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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu

sometime back I remember reading this story, fir bhool gayi

but lately I read the whole parts
its a good plot
none can blame anyone in this fiction
all had their problems, egos and confusions
waiting for the next part
PS: shud say, I loved the banners. simple yet elegant



hey kuchu..thanks for reading and appreciating this story of mine..its great to get feedback from amazing writers like you..keep reading and commenting..

thanks again..glad you liked the banners😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laila1994

Chapter 15:


Arggg! Itni late update diya hai k ab samaj b ni araha comment kia karon, sab to pehle hi bol chuki hoon

This update was a complete summary of your FF.
Many things got clear by this,

Firstly, Riya did want a child.
But first she wanted to prove herself.

Arjun wanted a child at any cost.

They both were affected by their past.
This child & Riya was Arjun's only family, He didn't want to let go of them
& The mission was Riya's only chance to prove herself.

We can say they were in conflict of interest😳

Arjun kept his silence because he didn't see guilt in Riya's eyes of killing their child.

Riya never felt guilty of what she had done.Her forgiveness was a fake gesture.She needed his support not his forgiveness. Was it a fact or just Arjun's POV???

Raesha❤️

Sameer ko bari masti sooj rahi hai😆

'to taste kar lo,🤣🤣

Sameer proposed Ayesha...yay.🥳

PS. If Riya was just few weeks pregnant then how do they know it was a girl????😕



laila mujhe har jagah tum kiyu dikhai de rahi ho?? res karke bhool jane se yahi hota hai..😡

nways thanks for the comment..about the boy or the girl...well arjun wanted a daughter..so they assumed the child to be a girl..

if any more confusion pm me..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note :

Okay finally finished replied to everyone..please check them in the above post...😛

I am really happy with the response specially for some silent readers who had shown themselves...😃

but gals if you planning to go invisible again, after this one pm update...i think you making a big mistake..

my conditions are still quite active..enough comments or story shifted to blog...

i have made a pm list specially for this story...so if i miss any..plz do scrap me..

nd yes..incase you havnt commented ever and scrap me for the update..you might not get it..

so start commenting on the updates regularly...👍🏼

well its not nagging..it motivates me to write the next part...😳

fine..so as planned the pm update will be send to everyone who are interested in a couple of minutes..😳

one more thing...no crying and pleading to make it an ariya story...

last time i am telling my readers..it has ariya and arakshi..and i wont eliminate any character..dont wanna read..feel free to leave...

any more pleading for ariya and i intentionally make it arakshi..and kill riya right there..mind it..

i hope you get it..
i am too crazy for your poor souls..😈


one line comments wont be considered from next update onwards..it isnt too difficult to write some more...after reading a whole update..🤔

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res... finally u resed ...9'0 clock se aapko stalk kar rahi thi...😆😆😆
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un res...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
The dhamki in the note was quite funny...😆😆😆
Awesome update...
Riya is shifting to other house & Arjun didn't react...
I really liked this Vishal...😆😆😆
Diana...I had heard this name don't no where...anyways nice name...😆😆😆
ACP Vishal...and flirty...don't u think ACP & flirty is rare & quite interesting combination...😆😆😆
So...Vishal always make Riya happy...😉😉😉
Are Vishal & Riya on some mission???😕😕😕
Who is Albert???😕😕😕
Liked Vishal's nautanki...😆😆😆
Riya at Vishal's house...😉😉😉
Now Riya realised that marrying Arjun was wrong decision...
Sam's house...always messy in every story...😆😆😆
What was that in last???...I thought Sam is going to talk vth Riya about her???😕😕😕
I really want to know that did Aisha know that she & Sam are getting married...🤣🤣🤣
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res / Unres
HMm sneha koi baat nahin 😆😆😆 aadat se majboor 😉
well coming to update *******
Beautiful update rimi dear awesome
Loved how u portrayed ariya relation
Loved their awkwardness & silence
N vishal what a character dear 😆😆
Full too nautanki
Loved how he is helping & supporting riya
So riya at his place 😉
I am waiting for arjun reactions
Waise kam sam bhi nahin hai sanko surprise kar diya 😆😆
Waiting for the Marriage of SASHA
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Res

HMm sneha koi baat nahin 😆😆😆 aadat se majboor 😉

yes...aadat se majboor...😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
any more pleading for ariya and i intentionally make it arakshi..and kill riya right there..mind it.. And then you call me a Devil, you Vamp😡
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unres...

Riya decided to move out of the house. I am glad she made the right decision. I think they are not yet ready to live with each other.

But what surprised me was Arjun's reaction. He was not hurt at all???
May be he also knew it was the best decision for both of them.

Vishal: He seems like a cool dude. He also has a crush on Riya.😆
I liked his character very much.
He is a mood lightener person whom Ariya+sakshi need in their life.
I think he will play a cupid but the question is for whom?????😳

Albert: Tum kabhi ni sudrogi na.
I know what are you planning to do.
And I am looking forward for it.👍🏼

I thought Sam is calling riya to give her his Dammit.
But nope. I was wrong.
I am not happy with this actually.
He blamed Arjun, He judged him & also at times humiliated him But then after knowing the whole truth he didn't react even a bit.
That a biased behaviour. 😔

And if that was not enough. He is behaving friendly with Riya.

Either You give us( especially me) a solid reason for his partiality. Or make him scold Riya😈

Raesha is getting married...Yay.🥳
It was a nice surprise.
I was not expecting it at all.
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
plz clear mu btwn ariya aoon
i think arjun will be jealous with vishal '
cont.soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update
loved it
thanx for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
good one.. Love it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm dear..

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