T3 Fir mila mujhe Saccha Pyaar update pg-48 NEW 22June - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
one year passed...
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ok guys I know main bahut late hoon..
I mean bahut ni bahut zayada late hoon almost one year ho gaye iss story ko update kiye hue
And I am really sorry for that guys..
Or main isske liye koi explanation nahi dungi and once again so sorry guys.
So here im presenting you the next update of this story.
Hope you guys didnt forget this story.


CHAPTER-TWENTY NINE
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A FAMILY REUNION

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Chotu couldn't hold himself so he asked them

Chotu: yeh sabh kya ho raha hain? Koi mujhe batayega please. I am confused as how did riya know rathore sir mom and why riya saying rathore sir to bhai and why rathore sir is considering riya as her sister?

Hearing this now both sam and riya shocked

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Hearing this both sam and riya looked towards chotu direction and gets shocked listening his question and riya dont know what to answer him so rathore mom says

Sanjhaana: main batati hoon

Saying this all looked towards sanjhaan and eagerly waiting to hear her and sanjhaana sees this so she started

Sanjhaana: chotu yaad hain tu7mhe jabh riya 10yrs ki thi or tum dono kids park (fake name) gaye the or vahan riya tumse bichad gaye thi

Now chotu goes to flashback

FLASHBACK

When riya is 6yrs old and chotu is 10yrs both goes to kids park to play games and suddenly riya fills hungry so as chotu so chotu goes to chaat wala to buy chaat for him and riya.

On the other hand riya is playing with her basket ball and suddenly uski ball road pe chali jaati hain to who use lene chali jaati hain but who car ni dekhti or uska accident ho jaata hain and she goes unconscious and the car who hit riya was stopped and the driver and one boy who is at 12 yrs comes with his mom and sees one little girl is lying unconscious and she was bleeding his mom immediately goes towards girl and sees her and says to driver

Lady: tum car dekhke ni chala sakte? Dekho iss choti bacchi ko kitni chot lag gaye.

Driver: memsahib yeh ladki apne aap beech main aa gaye.

Lady: chup ho jayo tum or jaldi car main betho isse hum abhi apne ghar leke jayenge.

Driver: par memsahib hum isse nahi jaante hain or iska yaha koi dikh bhi ni raha hain. Isse hum kissi sarkari hospital main chod dete hain wah iska docter illaj karenge.

Hearing this that lady and boy becomes angry amd boy yells

Boy: aapki himmat kaise hui driver chacha yeh kehne ki? Galti aapki hain. Aaj aapki vajah se iss masoom ladki ko chot lagi hain or apni galti maanne ki bajay aap yeh keh rahe hain? Main yeh doobara aapse iss ladki ke barein main nahi sununga samjhe aap?

Driver: ji sameer baba

(yes the boy is non another than our rowdy rathore and the lady was his mom I mean sanjhaana)

Rathore: maa hame abhi iss ladki ko apne ghar leke chalna chahiye or iska doctor uncle se illaj karwana chahiye.

Sanjhaana: haan beta tum sahi keh rahe ho.

Sanjaana placed riya on back seat and sameer sits beside her and kept her head on his lap and caressing her forehead and sanjaana sits on front seat and driver drove the car.

Soon they reached rathore mansion and rathore father sees them and also sees riya and asked about her and sanjhaan told her everything. This makes rathore father angry and he blasted on driver and also about his words then he immediately called his family doctor.

After sometimes doctor came and examine riya and tells them

Doctor: ghabrane wali koi baat nahi hain she is fine but iske sir pe gehri chot lagi hain uske vajah se behosh hain maine injection de diya hain isse kal tak hosh aa jayega. Fir bhi agar koi problem hoti hain to mujhe phone karke bata dijiye ga.

The trio nodded their head and doctor goes from there.

Meanwhile after buying chaat chotu comes to park and searching riya but couldnt find her. He almost searches the whole park but he couldnt find her. He gets worried for her and calls his father and his father came there and gets angry on chotu and started finding riya but they couldnt findor abh raath bhi ho gaye hain.

SCENE SHIFT-----
IN NIGHT
IN RATHORE MANSION-----

All are worried for riya specially sameer and rathores father and they all were sits beside riya and were praying for her wellbeing when suddenly there servant came with the dinner

Servant: sahib memsahib aapne or baba ne lunch se kuch bhi nahi khaya bus aap iss bacchi ke fikar main hain.

Dhyamsingh (rathores father): to kya kare ramesh? Iss bacchi ko dekho kitni massom hain or bahut choti bhi hain. Pata nahi kyu ek ajeeb sa attraction ho raha isko dekhke. Aisa lag raha hain jaise yeh hamari beti ho? Or to or hame to isske barein main kuch bhi nahi pata. Pata nahi isske ghar wale kaise honge?

Sanjhaana: haan maine rohan(driver jisne riya ka accident kiya) use vapas park main bejha dekhne ke liye kahi koi iss ka rishtedar mil jaye magar use bhi vaha koi ni mila.

Dhayamsingh: bus yahi dua hain yeh bacchi jald se jald theek ho jaaye.

Servant: sabh theek hoga saheeb aap magar aap log kuch kha lijiye or dekhiye baba ne bhi kuch ni khaya.

Both dhayamsing and sanjhaana says together

Both: nahi kaka hame ni khana haan aap mujhe khana dijiye main sameer ko khila deti hoon,

Sameer instantly says

Sameer: nahi maa jabh tak pari ko hosh ni aa jata tabh tak main khana nahi khayunga.

Hearing this both dhayamsing and sanjaana raised their eyebrows and dhayamsingh says

Dhayamsingh: yeh pari kaun hain?

Sameer: papa yeh ladki maine iska naam pari rakha hain. Pata nahi jabse yeh meri zindagi main aayi hain tabse mujhe accha lagne laga hain or isse protect karne ka maan kar raha hain. Iske liye mere dil se ek bade bhai jaise feeling mehsoos hui. Main hamesha se hi ek behen chahata tha par bhagwan ne mujhse yeh khushi cheen li or ajj jabh main maasa ke saath mandir gaya tha tabh bhi maine bhagwan se prathna kit hi ki mujhe koi behen de or shayad bhagwan ne mujhe pari ke through behen de di.

Hearing this both dhayamsingh and sanjhaana eyes filled with tears and then sanjhaana give back thaali to ramesh and says

Sanjhaana: le jayo isse ramesh hume se koi bhi khana nahi khayega.

Saying this she give back thaali to ramesh and all are waiting for morning.

SCENE SHIFT-------
IN MUKHERJEE HOUSE------

Both chotu and riya's father were tensed for riya as they didn't find her and chotu is feeling guilty and responsible for this incident and feeling worried for riya and Mr. Mukherjee sees this and goes towards chotu and hugged him and chotu also hugged him back and crying hysterically.

Chotu: baba maine sacchi yeh sabh jaan boojh kar ni kiya tha. Who choti ko bhook lag rahi thi main uske liye chaat lene gaya tha magar jabh maine park main vapas aake dekha to mujhe riya kahi ni9 dikhayi di.


Saying this he hide his face on his father neck and mr Mukherjee consoling him and chotu says


Chotu: kash baba main use akela chodke hi ni jaata to abhi riyu hamare pass hoti.


Mr. Mukherjee: chup ho jayo beta. Tumhari koi galti nahi hain. Kuch ni hua hain riya ko. Who bahut jald hi hamare pass hogi or tumhare pass khel rahi hogi.


Chotu just nodded his head and Mr. Mukherjee says


Mr. Mukherjee: or fir tumhari behen ke saath to tumhara mera, tumhari maa or bhagvanji ka aashirwaad or pyaar bhi to hain na. Humm so tum zayada pareshaan mat ho. Sabh theek hoga.


Chotu just nodded his head.


SCENE SHIFT------
EARLY MORNING------
IN RATHORE MANSION-----


Mr. & Mrs. Rathore and Sameer were sleeping in room where riya was lying but suddenly there sleep got broke when they heard riyas mummer


Riya: maamum..mama


Hearing riya:s mummer sanjhaana started caressing riya;s forehead and just giving her motherly love whereas both Sameer and dhayamsingh were rubbing riyas hand and legs as she is shivering. After sometimes riyas shivering stop and she get calmed and just hugged sanjhaan in her sleep and trio just took a sigh of relief and dhayamsingh called doctor.


After sometimes doctor came and checked riya and says she is fine and soon riya gaining conscious and rathore family very happy but riya looked confused and scared seeing them but soon sanjhaana narrate her everything and then riya wished to go to her house but docter says she need to take bed rest at least 3-4 days so riya leaves with them.


Whereas riya's family were searchkng her and so they complaint on police station but they couldn't find her and chotu is very much worried for riya.


On the other hand Riya is enjoying with rathore family specially sanjhaana company. She was loving sanjhaana's mother care and feels her mom in her whereas rathore family also feeling happy and were enjoying with riya nd considering her as their child.


One day sameer cryingly come to his house from school and sanjhaana sees this and gets shocked and was worried for sameer but sameer didnt say anything and was continuously crying so sanjhaana call Mr. rathore and rathore also comes there and asked him and riya also silently sitting there. After sometimes rathore says


Sameer: maasa aaj mujhe school main mere friends mujhe bahut chidha rahe the kyunki mere pass naahi koi behen hain or naahi koi bhai hain. Who log keh rahe the main kabhi bhi bade bhai ki feelings nahi samajh payunga


Saying this he again started crying and sanjhaana and dhayamsing was also feeling sad as sanjaana cant conceive now and were feeling helpless.


Suddenly riya comes towards sameer and cupped his face and whipped his tear and kissed his forehead whereas sameer and Mr. & Mrs. Rathore seeing her in a dazed and riya says


Riya: kaun kehta hain aapki koi behen ni hain or aap kissi ke bade bhai nahi hai? Balki aap to ek bahut hi acche bade bhai hain.


Sameer and Mr. & Mrs. Rathore were looking riya very confusedly and riya sees this and gives them her dimpled smile and says


Riya: aaj se main aapki choti behen or aap mere bade bhai. Aap banenge na mere bade bhai?


She asked innocently where as Mr. & Mrs. Rathore were smiled whole heartedly and sameer also smiles and says


Sameer: haan aaj se main or tum bhai behen or main tumhe hamesha protect karunga


Saying this he kissed riyas cheek and hugged her and riya also hugged him back and both become happy.


After that riya also involved in rathore family. She calles sameer bhai, dhayamsing bade papa and sanjhaana badi maasa. Soon they started searching riya family and after that they all goes to that park where they meet riya for the first time. And were moving here and there and riya sees her dad and bhai who also come there hoping they will find riya.


Seeing them riya runningly walked towards them and hugged chotu and both were crying and were happy to. So chotu broke the hug and goes to near temple for praying and then riya hugged his dad and dad also hugged her and then he asked where is she? Then riya told everything then Mr. Mukherjee sees rathore family and thanking them and ad sanjaana then reveled now what riya and there family sharing bond mr. mukherjee becomes happy hearing this.


Soon rathore family goes from there and now riya talked them on phone and sometimes Mr. Mukherjee took riya with him and goes to meet rathore family. After one year rathore family moved from Mumbai to rajasthan and then riya talked to thme on phone. Sometimes chotu also talked with them as he didnt get opportunity to meet them so he just talk them on phone.[/COLOR]


FLASHBACK ENDS-------


PRESENT------


Hearing this all are shocked and then admiring there bond specially chotu. He becomes happy hearing this so he happily asked


Chotu: to aap hi mere riyu ki badi maasa hain jinhone usko ek maa ka pyaar diya.


Sanjhaana just nodded her head and chotu sees this and he immediately hugged sanjhaan and sanjhaana also give him motherly hug. After sometimes both parted and chotu says


Chotu: magar aap log to Rajasthan shift ho gaye the fir aap riya se kaise mile?


Rathore: haan maasa yeh to mujhe bhi ni pata aap riyu se kaise mile or kaise use pehchaana?


Hearing this riya and badi maasa looked each other and then smiled and riya says


Riya: main batati hoon aap logo ko


Now all gaze moved towards riya and riya sees this and then she says


Riya: aap log to jaante hi hain bhaiya ne apne dar ki vajah se mujhe unse dur foreign country main padhne ke liye bejh diya tha or unse contact na karne ke liye mana kr diya tha. Fir maine socha main bhi ek bahadur police officer banungi. So maine London main apni padhayi khatam ki or saath saath apni training bhi poori ki. Fir meri posting unhone India main Rajasthan main kardi. To main India vapas aa gaye or fir Rajasthan main apni duty krne lagi. Fir ek di rajasthan main navratri ka mela laga hua tha or main mandir darshan karne gaye thi or jabh main darshan karke bahar nikli to maine dekha ek aurat dard se karha ri hain. Main unki shakal nahi dekh paayi so main unke pass gaye or maine dekha who aurat or koi nahi balki meri badi maa thi.


Rathore: maa??


Riya: haan bhaisa or main unke pass bhagke gaye or maine dekha unke pair main chot lagi hain fir


(I know guys aap socj rahe honge isne fir se flashback start kr diya but ye hiss chapter ka aakhri flashback hoga)


FLASHBACK------


Riya: yeh aapko kya ho gaya hain badi maasa or yeh aapko chot kaise lagi?


Riya asked in concerned voice and sanjhaana looking her confused as she dont know who is she and also why she is calling her badi maasa only riya had a right to call her badi maasa. She come out of her thought when she heard riya voice


Riya: badi maasa aapk to kitni chot lagi hain or khoon bhi nikal raha hain


Saying this she touched sanjhaana foot and feeling riyas touch she felt unknown happiness and immediately riyas childhood face flash came into her mind and he touched riya;s hands and removed her hand from her feet and riya looked towards sanjhaana face and sees she is looking her and the she get realized


Riya(M.V.): ohh shit!! Main bhi kitni bevakoof hoon. Main yeh baat kaise bhool gaye ki badi maasa abh mujhe in pehchane ghi kyunki unhone mujhe sirf bachpan main hi dekha hain or abh to woh mujhe pehchaan bhi nahi paaye ghi.


Thinking this she looked badi maasaa and was going to say something but badi maasa stopped her and held her by her shoulder and just hugged her tightly. Seeing this riya looked confused but come out of her thought when she heared sanjhaana voice


Sanjhaana: riya mera baccha


Hearing this riya just hugged her tightly and says


Riya: badi maasa

Saying this both crying and were happy to meet with each other.


(Ok guys main abh or flashback ni badha rahi so jaldi jaldi main bata rahi hoon kyunki fir update kicha kicha sa lag raha h)


Both broke the hugged and whipped each other tears then riya complaining why they were leaved her and sanjhaana just hugged her and giving her motherly love then sanjhaana asked what is she doing here then she tell everything to her how chotu's fearness seperate them then her police officer.


Hearing this sanjhaana feels sad for both chotu and riya's struggle and then also feeling proud of her riya. After sometimes riya asked about his bhaisa and bade babasa and sanjhaana become emotional and riya sees this but before she could say anything sanjhaana tells her that her bade babasaa is no more as he is suffering from cancer and today is the first death anniversary of his bade babasaa. Hearing this riya started crying and sanjhaana also become emotional but she console riya and then she tells about sameer how much he miss her and also he wears her raakhi in every raksha bandhan and riya become a happy and now sanjhaana tells her to live with her and riya happily obliged


FLASHBACK ENDS-------


PRESENT------


Hearing this all gets emotional and become happy hearing there reunion when suddenly rathore says


Rathore: ek minute ek baat batao baaki sabh theek hain magar iss bandariya ne mujhe yeh kyun ni bataya ki yeh meri behen hain ?


Hearing bandariya word all gets smiled and riya just glared rathore and says


Riya: aap to chup hi rahiye Mr. Sadu Damit Rathore zayada bakwas mat kariye.


Hearing this now rathore becomes angry and feeling embraced whereas all etf members were controlling there laugh and rathore sees this so he says


Rathore: maine tumse kitni baar kahan hain ki mujhe iss naam se mat bulaya karo magar tu nahi sudhre ghi na?


Riya: naajabh tak aap mujhe bandariya or mujhse naraz rahenge tabh tak main aapko sirf or sirf sadu damit rathore kehkar bulayungi.


Saying this she turned her face away from rathore and rathore just greeted his teeth in anger and says


Rathore: yeh kya jabardasti hain? Galti tumne ki hain or main tumse naraz bhi na hou?


Riya: kya galti hain meri? Yahi ki maine bus sirf apni bhai ki khushi chahi socha tha parso rakshabandhan or aapka janamdin hain to main uss din aapko surprise denea chahati thi or aapke chere pe mujhe dekhkar meri aane ki khushi main aapki excitement dekhna chahati thi magar abh sabh bigad gaya.


Saying this she pouted her face and rathore just smile hearing this and come closed to riya and hugged her tightly. Seeing this first riya got confused but then she gives her dimpled smile and also hugged him back. After sometimes both parted and rathore kiss her forehead and says


Rathore: I miss you pari..


Riya: I missed you to bhaisaa


Saying these both again hugged each other whereas chotu is looking this emotionally and sanjhaana sees this and he comes towards chotu and asked


Sanjhaana: kya hua beta? Tum aise chupchap kyun ho?


Hearing this both rathore and riya got parted and looked towards chotu and chotu just staring riya and then she turned towards sanjhaana and says


Chotu: kuch nahi aunty bas apni behen ki khushi dekh raha hoon. Sacha main aap logo ke vajah se meri behen ko kabhi ek maa ki kami mehsoos nahi hui and I am thankful to you very much.


Hearing this samiya and sanjhaana just smiled and says


Sanjhaana: nahi chotu. Thankful to main tumhari or riya ki hoon jisne doobara mujhe maa banne ka such diya who bhi beti ka.


Saying this a loan tear escaped from her eyes and all gets emotional too. Sanjhaana whipped her tears and then looked chotu and saying authoritively


Sanjhaana: or haan yeh kya tumne aunty laga rakha hain? Main sirf Sameer or riya ki hi nahi balki tumhari bhi maa hoon so tum bhi mujhe badi masa kehke bulao.


Hearing this chotu got teary and just hugged sanjhaana whereas all smiled and hugged each other.


sahi main kayi baar insaan apni acchi aadaton se bahut hi acche or kamal ke rishte kama jaata hain. Log kehte hain ki paisa hi sabh zaroorat hain isse insaan ameer banta hain magar unko dekhiye jo rishte kamate hain or ameer ban jaate hain. Zaroorai nahi ki khoon ka hi rishta important ho kahi baar kuch rishte aise ban jaate hain jo zindagi se badkar kehlate hain.

Thank you..

tbc.

Hope you liked it

Excused any errors


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Coming to update **************


Loved it Megha
Awesome & emotional update
True at times such bonds are deeper than blood relations
Riya & Sam antics were too cute
FBs were nicely written
& were wmotional too
les see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...
U updated this. I was so sad thinking u discontinued this beautiful story.
Bt no, finaly after more than one yr u updated.
Beautiful part dr. Emotional. Loved their bonding.
Bt the thing is there is no ariya nor arjun.
Plz update nxt parts sn.
U kept all of us waiting 4 so so so long. The wait is too much. Bt no more. Update sn.
Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome fantastic amez super update
loveit
Thanks for pm
Cont soon and
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
Superb awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really u updated this one

i cannot believe

wow yaar beatiful hamre sabar ka phal meeta hua.

beautiful update.

bonding of Riya and sameer very sweet.

but no ARjun in this part.

continue soon dear and please jaldi iathan der math akrna .

thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Bonding is cute...
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting was worth it dii update was awesome...aab sab kuch clear hogaya hai...loved sam-riya antics and riya's bonding with rathode family...aap ne sach kaha kuch dil se baanee rishte khoon ke rishte se bhi badi hoti hai...cont soon dii thankd for pm

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