Arakshi:Aoge jab tum sajna Part-7 updated

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Arakshi- Aoge jab tum sajna

Hi everyone

I am writing a short story may two or three shot ...

Its again arjun and sakshi I am missing them a lot

Here is the first part

(all the characters are imaginary)

PART-1

It is a huge mansion, big main door and huge windows that are decorated with royal curtains and lavish Furniture's and many servants moving here and there in hurry.

In room upstairs a women sitting before the mirror wearing green saree and wearing bangles full of her hands, sindoor and mangalsutra and her hairs are still wet, it was very early sun has not been raised and coming to the side table she held a photo frame in her hand and said "aaj poora dho saal hochuka hai tumhe jaye huye, aur mein yahi umeed ke saath jee rahi hu ki tum aoge aur tumhe mere pyaar ka ehsaas aur iss rishtey ke kadar hokar rahega, aur mein marthe dum thak yeh umeed nahi chodungi, karungi tumhara intezar" tears rolled down from her eyes.

An elderly women walked inside the room and caressed her head and said "tera intezaar bekaar nahi jayega beta, voh ayega zarror aur tumhe zarror apnayega, abh chalo sargi khalo dher hojayega, mein ne sab tayar kar diya hai, aur tumhare liye aaj shaam ka saree bhi rakh diya hai, patha hai sakshi beta tum uss saree mein sabse khoobsurat lagoge khaas kar tumhare liye bannwaya hai mein ne abh chalo Ayesha neeche intezaar kar hai, voh Mrs. Rukmni dam singh Rathode bhi ayi hai na tho hum sab sargi ka rasam poora kar denge chalo" they headed towards the dining area.

Seeing them Mrs. Rukmni said playfully "Arre yeh kya hai Mrs.Anupama Suryakanth Rawte aap apni bahu ko itna choot dithe ho" Mrs.Rawte said "arre mujhe kuch math kahiye aap he se tho seekha hai Mrs.Rathode aap apni bahu ko beti manthi ho tho hum bhi" both of them laughed and sakshi took ashirvad of Mrs.Rukmni she hugged Ayesha and they all sat and had the sargi, it was Karwachauth.

Ayesha was handling her son and Mrs.Anupama Rawte came there and said "arre kya hua yeh rho kyu raha hai?" Ayesha said "dekhiye naa choti maa yeh aaj he bohoth tang kar raha hai" Mrs.Rawte caressed babies hairs and said "aaj isse bhi patha hai ki apni maa ka vrath hai issiliye tang kar raha hai, vaise Sameer kaha hai?" Ayesha said "ETF office, aur kaha honge har wakth kaam kaam iske alawa kuch aur soch the hai kya voh, aaj vrath kholne samay ajaye bhus, patha nahi inn mardo ka kya barosa intezaar karvane mein maza atha hoga" Mrs.Rawte said "meri sakshi tho dho saal se intezaar kar rahi hai, tumne teekh kaha shayad mardo ko intezaar karvane mein maza atha hoga" Ayesha held her hand and said "choti maa aap yese haar jayegi tho sakshi kya karegi, aapko patha hai na voh hasna hi bhool gayi hai aur usko aapke zarrorat hai please aap har nahi sakthi" Mrs.Rawte nodded her head and went from there.

Sakshi knocked a room door, a voice came from inside "come in", sakshi held the trey which had breakfast and headed to the table towards, Mr.Suryakanth Rawte famous business man sitting in his study room with some file and said "vho aapke nashta" Mr.Rawte said "teekh hai beta mein kha lunga" sakshi stood there only Mr.Rawte said "mein kha lunga" seeing her glued to her place kept the file and ate breakfast and took medicines and sakshi took the trey and was about to go from there, Mr.Rawte stopped her and said "yaha aao beta" sakshi went towards him, he slowly caressed her head and said "thank you beta, humesha lagth tha ek beti nahi hai mera, lekin tum voh kasar bhi poora kar diya, shukriya" sakshi smiled and went from there.

Priya Rawte, she is Arjun's cousin sister now staying in Rawte mansion and she is very caring and cute person everyone like her very much and Arjun always liked her and on Rakshabandhan she used to tie rakhi to him. Priya called loudly "vaini(means sister-in-law, bhabhi), sakshi vaini kaha ho aap, mujhe function ke liye ready hona hai help karo na please" Sakshi entered room and said "ha ha zarror help karungi, chalo" they always spent more time and liked eachother presence.

It was already evening, Sakshi was still in Priya's room, Ayesha, Mrs.Rawte and Mrs.Rathodeare ready for the function heard the voice of priya and they went to her room, sakshi was still with priya getting her ready, Mrs.Rawte said "arre sakshi thu abhi thak taya r nahi ho aur yeh priya tum kya kar rahi ho tum tho tayar ho na abh" Priya said "ha ha mein tho tayar ho aaj tho vaini ne tayar kiya hai mujhe, aaj mera pehla vrath hai, acha dikhna tho bantha hai na" Mrs.Rawte held her ears and said "abhi abhi sagayi huya hai abhi yeh haal hai, bichara Akash tumhe kaisw jhelega usko hi patha" Priya tried to remove her hand and said "choti maa please chodo na"

if i get good comments then only i will continue

more comments ok😊

if its boring feel free to say



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Posted: 11 years ago
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res/unres
wow thanks for starting new story...
its quiet different...nice start...
were Arjun went?do Cont soon...
Sry i couldnt comment on ur other story...will comment definitely over there weekend...
Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are greatšŸ¤— dear
It is indeed a fabulous start and has a smooth flow. Loved it.
Don't even dare to think of stopping it.
Samjhe ya samjhavoom😈😔
Please update regularly... Will be waiting for the next update eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnk u 4 strtng a new stry.. beginning is awsme.. cncpt seems quite intrstng
luvd ol d characters.. u'v presntd dem really wel
hpe sakshi's wait finishes soon
eagr 2 read mre of it.. upd8 soon
thnx 4 d pm
p.s.: plz upd8 ur othr stry too
Edited by coolRD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start yaar... do continue soon.
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Am soo glad you writing another story...you're soo good at it 😃 😃
The story seems to be very interesting...soo yes you should definitely continue it shymali 😳
Thank you sooo much and continue soon šŸ¤— šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am happy to read your new story
Start wonderful
Keep continue
Why Arjun leave sakshi alone
Poor sakshi suffer from two years
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome super update
Loveittt
Thanks for pm
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great concept...its something new ...so i am in
loved all convowhere iz arjun ????y iz he away?????waiting for answers
contd. soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So happy to read your new story.. loved the introduction of arjun's family or should i say sakshi's family... šŸ‘šŸ¼...
Liked priya's character seems interesting with funny antics.. (prediction LOL)
Awww sakshi is waiting for arjun... curious to know about the past.. (which separate both of them even after marriage).. waiting for that..
Plz continue soon.. and thank you for PM.. šŸ¤—

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