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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Vampi...aisa laga ki mein do friends ka chat padh rahi hoon...

Two unknown person


unknown?? 😉!
Kavz dhundogi toh ye dono bhi mil jayenge😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Unique concept
Continue soon


thanks dear. I will!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


unknown?? 😉!
Kavz dhundogi toh ye dono bhi mil jayenge😆




I know wo ayesha and riya ke beech mein chat chalu hI...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
🤣 🤣 omg u posted u know what? but why hate daru? he was supposed to be daru bottle openerwala 😆

edited


Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Okay you could beat me all for starting again a story and not uploading the old ones🤢! But this story is on a special demand of some one very very special and close to me. 😉

ohh hell yeah we can beat u. and i will do soon. virtual beating😡😡

No relation with show or ETF! I will use just characters of the show. It will be all about friendship, love, breakups, bitrayals, heartbreaks.

omg sounds like such a big thing but inside...thullu 🤣
I really dont know what to put the title . All thanks to you know who😡.. ( i really cant put what you have suggested gal🤣. Am seriously scared of beatings😒 .)

okay simply the CS is

title Gotiya ka dukhvari atma katha 👏

Arjun Rawte
(Devdas+hates daaru+but not a bramhachari)

did not like this part. i wanted daru so much !!!!

Riya Mukharjee
(Kickass girl+do lots of EA)

Aisha Kapoor
(Lady Dabbang+scared of she knows what)
lady dabbang scared 😲😲 huh liar

Sameer Rathod
(secret crush of lady dabbang+ Mr. Know Nothing)

haila whos this new banda???😲😲😲😲😲😲

SakShi Anand
(bewafaa sanam+ ex bff)

why am not surprised😆
NOTE

ANY WRONG CHOICE OR ANY WRONG DESECION WONT MAKE THE CHARACTER BAD OR NEGATIVE. SO READ THIS NOTE BEFORE THINKING ANYONE NEGATIVE.

*caps for only getting attention on those wrods. No intention of Virtual shouting*



I will post the prologue soon.
Hope you will like it all ( gal😆)!

thik thak tha😛


Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

A story needs a title...but life dont need any title.

title what u had said. gotiya ki dukhbhari atma katha😈

I am serious. Let this be untitled always. 😳 if anyone will get any suggestion about the title after prologue. Most welome ⭐️

suggestion above😃
Prologue

"No ! You cant do this at all ! I dont believe in this''

'' errr..sadly thats the truth''

''great... Just great''!!

sounds like BFF ka spat re😭😭 btw mmc and ...umm...u friends in here?😲
25th December
2008

Aisha POV



''OMG! Its christmas day and I am so so much excited'', I typed through my not so better phone but with good kepy pad. "Thats great! So what will you do"? Her reply came. '' Nothing much! I will go to college.. Guess its our reunion party too.. And old friends..will do masti, and fun i was so excited for the reunion in college. ''Go enjoy''. She again replied. '' Yep.. But I am gonna miss you ..haha I typed back. You will come soon na Baby she joked. errr... Not that word Damn itt!! I groaned and typedAarghh. Some 9-10 cry+smiley emos came as her reaction and I shut that app.

b. a. b. y😳
5 hours later

"Hey
anyone here"?
I typed again.
"You back?? This soon?😲?: she was a little surprised.
"Yeah..i am ", I replied.
"How was the reunion party?: she was so excited to know about it. And as usual I, never hide anything to her.

it was..errr.. Nothing: i was not okay at that time. Anyone wont even could be okay after getting so much shocks in one day.

"There is something.. You are telling me or not Aish.. She terribly wanted to know what is it. But I didnt know if i was ready to open up with that! But i Spilled.. Come on I cant hide anything form this lady.

Err.. Rii! Actually.." and I started what have happened in this not so lucky christmas day.

After some time of the chat!
"I will kill her damn it''she replied😲🤢.

"dont ever try.. You will be charged with a murder case..". I replied to her and some more 10-15 cry/laugh smiley emos came.

oh yes i will kill both. majnu and chudail😡
Chaper one
[just a gilmpse]


"thhuddd"... Aaahhh..this is really hurting woman.
"Then take one more'', the girl plasterd her another five fingers marks on the other side of his cheeks.
LMAO 🤣 🤣 waiting for it like despo🤪
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"Damn it Arjun? Tum Riya ka picha kyun kar rahe the? Barked Aisha. 😡

"ye tumhe , mujhe do thappad khilane se pehele sochna chahiye tha Aisha🤢...kam se kam tumhari dost se thappad toh nahi padte.. He said look err glaring at riya who glared at him even more with deadly eyes😳


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Okay so done with the prologue.
No idea how it was. But it was for real😆hahahahaha

hope you wll you too like this (you know who?🤗)
and you all!
Thanks for reading😃
do share your views.


Edited by Riya.S.007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Nice Prologue...
I guess chat was between Aisha & Riya...
Yeh Aisha ke ander Sam ki atma guss gayi hai kya...baar baar dam it...😆😆😆
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

🤣 🤣 omg u posted u know what? but why hate daru? he was supposed to be daru bottle openerwala 😆


🤣you that well😡 ***iya ..***iya😆! Ab khus?
Haww? Marwane ka irada hai kya?😲🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008




I know wo ayesha and riya ke beech mein chat chalu hI...


yep it is!😉!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehajain

Nice Prologue...

I guess chat was between Aisha & Riya...

Yeh Aisha ke ander Sam ki atma guss gayi hai kya...baar baar dam it...😆😆😆


Continue soon...


CS dhyaan se dekhiyo Snehu😉😆 Damn It!!
Lol
thanks for comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


🤣you that well😡 ***iya ..***iya😆! Ab khus?
Haww? Marwane ka irada hai kya?😲🤢

edited properly check it out😆
main gotiya gotiya chillaoongi keypad fad ke😆😆🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
difeerent

waiting for update

update soon

and please do pm me


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