Arakshi + Raisha FF Yeh hai Mohabbatein part 21 on page 45 15/1/2016

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hellooo ... i m back ...😉... new torture ke sath ...😆 so what abt new arakshi + Raisha story ... aur haa issme ETF he ... kyoki ETF meri life ka hissa he aur me usko alag nahi kar sakati hoo ...






Prologue :
ETF ... office ..raat ke 11 baje hai ... Arjun abhi bhi usske cabin me hai .. as usual roshni ke khayalo me ... Aishaa apana kaam khatam karke nikalti he ... tabhi ...
sameer : aree aisha ab tak gayi nahi ...chalo me tumhe ghar chhod detaa he ...
Aisha : sir wo ... file aapne complete karene ko di thi ... wahi kar rahi thi ...
sameer: its okk ... aisshaa ...wo mujhe kal chahiye ... abhi nahi ...
Aisha : sir socchaa ki ... aaj hi complete kar lu ... sir arjun sir ... (arjun ke cabin ki taraf dekhate huye ) ...
sameer : me parking me tumhara wait kar raha hu ...
Aisha : chaliye sir ...

sameer and aishaa ... in SUV ... silent ...

should i continue 😉... agar haa to plzzz like aur comment dono karnaa ..😊.. errors ke liye sorry bhi he ... 😛

Part 1 ..on page 1
part 2 on page 4
part 3 on page 6
part 4 on page 6
imp note on page 8 and 9 ..
part 5 on page 10
part 6 on page 13
part 7 on page 15 (sanchi pic )
part 8 on page 18 (samraat pic)
part 9 on page 20
part 10 on page 22
part 11 on Page 23
part 12 on page 25
part 13 on page 28
part 14 on page 30
part 15 on page 32
part 16 on page 35
part 17 on page 37
part 18 on page 40
part 19 on page 41
part 20 on page 43
part 21 on page 45
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mujhe lga wo show wala scene na likh do jisme rathore kehta hai k kuch log isliye nhi sote kyunki unhe nind nhi ati aur kuch log khawabo k dar se sona ni chahte


good start
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello friends ... ye FF ab mere sath Chulbuli aanu bhi likhanengi ...🤗... so ye Joint FF hoga ( me and annu ) ... Thank u so much for ur response ...😊... plzz aage bhi humko motivate karte rahana
jis jis ko PM chahaiye ... plzzz mujhe ya annu di ko apani buddy list me add karo ... SYS 😳


Part 1 ...

sameer and aisha in SUV ... both are silent ...


sameer and aishaa ... in SUV ... silent ...tabhi rathore ka phone bajtaa he ... he stop SUV and ...

shree: hello sir ... Wo uss ghar ka address mil gaya he ... me aapko message karta hu ..

sam : okk shree ... hum abhi waha jaa rahe he

shree : sir abhi ? iss time jana khatare se khaali nahi hogaa sir ...

sam : shree hum police officers he ... Tum rawte ko batao and chotu ko bhi ...

shree:ok sir ... mene sir ko inform kar deta hu ...

Aisha : sir ?

Sam: yeahh aissha uss ghar ka address mil gaya he ... humare pass subah tak ka time nahi he ... Abhi uss jagah jakar ... unko pakadnaa hogaa ...

Aisha : right sir ..

SUV ... malad ki kaisi ... sunsaan jagah par ...rukaati he ... waha par ik normal type ghar ke ghar ke ass pass ... kabaristaan he ... aissha aur sameer aage badhte he ... Tabhi unko 3 logo ki parchai dikhaayi deti he ...

Sam : aisha sambhal ke ...

Aisha : yes sir ...

Wo parchai sam ke pass aati he ... Isse pahale ki sam kuch kahe ... Sam knows its Arjun ...

Arjun : rathore ... tum aur aishaa ghar me jao ... Me aur shree ... iss kabaristaan me dhundhte he ... Chotu

Chotu : haa haaa sir ...

Arjun : tum yahi khade rahana ...

Chotu face expressions show ki ussko darrr lag raha he ... tabhi shree usske pass jata he ...

Shree : aree chotu darrr ... maat yaha jayada se jayada ... Koi chudel tujhse milaane aayegi bass ...

Chotu : chudel ... (uske face kea age chandramukhi ka face aata he ) wo kuch bole isse pahale ...

Shree : chillana maat nahi too ... arjun aur rathore sir ... tujhe yahi chod ke chale jayenge ... tu yahi reh okk ...

Arjun ; chalee shree ... agar tum dono ki baate khatam ho gayi ho ...

shree : sorry sir ...chaliye ... rathore aur aisha ..ghar ki taraf aur arjun aur shree ... kabaristan ki taraf jaate hai ...,chotu wahi khada he darate huye ,,,

chotu : ufff me police force ko bhi batana chahiye thaa ... ( jai hanumaan gyaan gun sagar ) 😆


so how was it ... agar pasand aaye to like and comment ... errors ke liye sorry ..so happy to tell u ... JOint FF ( me aur chulbuli Annu ) ...

Edited by NainaSM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting plot naina..do continue soon..eager to read about it..thank you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intresting start
eagerly w8ng 4 sakshi entry plz continue soon
w8ng 4 next n thanx 4 pm plz dnt stop okay
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good start jaaneman
jai hanuman gyan gun sagar 😆

ye log kabirstan me kya dhund rhe hai...roshni ki atma 😛

jo bhi hai mazedaar hai


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Concept And Update !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start...do Cont...will love to read...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting update
waiting for next part...
continue soon

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