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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story continue shyamali😊😊😊
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Awesome concept
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thanks for starting a new story
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Part-2

Mrs.Rawte said "arre sakshi thu jaa jake tayar hoke neeche aaja, guest's athe hi honge" sakshi has no happiness in her eyes, she always try to be alone she always avoided to be with everyone and always sit in her room. Sakshi went to her room she saw the red saree on her bed, it was grand red saree with golden zari work and there was a heavy necklace and earings with matching bangles she took the saree and went to dressing room, she came wearing the saree, it suited her white skin and she was looking beautiful and she wore the necklace and other accessories and she got ready, she took sindoor and applied between her partings and her hairs were curled and her eyes had kajal that highlighted her dove shaped eyes, she kept red bindi that even more increased her beauty she got ready and went to the hall, seeing her Mr and Mrs.Rawte got tears and Mrs.Rawte said "Rawte sahab mujse sakshi ki bebasi nahi dekha jayega abh, usne itna kuch saha hai aur itna kuch hogaya uske zindagi mein phir bhi hum kuch nahi karparahe hai" Mr.Rawte said "agar mere haath mein kuch hotha tho sabh kuch karletha anupama uske kushiya uss insaan se judi hai jho humare control mein nahi hai mein kya karu" Sakshi was arranging her thal(plate for pooja) and some guest's were asked "yeh hai na Rawte sahab ki bahu, bohoth khoobsurath hai" other women said "arre Khoobsurathi se kya hoga, patha nahi iske pathi kaha hai, ayega nahi, kab ayega kuch nahi patha, aur yeh bhi nahi ki zinda hai ya..." Ayesha heard this and said to the ladies "Auntiji aap jake baitiye na vrath hoga aapka jayiye" they went from there and sakshi had tears.

They sat round and some women started to read the story of Karwachauth and after the rituals they did pooja, and all ladies were in the garden area waiting for moon, so they can break there vrath, sakshi was standing away from them near the window inside the house. Mrs.Rawte came with other women, she was elder sister of Mr.rawte and Bua of Arjun and she is elderly figure now, she came near sakshi and sakshi took ashirvad and Buaji said "iss bhar ayega ya nahi tumhara Arjun" sakshi put her head down and Mrs.Rawte interrupted and said "chaliye didi hum bahar chalthe hai sab vahi hai" Buaji said "tumhe meri baath katne ki zarrorath nahi hai, yeh sakshi jab se ayi hai thab se Arjun vapas nahi aya hai mein ne kaha tumse isse pehle bahar phek yeh manhoos hai lekin thu nahi manthi, abh dekho mera bahu ka yeh pehla vrath hai agar iska chehra dekhegi tho uska bhagya kya hoga patha nahi isiliye isse kehde ki bahar na nikle" and went from there sakshi stood there like an idol and mrs.Rawte said "beta tum unke baatho ka bhura math manna, aur chalo bahar chalthe hai" sakshi said "nahi maa its ok, mein room ke balcony mein apna vrath thod dungi aap jayiye" Mrs.rawte said "yese kaise tum room mein apna vrath todegi chalo" sakshi had tears and said "maa please sab kush hai mein voh mohol karab nahi karna chahthi please aap jayiye" Mrs.Rawte thought for some time and she went from there, sakshi went to her room balcony, there was small pool, it was large room, that has big windows and curtains and sakshi always kept them open and always wind blowing inside the room, she sat hugging her knees near the pool with her pooja thaal beside her.

Ayesha searching for sakshi and when she saw Mrs.Rawte she asked "choti maa sakshi kaha hai kya hua" Mrs.Rawte said "voh didi nahi chahthi hai ki voh bahar aye aur sakshi bhi disturbed hai agar yaha ayegi bohoth disturb hojayegi tho usse rehne dho tum jao Sameer agaya hai aur chaandh bhi aya hai vrath khol the hai" Ayesha and Mrs.rawte went to the garden area were all of the other couple started to see moon in channi and doing pooja.

Sakshi sitting near pool and her thal lying beside her, she intently gazing the water moment in the pond...

****flashback******

All the team members investigating some new case and Ayesha was not there as she is heavily pregnant, and the case was about drug smuggling and according to the information there will be drug exchange in marriage hall and all the ETF members planned for a mission to trap the culprits, and apart from this, it is very important to Arjun as it gives him main lead to find sikander according to the plan they went to the venue of marriage and according to latest information the deal is handled by the bridegroom who was hotel manager and involved in drugs mafia, Arjun and Sameer entered Bridegroom's room and attacked him and he told everything about deal and Sameer was about to go to stop the function but Arjun stopped him and suggested him that if they stop the marriage real drug suppliers will get alerted, they took Hotel manager in custody and also informed bride about this and Shree started to track everything, at last Sameer and Arjun thought of mission and Sameer said "jao ready hoke aao, be careful chehra nahi dikna chahiye" same time sakshi entered and asked "Sameer tum ne mujhe bhulaya?" Sameer said "ha sakshi, tum yeh dulhan ke kapde pehnke ready hoke aao" sakshi said "kya?" Arjun said "samay nahi hai sakshi abh se 30 min mein voh log yaha ajayenge hume kissi bhi halath mein voh drug suppliers ko pakadna hai, abh jao" Sameer said "dekho sakshi bhus chota sa natak samjho, aur teekh se ghooghat pehen na" sakshi could not say anything and she got ready as bride and she was looking beautiful, she came near Arjun and Sameer, and seeing Arjun in grooms dress she panicked and said "Arjun vaha mandap mein" sameer said "ha voh shree track kar raha hai, aur mein yeh nahi kar saktha issiliye tumhe Arjun ke saath..." Somebody called groom and Arjun closed his face with sehra and sat in mandap, sakshi was shivering in fear, some ladies took her to mandap and made her to sit beside him, she always loved Arjun and she can sense his presence and Arjun also sensed her restlessness, he went near her and said "ghabrao math sakshi mein hu na" sakshi nodded her head, all was set and they were waiting for dealers and Mr and Mrs.Rawte came to that wedding as they were in business. The priest started to chant mantra and they kept sakshi's hand in Arjun's, sakshi was getting tensed, Arjun connected with Bluetooth whispered to Shree "voh log aye hai shree" shree replied "sir abhi tho nahi" and kanyadhan completed, they stood up for pheras, sakshi was shivering and went cold, Arjun whispered "chalo sakshi hume kisi bhi keemath pe dealers ko pakadna hai, yahi ek raastha hai mein sikander ko pohunchatha hai" Arjun held her hand tightly and started to take phera taking every information he is taking from Shree, after four rounds it was sakshi's turn to go forward sakshi stood glued to the floor and did not move, Arjun came near her and said "chalo sakshi, voh log shayad athe hi honge agar hum kuch karthe hai tho voh chaukanna hojayenge" sakshi said sternly "shaadi hai Arjun koyi gudda guddi ka khel nahi, sab logoke samne tumne chaar vade diya hai mujhe, abh aur inn rasmo ka mazak nahi karsakthi mein" Arjun squeezed her hand in angry and said "yeh sab bakwaas nahi sunna hai mujhe jho hoga voh dekha jayega, tum chalo" saying this he tried to push her but sakshi was in fear and after few minutes she started to move and all the pheras completed, Sameer said in Bluetooth "yeh kya kar raha hai thu Arjun mujhe patha hai ki tumhe sikander chahiye lekin iskeliye tum sakhsi ke saath" before Arjun can react Shree said "sir voh log agaye..." Panditji said "maang mein sindoor bharo" Arjun's eye searching in the direction mentioned by shree for the dealers he filled her parting with sindoor and mechanically put mangalsutra around her neck, panditji said "shaadi sampan huyi aaj se aap dhono pathi pathni hai" tears rolled down from sakshi's eyes, when Arjun eyes spotted them he took his sehra and put the ghutbandhan back and ran towards the culprit and sakshi stood holding the ghat bandhan in her hands, Mr and Mrs.Rawte were shocked to see Arjun after death of Roshni he has not come back or met them, today like this and he married another girl. Mrs.Rawte moved forward and lifted Sakshi's ghunghat and saw her eyes tearing she slowly earsed the tears and sakshi burst into cry in her embrace. After few minutes they successfully nabbed the dealers and Arjun got some prominent information about Sikander, after that Sameer asked Arjun "Arjun sab teekh hai lekin tumhe iskeliye sakshi se shaadi karne ki kya zarrorath thi yeh ek VIP wedding tha, telecast hogaya hai aur abh sakshi ka kya hoga" Arjun said "mujhe yeh sab nahi patha sameer mujhe sirf Sikander ke bhare mein janna tha" and was about to go from there, then Mrs.Rawte stopped him "rukho arjun kisi ke bhi emotions ke sath tum khel nahi sakthe, kahi sare tarikhe the unko tum pakad sakthe the lekin tum ne sakshi ka saath phere kyu liya" Arjun said "maa aap janthi hai na mujhe Sikander se Roshni ka badla lena hai" Mrs.Rawte slapped him and said "badla, badla yeh badle ke aag ne andha kar diya hai tumhe uss ladki ka abh kya hoga, dekho Arjun aaj se sakshi tumhare patni hai Rawte khandhan ke bahu" Arjun said "mein mantha hu ki mujhe usse shaadi nahi karna chahiye tha lekin yeh merliye zarrori tha aur agar aap isse shaadi manthi hai tho mein sakshi se baath karna chahtha hu" saying this he went to the room were sakshi was crying, Arjun came near her and kept his hand on her shoulders and said "dekho sakshi mein yeh sab jaan bhuj ke nahi kiya" sakshi angrily pushed his hands and said "mein ne tumhe mandap mein he warn kiya tha Arjun, tum sunthe hi nahi ho, abh hum yeh rishtha..." Arjun said "dekho sakshi iss rishta tumhe kuch nahi dega aur mein kabhi kissi aur ka ho hi nahi saktha mein sirf roshni ka hu, aur iss rishtey ka mere zindagi mein koyi emiyath nahi hai aur agar thum mujse kuch umeed rokhogi tho tumhe kuch nahi milega" sakshi said sternly "tho teekh hai yeh mangalsutra aur sindoor tum mitadho" Arjun hands moved towards her neck but he can't do it and he came back, sameer saw him upset and said "rishtey todne aasan nahi hotha hai Arjun, rishta tho judh chukka hai".

Next day, Sameer always treated sakshi as his sister and he took her to his house, Ayesha got to know about the whole situation and sakshi was crying whole night. In morning, Arjun came there with his laguage, Sameer was shocked to see him and asked "Arjun yeh sab kya hai, tum kaha jaa rahe ho?" sakshi came there; she was wearing saree, mangalsutra and sindoor. Arjun saw her and said "Sameer mein ek mission pe jaa raha hu, yeh rahi letter, aur mujhe sakshi se baath karna hai" Sameer tookthe letter and went from there. Arjun came near her and said "dekho sakshi, mein mere zindagi ka sabse badi maksath hasil karne jaa raha hu, aur mujhe nahi patha ki mein vapas aunga bhi ya nahi, issiliye mein chahtha hu ki tum dosri shaadi karlo" Sakshi said "agar mere jagah Roshni hothi aur roshni ki jagah mein hothi tho" Arjun understood her words, she is telling him if that she is dead angrily said "shut up sakshi, mein ek mara hua insaan hu, agar vapas aya bhi tumhare saath raha bhi patha nahi mein iss rishtey nibha paunga ya nahi" Sakshi said sternly "teekh hai phir, mein akri saans thak tumhara intezaar karungi, agar tum iss rishtey se kush bhi nahi ho phir bhi mein tumhare saath rahungi aur saath dungi, agar rehna pade mein tumhare vidva banke rehne ke liye bhi tayar hu, agar tum apne pyaar ke liye sab kuch kurbaan kar sakthe ho, tho mein apne pyaar ke liye iss rishtey zara zindagi kurbaan kar dungi mein tumhare intezaar karungi" Arjun went away from there, Sameer and Ayesha heard everything.

Sakshi stayed with Sameer and Ayesha, as Ayesha needed more care in her pregnancy after her delivery one fine day Mr and Mrs.Rawte came to Sameer's house and decided to take sakshi with them, sakshi refused first but after seeing Mrs.Rawte love and care she agreed and started to live with them, everything changed sakshi is not that sakshi who was bubbly and chirpy, but she was sakshi who always stayed quiet and responsible, she looked after house hold works and ETF work also efficiently but happiness is far away from her, Mr.Rawte took her suggestions for business improvement and they also spent some quality time Mrs.Rawte always tried her to keep happy and sakshi has become their daughter within few days.

After a year of disappearance of Arjun, they got news that Sikander had been killed and there wait for Arjun started...

Flashback ends...

hey sorry for the delay

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Edited by shymali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey...yupee me first..
superb update...
i have tears in my eyes...
sai mai badle ki aag insaan ko kha jati hai...
arjun ne jo kiya galat tha..
hope usko apni galti ka relaize ho...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and magnificent...
Can't express in words...
U came back with a blast... Ur narrative was so good that I saw every scene before my eyes as if in a movie...
The shaadi, karwachauth, Sakshi's feelings..., everything was mindblowing.
Thanks for the update and pm... Continue soon dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshiarjun

Beautiful and magnificent...

Can't express in words...
U came back with a blast... Ur narrative was so good that I saw every scene before my eyes as if in a movie...
The shaadi, karwachauth, Sakshi's feelings..., everything was mindblowing.
Thanks for the update and pm... Continue soon dear.


thank you so much😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting update dr:)
For revenge arjun married sakshi and now she is all alone..hope he come back soon :)
Thank you sooo much and do continue soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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:) Omg plz aap jaldi se update diya kare... Yeah intezar bi lambs lagata nai.. But nothing front of sakshi's waiting plz continue soon.. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very well written. Now when Arjun returns will he be ready to move on or Sakshi ki abhi aur pariksha baki hai? Update soon.

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