Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05 - Page 10

Originally posted by: shreya09

Rituuu 🤗

this story of yours is full of sweet & cute flashbacks...
little Arjun,little Sakshi & their Mom... a treat to read...

very very very nice update 👍🏼

waiting for more 😳

p.s. i want pm 😳 (you know that don't you 😉 😃)

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Nice update. Titli ki smile vapas lana Arjun😊

Originally posted by: anu91

I can't see sakshi as this sad yaar...
Bring back my bubbly titli...
There old days was so cute...
Plz do update soon...
Thanks for PM...

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

how i wish i could paint the walls just like that when i was kid but then all moms r not like maai

let u make wreck and play with paints 😃 though what they did on walls i once did on pot and it was as much fun

loved the special bond of arjun and his maai

now arjun has lot to do bring back his titlee and the cafe maai's and titlee's dream

but why did arjun leave his titlee is still a mystery 🤔

thanks for pm waiting for arjun sakshi bonding and love

and yes don't u dare remove me from ur pm list sys 😡

by the way in august kerela will be much more beautiful as it rains that time so greens will be more clear and fresh 😊

Originally posted by: manurocks

this is so awesome...

keep sending me pms

Originally posted by: kunchu

lovely

Felt in love with this cute family and their time

it seems so natural

loved it

yes my name is Helna. and I do want the PM

continue soon

Originally posted by: anitasharma

Beautiful update
little arjun sakshi are so sweet
loved their flaseback
continue soon

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow awsm update

very beautifully written

love the flashback 😊

and please do pm me

continue soon

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Rituuu rituuu wooow wooow wooow 😳 😳

Who would imagine about the splashing of paint wala idea..only you can do that and what an awesome idea,unique wala idea 😃 😃 😃

And and all are my favorite color...haaye i looove it mooore now ☺️

Yes yes we want titli smile back and also the sweet and cute convo's of arjun and sakshi 😛 😛

I looove the update very berry much...haanji emotional thi but bohot changa tha⭐️

I dunno if its the right way of writing it but still 😉 " eta camatkra chila 👏

About the pm wala question...nooo nooo i wont answer that...you already know the answer meri rituuu 😳

Biiig biiig wala hug to you and continue soon 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwssmmm parts
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Beautifully Written...
Cont sooon
Plzzz PM me Plzzz

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Loved the starting...😃😃😃
Awww...kash mein bhi aise hi kabhi paint kar pati...😆😆😆
Really loved little titli jealous of him, he grinning on her, & Maai...😆😆😆
Hope he find her Titli's smile soon...😭😭😭

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

I want PM...😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Areesha566

Amazing

Originally posted by: jia03

Awesome update 👏

The painting of the walls was really nice 👍🏼

p.s. do continue sending me pms 😊

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
Loved it
The flashback was too cute
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
I want PM and I am sure u know that very well😉

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

awesome update..
loved the way u defined colours..
arjun and maai share a strong and i would say special bond..
again same que. y did arjun leave sakshi????!
update soon and dont forget to pm me

Originally posted by: coolRD

dis ws really vry beautiful!!!! it had so mch sadness yet so mch happiness in d form of titli, arjun nd maai..

u redifined d meaning of colours 4 me.. i nevr flt so mch warmth in dem.. no 1 wil evr b abl 2 find sch wndrful painters in d whole wrld.. i really admire their cuteness.. nd i found maai d sweetest person of d entire univrse.. i jst luv dis lady.. it flt so li8 reading abt dem

bt at d same tym i flt really heavy readng abt d pain dey bth r goin thru.. jst cn't c dem engulfd in darkness aftr havng a glimpse of their wndrful childhood days.. jst hpe dat arjun manages 2 brk thru d wall sakshi has built around herslf

wil b eagrly waitng 2 read d nxt prt.. do cntinue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm

p.s.: i wnt pms 4 ur stry upd8s plzz

Originally posted by: miss_precious

Wow you did get me emotional there...

Really hope no more emotional updates but only fun and loved ones

Love your stories

Thanks a lot for the pm... Really appreciate them

Update soon plz x

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

superb update.

it was emotional update.

but still loved it.

cont soon.

thankx for pm.

and plz pm me for next updates.

Originally posted by: PavithraKrish

hi ritu

awesomewa update 😃

little sakshi & little arjun are so adorable 😳

plz cont soon & i want ur pm 🤗

Originally posted by: yams.s

beautiful and awesome update

Originally posted by: Rehana25

Hey ritu
Sorry for late comments I read your story
Just now I must say it's really nice and touchy
A good blend of past memories and present happening
Love the glimpse of Arjun and sakshi childhood
Like the pet name titli
Mom feeling and hardworking to get successfully run the cafe
I really appreciate her effort
But why Arjun leave her alone
And why he think he can't be with her always
It's confuse me I like the way they paint the house walls
And of course that chocolate muffin is very delicious
Please do continue soon

Originally posted by: teamasadandzoya

first of all, im sorry for totally disappearing from the forum. A bunch of things happened, life got hectic. But I'm back, and I really did miss reading your stories! :D

heck, you are seriously one talented writer! The way you penned down all the emotions and the colours on the wall and everything - well done! It was such a treat to read - i literally was on the verge of tears near the end . This chapter has left me intrigued and wanting for more! Please do update sooon! :))))