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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Heli... u deserve the title of Cliffhanger queen 😉

Every chapter ends with a deeper cliffhanger than the previous one

I start every chapter thinking that suspense u left in last chapter will be over and things will move smoothly ... but u somehow manage to create a new and bigger suspense at the end of the chapter 😉

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Superb writing once again Helna 👍🏼

feeling bad for Sha... now he knows about the lies around him...

the initial masti mazak between him and Sam was really soothing but everything is going to change now... don't know how Masa & Same are going to handle him now... will he ask them anything ??? or may be he will not ask anything and wait to see whats actually going on... Arjun will react again i guess...

brilliant writing it was 👏

waiting for more 😳

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Harsha

@Harsha111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Great update chechi...
My hear beat is increasing
Shaleen saw sleeping pills and sam's lie
OMG ab kya hoga
eagerly waiting for next part
cont soon...

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Wow didu...

It's awesome, blossom and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm...

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904129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

Superrbb Helena Di..The start itself was sweet! Sam-Shaa banters! 🤣🤣 Wo bhi for newspaper..😆 Aur Yeh Shaa paper padh ke Sam ko sametne ke liye de diya..😆 Sweet! ❤️ So Arjun asked Karan to find out about Abhay who fell a prey to drugs. Masa invited Shaina for the wedding too and she wants him to meet Shaleen but Shaina wont go as she cant face Him..She really trusts Arjun Blindly..!! Ahaan..😉 So Sameer buying a ring for Aisha and Shaa helped him. Also he noticed a Saree there..😉 He indeed is falling for Roshni..😊 Afterall she knows how to calm him down.. Shaleen brought the Saree for Roshni and even gifted her. Aww..Sweettt! ❤️ So Shaa saw Sameer talking to ACP Zaid and is hurt by the fact that Sameer, His best friend lied to him.. Also he found the bottle of sleeping pills! And he is much more broken..What next now with only 6 days for the wedding.. Will Arjun emerge again? As it is he will stop taking the pills! Thanxx fr pm and do continuee Soonz!

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Harisree001

@Harisree001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Superb...
Shaleen bought a gift for Roshni... That is nice...
Shaleen is slowly knowing about his surroundings...
But I think it is good for him... He should completely know about Arjun... About himself...
But I feel sad that at the end there will be no Arjun... And Shaina will lost her angel...
But two poeple's exist is not possible...
Waiting to know what have you decided for this story...
Cont soon dear...

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sisgeo

@sisgeo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

this is getting better and.. more into the deep..

if sha gets to know before wedding what will happen, waiting for the update

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Things are getting out of hand, everybody are hiding things from Sha but it's for his good.Now, as Sha is getting little hints from different sides, what will that lead to?He's been kept out of everything and is being lied too, what will happen now?
A ring for Aisha and then the saree for Roshni, that was so sweet.
Shaina and Karan, they both are assigned works to do. Will they find the reason why Arjun is out of focus?And what are the work they are asked to do?
That was a brilliant update.
Loved every bits of it..