Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
FRIENDSHIP... Aahhh...Loved the four musketeers Ritu dear...
Your flashbacks keeps on amazing me...
Loved the bond between the four...
Arakshi scenes were heart touching...
But you blasted my head by Arjun's confession...
OMG...How could he became the cause of Mai's death?
Was she died in attempt to save him?? Just a wild guess sorry...
Now what will be Sakshi's reaction??
Will she ever forgive him??
Arjun's world started spinning and my head too...
Excited and anxious for the next updates dear...
Don't make us cry for long okay...
Please don't separate them dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi ritu
awesome update 👏
imagining sam & arjun in uniform...lolz 😆
yeh fantastic four were so lovely...inhe dekhke meri school lyf yaad aagayi 😳
but wht was in last part???? hw could arjun be responsible???? 😕
thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rituuu... 🤗
I'm here.. finally!

My lady, you've surpassed all possible praise-worthy adjectives in my vocabulary!.. Honestly, this one's just soo perfect.. 😳

They're back.. This time as Arjun and his titli..❤️
There were times when I wanted to cry with Sakshi, but your Arjun gave me hope and made me smile instead..
Their friendship is so beautifully sketched.. Their fights, silent understanding and the soft undercurrents of something even more deep and intense underneath couldn't have been described any better.. It was all so real that it doesn't seem like fiction anymore.. 👍🏼
You do have a thing for childhood romance, eh? Should I take it as a hint of some sorts?! 😆.

I am a die-hard fan of Vidya and Tahi's Arakshi's and now, my dear you've added to that line-up.. You guys create sheer magic with the magical couple! And make me want to cry at the unfairness of all of it!

But why fear, when you are here with your magic wand.. 😳

I cannot even begin to comment on how I feel about Sakshi and her mother's relationship. It's so similar to what each one of us share with our mums and yet so beautifully different.. I really felt for the girl when she seems lost in a maze without her mother.. 🥺

Your description of Arjun's relationship with Maai is yet another feather in your cap.. A truly special relationship that cannot be described in words.. 👏

Ayesha-Arjun: You know I always look fwd to their dynamics in fics where they're not romantically involved (of course I've loved 2 of those on AF beyond reasoning) but there's something very unique and special about them that and you've managed to bring out those emotions perfectly..
I always wanted to watch them sharing a mature yet sweet friendship on the show, which of course was doomed..

The four muskeeters.. How I loved them.. Looking fwd to lots more there..

I really wanted to taste that coffee cake! ❤️ Damn! You're such a natural at describing things that I could actually imagine myself as a fly on the wall, out there with them..

Looking fwd to lots more.. And of course, the infamous cliffhanger! 😆😉 Hi-5!

Do send me PMs for this one whenever you update next.. 😃
And I may have said this before, but you're one of those very few gifted people who can make others smile with just a random play of words.. Kudos to you for that! 🤗

P.S. I started reading the other and was almost in tears! London darshan karvaya tumne! 😭 How cruel is that! Will catch up on it pretty soonish, hopefully! And without missing London too much.. *fingers crossed*


Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Di fata fat update kro plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!
you stopped at such an important point... update fast! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

Res/unres

came first after a long ages...but editing the comments late...
sry for late...
from start then there childhood...to late it was sweet update...but end i became shocked how can arjun be the responsible for his maai dead...how can u stop in cliff hanger...iu so bad...plz do cont soon...
i think these days ur becoming so busy...right?
friends reunion was super duper...
thanks for PM...
will be waiting for ur next part...

hey anuu🤗
thanks sooo much! that's okay ajkal i m not finding time at all! and hence the delayed updates...anyways trying my best to get everything squeezed in lol
hope u like the nxt part!😳

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

amazing part.

written beautifully.
thankx for pm.

thank you pariii🤗

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Awesome update didi.

Loved it.
Loved Arakshi moments.
They are so cute.
And then Sam came.
Loved the four musketeers hug.
Flashback was cute.
Sakshi sensed something fishy fishy..
But what was Aisha talking about?
Maai left for Arjun??
What does that mean?
Con soonish..
Don't u dare to turn this into SS from FF.

Thank you soo much Easha🤗
find out in the next chapter😉

Originally posted by: kunchu

4 musketeers ne dil jeeth liya

such a cute people
FB was so sweet
just imagine Sam and Arjun in uniform.😆
But end me kya hua?
hows he responsible for Mai's death
1 small doubt: Mai died 6 years back?? means Sakshi was all alone since??
Sorry if you had cleared it in previous chapter
aaj kal amnesia hai yaar
PS: i didnt get your muffin
it must have been a good one ke koi raste me chori kar di😭

Heylooo Helna🤗
hahaa i thoroughly enjoyed writing it and i m glad that you enjoyed reading😳 thank youu for the comment!
um yep, she died - sorry if it wasn't clear😕 basically she had died and that was the reason arjun had been away for that many years..rest you have to read on😊
awww post man ne kha liya hoga😡 i am sending one moreee! hope you get this one he he

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
loved it
The 4 musketeers were amazing
the FB was too cute
Loved the reunion
last me kya tha?
How is Arjun responsible for Maai's death?
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thank you soo much Shravani!🤗
Keep reading to know more😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

amazing part...
love it...
four musketeers..so cute...
exams ke pehle mera haal bhi sam ki tarah rehta hai...lol...
fb was supereb...
bt ye last kya tha...
con.soon...
thanx for pm...

Thank youuu Gausiya🤗

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow beautiful update

very nicely written
loved it
the four musketeers that was lovely
awsm flashback
last part has scared me though
do continue soon

Thanks a lot Humairaa🤗

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Flashback was sooo beautiful... Lovely...
Awww the four masketeers... were sooo cute
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

Thank youuu Nikita🤗

Originally posted by: fly.high

Such a cute update ritu...loved the four musketeers...they reminded me of my old good days with my friends...!

the best part was of Sameer's POV! i loved them to bits...

But at the end! OMG!!! to be honest...i did expect this...bt i didnt' expected to aisha to know everything!

continue soon ritu.
love.

thanks sooo much Aisha🤗 aww i got quite nostalgic writing it tooo coz we used to do the same at school haha😃

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice update 😃
loved all 4 friends meeting again after 6 yrs and then the group hug 😃
arjun trying to bring smile back on sakshi's face by doing odd things like teasing her whlie dusting or keep on talking while shopping but she is his titlee so she can sense that he is upset abt something and want to know the same
flashback again was good exams ke time ki nervousness and then how famous group hug started 😃
oh my god 😲 so this was the reason for arjun going away from his titlee he thinks because of him maai died
and so he lost both his beloved people in one day maai gone for ever and he just took of leaving behind his love his titleee
sakshi heard it now how will she react ❓
thanks for pm
sorry forgot to mention don't u dare to change it to ss instead of ff arre hum hain na padhne ke liye
abhi toh arjun titleee ka full on romance shuru bhi nahi hua 😉 and sam aisha ka bhi
friends ki saath main full on masti nahi hui 😃 etf ka sath main maza nahi hua
so don't u even think abt it SYS

Thank you so much for the comment Shefali🤗
hehe will keep writing as long as you all read and comment😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Arjun is doing cheating in cleaning...😆😆😆
Arjun gave training to Titli...😲😲😲
Sam missed him very badly...😃😃😃
Last time revision in exams is like 🤢🤢🤢
Arjun solved the sum...😲😲😲
Like The Four Musketeers...😃😃😃
Sakshi understood that something is wrong with him...
Arjun responsible for Maai's death...😲😲😲 😕😕😕
And Aisha know about this...😲😲😲
Sakshi heard him saying this...😲😲😲
Don't make this as SS...😭😭😭
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thank youuu Sneha🤗
will try to keep it an FF only as long as you keep reading he he 😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

Last minute revision brought in exam memories.Na na,I never did it but jo mere saamne karta tha usko maarne ka mann karta tha.😆😆
Friendship of the 4musketeers was beautiful. 😃
Tumne bhi aise point par rok diya. 😡

Thank youu Farheen🤗
loool i always did it right up to the five minutes before the exam😛 and i always did it with my friends and my bff always asked me the most absurd questions which i didnt know the answer to lol..it made me feel like i didnt know anything😆😆

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Yes yes the four musketeers are back together...this can not be more awesomeee😃😃😃

I looove how the chotu them hugged before exams and arjun could not see his titli tensed😳😳

Awesooome update...but yeh kya itna bada suspense...bachii ki jaan logi kya hawww😲😲

Update jaldii jaldiii seh...samjhi tum ya arjun ko call karoon😉😉

Thank you soo sooo much for this beautiful update and you better continue this story in the right way how you thought about it🤗🤗

Pooh Bearrr🤗
lol lol tere liye jaldi kar rahi hoon updateee..saturday kaha tha but doing it on monday only😛 sirf tere liyeee haha (nahi nahi arjun ko call karne ki zaroorat nahi hai lol)🤗 looove youuu

Originally posted by: shreya09

Ritu !!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗 🤗
great update (as usual) 👍🏼
the reunion, the flashback scenes of four Musketeers... was very very very sweet...
but the ending part... u shocked me
update soon pleeeaaase (if possible) 😳

Thank youuu Shreya🤗


Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital


Ofcourse ...meeting friends after a long time is such an awesome
feeling. And their fb moments..really nostalgic...

Arjun is responsible for Maai's death...???
And Aisha knew it..???

Waiting for Sakshi's response..

Cont. soon...

Thank you sooo much Anjali!🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

Amazing update..
Loved the reunion...the group hug and the four musketeers
fb was nice..
OMG!!! arjun is respossible for maai's death.. 😲
waiting to see mote
contd. Soon
thnx for pm

Thank youuu Aradhya🤗

Originally posted by: Areesha566

Awesome part ritu
arakshi and four maskateers was fab
love fb
sakshi sense something fishy
arjun ki wajah se maai gayi?
Update soon waitng

Thank youuu for the comment 🤗

Originally posted by: sakshiarjun

FRIENDSHIP... Aahhh...Loved the four musketeers Ritu dear...

Your flashbacks keeps on amazing me...
Loved the bond between the four...
Arakshi scenes were heart touching...
But you blasted my head by Arjun's confession...
OMG...How could he became the cause of Mai's death?
Was she died in attempt to save him?? Just a wild guess sorry...
Now what will be Sakshi's reaction??
Will she ever forgive him??
Arjun's world started spinning and my head too...
Excited and anxious for the next updates dear...
Don't make us cry for long okay...
Please don't separate them dear...

Thank youu for the comment Meenu!🤗
haha dont worry i wont make you cry much 😉 i try to make my stories as feel-good as possible!😳 um, you have to read to find out more😉

Originally posted by: PavithraKrish

hi ritu

awesome update 👏
imagining sam & arjun in uniform...lolz 😆
yeh fantastic four were so lovely...inhe dekhke meri school lyf yaad aagayi 😳
but wht was in last part???? hw could arjun be responsible???? 😕
thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

Thank youuu Pavithra!🤗
read onn to find out😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie

Rituuu... 🤗

I'm here.. finally!

My lady, you've surpassed all possible praise-worthy adjectives in my vocabulary!.. Honestly, this one's just soo perfect.. 😳

They're back.. This time as Arjun and his titli..❤️
There were times when I wanted to cry with Sakshi, but your Arjun gave me hope and made me smile instead..
Their friendship is so beautifully sketched.. Their fights, silent understanding and the soft undercurrents of something even more deep and intense underneath couldn't have been described any better.. It was all so real that it doesn't seem like fiction anymore.. 👍🏼
You do have a thing for childhood romance, eh? Should I take it as a hint of some sorts?! 😆.

I am a die-hard fan of Vidya and Tahi's Arakshi's and now, my dear you've added to that line-up.. You guys create sheer magic with the magical couple! And make me want to cry at the unfairness of all of it!

But why fear, when you are here with your magic wand.. 😳

I cannot even begin to comment on how I feel about Sakshi and her mother's relationship. It's so similar to what each one of us share with our mums and yet so beautifully different.. I really felt for the girl when she seems lost in a maze without her mother.. 🥺

Your description of Arjun's relationship with Maai is yet another feather in your cap.. A truly special relationship that cannot be described in words.. 👏

Ayesha-Arjun: You know I always look fwd to their dynamics in fics where they're not romantically involved (of course I've loved 2 of those on AF beyond reasoning) but there's something very unique and special about them that and you've managed to bring out those emotions perfectly..
I always wanted to watch them sharing a mature yet sweet friendship on the show, which of course was doomed..

The four muskeeters.. How I loved them.. Looking fwd to lots more there..

I really wanted to taste that coffee cake! ❤️ Damn! You're such a natural at describing things that I could actually imagine myself as a fly on the wall, out there with them..

Looking fwd to lots more.. And of course, the infamous cliffhanger! 😆😉 Hi-5!

Do send me PMs for this one whenever you update next.. 😃
And I may have said this before, but you're one of those very few gifted people who can make others smile with just a random play of words.. Kudos to you for that! 🤗

P.S. I started reading the other and was almost in tears! London darshan karvaya tumne! 😭 How cruel is that! Will catch up on it pretty soonish, hopefully! And without missing London too much.. *fingers crossed*


Avniii🤗
I am all dancing dancing after seeing you here
first of all thank you sooo much for taking out time to write such a hugeee wala comment! Love you very much for that (not just for that haha)❤️
i was at the airport and was all smiles when i read the entire comment he he😳thank you sooo soo much for all the kind words and omg you compared me to Vidya di and tahi?😲😲😲 no waaay they write waay better than me ☺️
but thank youu🤗🤗🤗
LOL LOL nooo no childhood romance or any such friendship in my life (but kaaash hota lol)..i just dream too much i guess🤪
ahh i know..so many things were expected from the show but they all got shattered🥺
ah oh welll...hum hai naa😃

Thank you sooo much again for all those words - it means such a lot lot to me coming from you! Coz you are a fantastic writer yourself😳
P.S - I hope i didnt make you miss london tooo much😒
Edited by ritu_24 - 11 years ago

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