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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
awesome concept .
loved it.
continue soon.
thanks for pm.
something different hai nah . i just hope it is ariya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
nice concept
wating for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Sorry friends for late update.. Bg in exams.. Here u go:

Days were going per it's schedule. Whereas he was bg searching for the voice that captured his heart. There were many voice he heard but none could capture him other than this. The voice was raw. The emotions displayed were touching. He couldn't sleep many nights due to the voice. The song was never ever heard again. He was desperate to hear it again. He used to visit many singing competition going in the college to hear that voice or just the song but failure was what he got. He was very frustrated due to it n used to lash it out on his friends. One such day everyone was present in such cultural programme which was in it's end. Suddenly the water started to pour n they had to wrap before time. All ran towards shed to get away from getting drenched. But among all this a girl was busy enjoying the rain. Her friends were saying her to come with them but she stubbornly refused. Her friends showed fake anger n showed their back when they heard a melodious song sang by her n turn to see her n she was dancing n singing her heart out. Here is the song:
Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante
Nahin -2 Koyi Rokle Yahin
Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann
Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na -2
Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante
Nahin, Koyi Rokle Yahin Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann
Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na -2 Aa...haanaa
Hochale Thhandi Hawahosang Mann
Bhi Gaya
Dhhundhhu Main Kahaan Usko, Batlaaye
Koyi Mujhko
Ke Haan Haan Haan Re Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann
Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na -2
Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante
Nahin, Koyi Rokle Yahin Haanhaaye Aisa Samahmmphir
Hoga Kahaan
Jee Loon Main Isse Khulke, Saawan Bhi
Zara Khulke
Arre Sun Sun Sun
Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na -2
Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante
Nahin, Koyi Rokle Yahin
Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann
Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na -2
she danced n made all dance with her n enjoyed rain. It was seen by him. He was happy to know that he finally found her. He was about to go to her when his friend karan called him, 'arjun' he turned around n talked with karan. The song ended n the girl's friend dragged her with them scolding her n she made cute puppy faces which melted them.. They shared group hug which arjun saw but unfortunately couldn't see her face. When he was about to approach her her friends left with her. But he saw a anklet of her had fallen during her masti n he kept it with him as a rememberance.


Riya, sakshi n aisha went to their dorms alloted to them. They were talking about today's event. Sakshi n aisha were scolding riya for her stupidity. She was cutely saying sorry to them making cute puppy faces. They reached their dorms n changed their clothes n were busy chatting with each other with hot cup of coffee that riya made for them.. They slept off to their dreamland thinking about their coming competition. They were nervous as well as excited about it. Their practise was on full swing. They did n't want any flaw in their performance. Here arjun was just seeing the anklet n thinking about the girl. She was full of life. But couldn't see her face. He was sad thinking about it. But his face lit up thinking the up coming competition will give him chance to see her. He was hopeful to see the owner of the voice.. Thinking about today's event he too eventually fell asleep.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
nice one dear.. But short.. Like it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Wow dear..
It was awesome and mind blowing update.
Just loved it.
So arjun was searching that girl who stoled his heart by her singing her voice.
Aww arjun was very frustated that he couldnt find her.
He lash out his frustation to his friend.
So riya was drenching in rain and her friend scolding her but she didnt listen and started her song.
Yayy finally arjun find her.
Aww but couldnt see her face.
The song selection was awesome.
So all the knight arjun was seeing riya anklet.
Lovely.
Do continue soon.
And next time please bada wala update.
Or please vo wali story ka update do na jisme arjun riya ko traffic signal main dekte hi flat ho jaata hain
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
lovely story
like it, plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update...
Aww arjun still couldn't see her face... poor guy...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nice update he is still searching
her update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
It's BEAUTIFUL update 👏
that songis nice rainy song 😳
update soon and plz try to update your other ARIYA story 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Nice update dear..

Continue soon..!!

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