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Arhazy Najaan

@ArjunfanNAJAAN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

wow kya mast update diya yaar.
sam ke emotions aur feelings ko kitna sweetly justify karke likha hai and oow tho sam ko aisha ki yaad aarhi hai.
and ye mr junior cuteness kaun hai and how does he know about shera so much.{mean arjun}
parantu update bilkul chaakas tha, dear.

Edited by ArjunfanNAJAAN - 11 years ago

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Awesome thanks for pm continue soon

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Visit to ETF and the effects is tough to write and read

u did it very dear

but what was Arjun searching?

waiting for RR meeting

continue soon

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

a very interesting part Rimi

the fb scene was very painful
Karan-Simi trying to help
looking forward towards the meeting of Arjun-Sam

superb 👍🏼

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APRIL14

@APRIL14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

OH RIMI

this update is awesome 👏

Feel bad for SASHA 😭

The way you u describe ETF office after that blast ,the empty chair,bangles through SAMEER'S eye ,its really awesome 👏 BRAVO GIRL 👏

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

sorry 4 being so late😳

actually ye wala padhti hu to i start missing the team😭😭😭

I know..its impossible..but can u plz bring the team back😭.. kuch bhi kar do.. like...they never died only types😭

well well..i got so much emotional while reading the flashback part...

uske agey padhne ka man hi nai kar raha tha😭

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

wow dear.

after a long time you update this.

thank you so much.

and update was mind blowing.

just loved it.

do continue soon.

and thanks for the pm.

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Sakthi

@greensakthi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

oh, haan!

the part had many things to be appreciated..

the words u used to describe the situation of sam were too good.

i was nearly crying when he mentioned ar. had failed him again..

oh how pitiful our hero is , he is helpless!

plz some one out there help him.. he is innocent, try to save him from behind the bars!

right any way now he is in the joint and i miss him..at least show his present condition to us dr!

well written!

the way the story moving is very nice..

then this fellow rajan, make him witnessed some thing worth and give a meeting with sam..

and do con soon plz to know more.. it's itching!

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Awesome update...

Rathod's coming back to Mumbai was not easy...😭😭😭
He is missing everyone very badly...😭😭😭
He is missing Aisha...😭😭😭
Oh...Aisha was supposed to answer him on that same day...😭😭😭 😭😭😭
Missing ETF...😭😭😭
Case is going nice...👏👏👏
This boy is nice...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...