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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Awesome update...

Dot know why but I really liked this update...I guess sometimes Arjun is overpowering Sha but at the same time Arjun is getting care & affection...😃😃😃

LOL...Poor Sam...pura yellow yellow ho gaya...😆😆😆

Sha is also enjoying his situation...😆😆😆

Sha attended the call of Zaid...🤢🤢🤢

Sha/Arjun was hell angry on Sam & Masa...but Sam-Masa manged it well...😃😃😃

Masa's love & Sameer's honesty is melting Sha & somewhere Arjun also...😃😃😃

Sha's convo with Zaid was 😆😆😆...dont know but mujhe hassi aa rahi hai by imagining Zaid,s shocked face...😆😆😆...it was written very nicely...👏👏👏

Zaid will search Sha's house without warrant...😡😡😡

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Harisree001

@Harisree001

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Hai chechi...
Superb... Loved the update...
I am loving this story more and more with each update...
And each update proves you are an awesome writer...
Arjun/ sha is knowing everything behind him...
Arjun- Masa moments was beautiful... Arjun always did evrything by himself... He rised himself.. There was no one with him... But he too wish for a mother's warmth... Masa didn't get fear of him and relaxed him...
It shows that mother's love can overcome evrythng... It has the power to heal every wound...
I loved the way Arjun gave reply to Zaid...
It was good that Sam told him the truth...
I will not try to guess anything... Waiting for the next update very eagerly... Pls update soon...
Hope you are fine and doing well...

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

The way Arjun had a peaceful sleep on Masa's lap was so touching, he has always remained in shades and been deprived of all the care and attention that Shaleen gets, so now when Masa called his son he was teary eyed.
Sam did the correct thing by talking to Shaleen about ACP Zaid, well that was the only way to win Sha's trust.
The way he spoke to ACP Zaid, it had some glimpse of Arjun but then that was for good.There was confidence in the voice.
What is ACP Zaid planning to do now?
That was a brilliant update.

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb.. as always...
Brillant update...
Arjun hade a peaceful sleep for the frist time...
Loved the wat Masa handeled him...
Sha is happy that Sam told him the truth but Arjun didn't forger about the slepping pills...
Loved Sha-Zaid convo... Amazing...
Zaid is gonna search Sha's house that to without warrant...
Waiting for next part
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Sha again overpowered Arjun,as he smiled at Sam
I m close to MPD KK & I do know what is the first thing that I am gonna do after transforming 😈

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

yeb update tha ya update ka trailer...itna chota! shuru hone se pehle khatam ho gaya...not fare...yeh nehi chalega...bilkul nahi!

now seriously, again you have started your work on the negativity...masa's first meet to Arjun...and made him sleep...the linging of that lonely soul for love was just perfectly sketched...(yeh tutorial ka asar toh writing pe vi dikh raha hain!)

and the little shuffle between the personalities... awesome tha...specially with Zaid.. and Zaid took it as challenge now...aab toh mamla personal ho gaya...

aab kya shadi barbaad karoge?

do conttinue...soon.

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Awesome Blossom Update👏

So the heart is finally triumphing over a raging mind. Its heartening to see Arjun too finding solace in filial warmth. There may not have to be a tragic confrontation after all. Arjun may yet begin to care for Maasa & Sam while still marching ahead in his mission.

Loved it 😳

Sorry for the lateness. Laptop troubles

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Annu

@Chulbuli_Annu

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

all pending parts read

finally story ne speed pakad hi li...

sha ne sam ko zaid k sath dekha...and arjun ko lg rha hai k rosh ne sab kuch bta dia

and sha ko sleeping pills k bare me pta chal gya

rosh ne arjun ko phone pe acche se treat kia

so dono taraf se challenge diye gye hai..rosh ne arjun ko kaha k sha masa aur sam ko kuch nhi karega...and arjun ne kaha 4 din hai uske pass 5th day wo hi kuch karega

and last 4th part kuch zyda hi interesting hai...

kabhi sha arjun ko over power krta hai to kabhi arjun sha pr...

zaid k call ne waise ek taraf se accha hi kam kia...ek to sam ko pta chal gya k sha k iss baat se fark pad rha hai...

dusra masa ne arjun wala sha ka rup bhi dekh lia...but masa ne darne ki jagah arjun ko bhi sha jaisa hi treat kia...

and sam ne sha ko zaid ka sach bta dia...and sha aur arjun ko one by one sam ne dekh hi lia...

interestingly dekhna ye hai k zaid ko sha k ghar se kya kya milta hai

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 36

Posted: 11 years ago

#379

awesome update di

loved it

sam..bechara..shaadi he..aisa to hota hi rahega!

sha/arjun took zaid's call!

loved the way masa cared for sha..actually arjun!

arjun calls zaid n tels not to disturb him..

now waiting to see what happens next

do continu soon

thankx for pm

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Awesome update...

the part where Arjun feels Masa's love for the first time and he slept peacefully was superbly written

I guess only that love can bring Arjun out of his violent revengeful mode.

Zaid and Naina are going to sneak into Arjun's den...hope they dont create more problems for themselves...and dont force Arjun to do something grave!

cont soon

Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago

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