
Ok...to be honest..I didn't expect that... 😆

The update was so nice...
The FB part was very nice...
I loved this update...

Thanks for the pm...

Will be waiting...

Hahahaa😛 tha na surprising😆

Thanks soo much!🤗

Originally posted by: NainaSM
Nice part arjun trying to make sakshi happy
Sakshi arjun bonding is great
Flashback is nice
Mr anand sent notice why
Little confusing
Continue soon

Thank you sooo much! Glad you're liking it🤗😳

you'll find out soon😃

Originally posted by: yams.s
Nice and beautiful update

The bond between Arjun and Saakshi is indeed unique

Saakshi's father is behind all this

Continue Soon

Thank you soo much!🤗

Originally posted by: Rehana25
Oh really dear
I can't accept her dad comes after so long time
Or should I say first time in this story
As we know some hints of Arjun parents
In this story but sakshi dad
First time but why he give the legal
Notice to her

Is he buy that cafe?
Or he want to tease his wife again?
What the reason if separation of sakshi parents
Or did he know that sakshi his daughter
Oh many question comes in mind
Oh please dear do continue

hahaha yes, i did drop a hint of his presence before but it wasn't that obvious😛

your questions shall be answered soon😃

Thanks for the comment🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
awsomeee updates appi...
love love love it...
the proposal is awssmmm...
again twist...arjun ke perents ka pata nahi sakki ka dad aa gaye...
plz do con.sonnn!!!!

Thank youuu Gausiya🤗

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh
Hi Ritu
awesome update 👏
arjun & sakshi were too cute
bt sakshi's father is behind all these??? 😲
thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

Thanks sooo much Aadhya🤗

yess he is.. you shall find out in the next one😉

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Heylooo🤗

Sorry for the insanely late update! This one took forever...just like the title😆

I know, bad joke.😆

Anyhooo, here's the next update!

The last bit was inspired by the song that lingers in my mind day and night (and doesn't let me breatheee) - Humdard😳 and a green lawn..and some old memories with my bestie in Delhi.😳

Special thank youuu to Avniii for making the VM on Humdard🤗 (I know, odd place to mention it😆 but it helped towards writing the last bit😆)

Here goes! I hope I have made it believable and plausible...if not then do shout out😛

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Please do leave your precious comments🤗

P.S - Couldn't think of a better chapter name

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago