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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

unres...

Sameer went to visit ETF office.

Poor guy. His memories were written Brilliantly. Not so cheezy & impactful 👍🏼

Arjun went to ETF office & took some files from there. It can not be a co-incident. He must be following some case😕

Arjun was a brothel. may be he went there to meet his informer

Karan-Simi are following the leads.

The update was good but the update stealer was Rajan. Loved his attitude. Bindas bacha hai yaar. If possible Add more scene of him in between.😳

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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zubiya92

@zubiya92

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

awesome dear.. Thanks for pm..

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Loved it Rimi Awesome

Beautiful update

Sameers turmoil was written nicely

loved his visit to ETH

How he is remembering everyone

specially Aisha

That part touched my heart fab dear 👏

Sameers pain reached my heart 😭

Loved this cute little boy

he seemed interesrting

nice part

thanks for the Pm

Continue soon 😊😊

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

awesome part di
sam's pain was written sooo good...and his visit to etf was amazing esp. ayesha's part 😭
that boy seemed intresting ...he knows well about arjun
plz contd. soon
thnx for pm

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neitka

@neitka

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

wow
awesome update
loved it
conti soon
thnx for pm

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Sotti kor bol Ree..ei koydin ki kheyechis!! baapre! What an update!!

Starting with Sam...his visit in ETF office and emotional turmoils was beautifully described... & that clueless clue was very cleverly put there. so now Rothod gonna work on this case..yeppie!!

K-S was doing their own investigation...& they are already a step ahead! & that street boy was superb..kya attitude hain boss!! (he reminded me of Bhukkhan).

Do continue...(plz make it fast..noile shukiye jabo!!)

thanks for PM.

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Anjali

@Angel_Arya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Res
Unres

Sameer's feelings so well described...
Really loved it...
Poor Sam...so much happened with him
He lost everyone close to him😭
The kid appeared quite interesting

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Edited by angelarya - 11 years ago