Arjun FF : Blue Shadow. Ch 17 p.57

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

Atu u r back after a long time

crooked as always

sare log thode bohot jilebi type hai

and u know i looove jilebis

continue soon

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sairam175

@sairam175

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Posted: 11 years ago

#412

Chapter 16

awesome part

varun is abig idiot

arjun plan is wow

shree and sakshi scene is silly

con soon and

thanks for pm

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aagana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#413

awesome parts...

M very less active in if..so sorry for late comments

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#414

First welcome back atisha...

What a comeback...ate hi ek informative update...👏

Varun is such a a*****e...he is after sakshi..and sakshi's returns are striking at his male ego..😆

Who is that boss...the ultimate one or just a chota don??

Arjun ne VM ke saath kya kiya?? I want to know this..😛

Dialogues were brilliant...appropriate and extra cheezy..loved them..

Karan's informer gave another flash drive...so there is some more information to be discovered...shree has a lot of work ahead..

but I missed your special arakshi encounter..🥱

Your stories are the only stories where I wait for arakshi meets...bring them closer for some zabardast dialogue fight pleej..

Continue soon...thanks for the pm..

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Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#415

4 chap miss kar diye..God..!!😭
Chapter 13:
Samar is dead..Dadu thinks Sakshi doesn't know about it but she does.. They both kept it to themselves for the sake os the other..loved this bonding..
Sreeza bickering..as always..fun..! murdon ki GF..lol!!!
Sakshi had done this before..Rathod knows about it and he is getting embarrased..curios to know about it..
About Kabir's part..intersting ..hope to know more about it in upcoming parts..
Love the suspense you bring in ur updates.
Thanks for the pm..sorry for late and chotu comment..hand is fractured..will comment on the other parts soon.

Edited by Swara85 - 11 years ago

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Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#416

sorry for double post..

Edited by Swara85 - 11 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb... as always...
Sakshi is Varun's new targer...
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#418

I simply loved it ma Camarada!

Agh! Yeh Varun... live murder ho jayega mere hath se... by God!

She is indeed delicious but Varun dear... she's reserved for a man who might one day end up being with her happily ever after 😉

Tujh jaise ghatiya piece ke liye Arjun aur Sam hai na dhulayi ke liye... ussi maza main jee 😈

I really liked the part where Arjun boiled... literally...

It felt... nice 😉

Etar chaite aar beshi likhbona... jaani na kokhon kahani te twist maro!

Toh ei chutku moments ei ami khush achi! 😆

Haha... Thapa ko heart attack aa gaya!

LOL... but yeah... nice guy 😊

Ab iss GK ka raaz batao...

Pyaar karta hai Sakshi se... par nazar rakhta hai Ayesha pe...

Lagta hai Rawte aur Rathod ka patta kat gaya! 🤣

Ab ye Varun... I am sure he ain't fallin for Sakshi... bechara life main deserving "izzat" mili na.. toh shock se guzar raha hai 😆

Oopsie.. for some reason mujhe lagta hai... that for Varun this would be a night to remember 😈

Hmm... I noticed that Sakshi avoided to comment on Arjun's reaction... was this coincidence ya me over-thinking?

I am just loving the way the case is proceeding... trust me...

Haha... Kabir ne sach kaha... Ayesha sudharne nahi waali... aur phir ye baat bhi sahi hai ki sudharne ki zaroorat hi nahi!

OH I didn't read the lower part...

Aha... uss Varun ko toh zinda jalana chahiye! *grr*

But now am sure the case is going on full fledged!

Lol... Kabir and Chotu ka convo was epic!!!!

Luv u loads Atisha dear...

~ Teri Cutie Pie Armadolly

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ishita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#419

varun ka serious wala pachka hua...
sakshi to ratti bhar bhi bhav nehi de rahi...
ulta uski band baja di... bahut acha hua..
Varun was talkin to his boss ovr d ph...n arjun rathod ne sunlia..
ha ha..keema hi banana...kamina kahika..
hehr...aisha...ache kapde..hehe...
I lubh GK... he is sho shweet...
ha aisha. bachke...rathod ko bhanak v lgi na..wohi k wohi Dammit ho jayga..
Arjun sam abducted varun..bahut ache...ap uski lappy ki har Bit trfr hogi shree ko..
Shree liza..sho cute
Shree k sath humesha aisa q hota h..bechara..
Lata-Kabir-chhotu was 😆

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Sakshithegreat

@Sakshithegreat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#420

Ok so I commented really late but I have reasons
First I read your ff haunted mansion in one go 2 days ago
Second I found your index now and I also found this ff
Third it took me time to read but read all parts in one go
I can't believe that I never saw your stories before
You are a gifted writer and I enjoy your stories a lot
Please continue and pm me or else I will die
😆