ariya joint ss: Rehnuma...tujhse roshan mera jahan *complete* pg 37 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh god..
ye arjun bina kisi ko bole itna dangerous kam q kar rha!
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we both heartly give ur regards to all those who loved the concept and writing part.. this has made our titi123 gain her confidence alot n she is super super happy n yes big treat here she is planning to give u all..


i.e. a MAHA EPISODE..

weekends are famous for maha episodes so why should we lack back in our stories.. here i vl post 2 parts back to back for this story..

keep loving keep supporting..


Part 2...

A place far away from Mumbai just like an old godown unused from many years..with huge wooden boxes are dumped and piled up at d corners ...darkness prevailing all over the place that on a bright sunny day u require lights

...a man in his mid forties sitting on a rocking chair having a cigar in his hand...

His man entered a raised his hand to do salam..

Sikander saab...maal ke delivery ho chuki hai...

Sik: Good work...altaf...kisiko tumpe shaq to nahi hua??...kahi police tumhare piche to nahi hai? Koi locha nahi manta hia iss baar?

Altaf:aree bhai kaiko fikar karele hooo aap ab kabhi koi locha nahi hoga

Sik: wooh tumne kaha tha ke nayi consignment ke liye Goa se ek ladki aane wali hai...kaha hai wooh..??

Altaf: Ha wooh aygeyi hai saab...kamalka piece hia boss lagta hia khuda ne fursat se banaya hia aur shakal jitni sunder akal utni hi tedi hia uske.. kya sauda karti hia? Mein bhi dekha reh gaya usko..

Aur aaj ka deal bhi kya handle ki usne... party to paisa leke tolmol kar raha the...but usne ek bhi paisa kam karne nehi diya...bole toh uske wajah se to aaj hamare kaafi nafa hua hai...par bas thode tedi hia jaldi haath mein nahi ate..par wooh aapke saath kaam karna chati hai ..bahar hi khari hai...aap kahe to ander leke aajayun...

Sik: Bulao use...

Altaf: Aao Zara...


A girl in her mid twenties enters the godown...her hair tied in a pony tail...with two locks touching her shoulder...she was wearing a knee length party dress of deep blue colour...her smoky eyes n pink lip gloss added to her beauty... She was wearing high heels...she was looking simply stunning...as if light spreaded in the dark godown...she was curling her hair strand with her finger n cewing a chewing gum and making a ballon of it..

Altaf: Zara yeh hia hamare malik.sikkander saab..aur saab ye hai

Bt she stopped him

Zara: zara apna introduction khud deti hia..samjha..

Atlaf: meine bola thaa nna saab tedi chees hia

Sik: to tum ho zara...kaphi tariff sun raha tha tere bareme...toh tum hamare sath kaam karma chate ho...kabse ho is line me?

Zara: Bachpan se ...

Sik : Bachpan se matlab?

Zara: Mera baap iss dandhe mein. goa ka drug king tha...par usko ek din police me pakar liya...main 15 saal ki t hi tab se main hi sab samhal rahi hoon...mere papa...Rashid don...aapne naam sayad suna ho...

Sik: Ha ha suna hai, to tum uski beti ho...ek samay bahot naam tha uska market me...shayad tum meri aabadi banke ayi ho...to thik hai tum hamare sath hi kaam karoge...par iskeliye tumhe training dena hoga...

Zara: Iski zarurat nahi...mujhe gun chalana aata hai...aur logo ke muh se sach ugalwana bhi...bolo toh apke iss pantar par hi aazma ke dekhati hoon. aur haan meri ik shart apke deal ka 25% mera.

Altaf: ee yedi hia kya sikander sahib se share mang rahe hia..

Zara: kaam ka paisa leti hai zara mufat ka nahi, saudda manzor hai toh bolo warna zara apna kaam khud bhi kar sakti hia..

Sik: tumhara share mil jayega.. par agar humse gaddari karne ke koshish ko anjam maut se bhi battar hoga...

Zara: zara ki zaban hia sahib ek baar aap apna kiya hua vada bhul sakte hia par zara nahi..

Sik:Thik hai phir hum kal baat karenge tumse...filhal tumhe is underground godown me rehna hoga...yaha kahi kamre hai..n hamare bahut saare sathi yaha hai...tumhe altaf Ek room dikha dega...tum waha rohogi jab tak hamare agla consignment nahi ata...

Aur ha tumhare gun n phone altaf ko dedo...tumhe kal hamare bharosa jitney kiliye ek test dena hoga fir le lena

Zara: Thik hai yeh le goda pakad aur sambhal ke rakhiyo warna..

throwing gun to altaf..

aur suno mere ko khana achche wale plate mein dena zara ko gandi plate pasand nahi hia..

Altaf: thik hia meri maa chal

They were about to leave...

Sik : altaf ruko...zara tum jao..

Zara: okkk

She went on humming a song and whistling..

Sik:hamare dushman ki kya khabar hai?

Altaf(with evil smile): bahot acha. Hum use shana samajte the par wooh toh... haaa haaa kya ..Beewakoof banaya use usne itni asani se sab man liya aur...fas gaye hamari jaal me...par admi wooh bhi kam teda nahi hia baar baar ladne ke koshish karta hia...

kya takat hai uski...phir do do drug ka dose deke sula diya hai...ab shanti se so raha hai...

Sik : Uska koi bharosa nahi...kahi bhag na jayee...uske muh se information nikalni padegi ke use hamare den ke bare me kaise pata chala...warna hamara kaam bigar jayega...

Altaf: fikar mat karo saab wo behosh hai..aur drug ki wajah se kal se dheere dheere kamjor par jayega...tab hum usse puchtach karenge...aur humne use bandh ke rakha hai...kahi nehi jaa payega wooh...

Sik: thik hai tum log jao ...kal usse hum dekhenge...

Altaf also leaves.. bt zara who was standing in corner heard it all...

Zara mv: ye kiski baat kar rahe hia...? Patana lagana padega mujhe..

Zara sat on the bed anger evident on her face which is burning her inside..

Zara: Sikkander tumhe nahi pata.. ke zara tumhare aabadi nahi balki barbadi banke aye hai..

.jitna taklif tumne mere apne ko di hia un sab ka hisab main sudh samet tumse wasool karegi yeh zara..kasam hai mujhe apne pyar ki tujhe nahi chodungi..

Bas ab kal se hi apna kaam shuru kar dungi mein..

Zara started to make her plans..

Next morning..

Sik: altaf zara ko bulao aaj use hamare dushma se milana hia dekhna hia jitni badi baat wooh karti hia utna hi dam hia usme ya nahi..

At the moment another men(ruhan) of his came with a stinge of blood near her mouth..

Altaf: yeh kya hua? Kisne mara?

Ruhan: aree kya ladki pakadke laye ho coffee achchi nahi lagi toh cup bhi phekke mara aur ek chata bhi..


Altaf: iski itni himmat abhi thik karta hoon isse..


Sik: ruk jao altaf..aaj usne sabit kar diya ke wooh kisike nahi darti .. waah maza ayega ese ladki ke saath kaam karne mein..

Zara came in a very angry mood..

Zara: par mein yahanse ja rhea hoo aapne apne pantaro ko mehman navazi nai shikhaye kya? Dekho sahib zara apka kaam karegi par apne hisab se zara ki koi zarorat puri nahi hue toh yeh deal abhi ke abhi khatam samaj lo...

Sik: zara shant hoja teri coffee aa jayegi..

Zara: glass saaf karke lana.. aur dekho apun fokat ka paisa nahi leti kaam bolo..

Sik: ek admi ko torture karna hia use information ugalvani hia..par admi teda hia thoda aur bohot gussewala bhi//

Zara: aaj tak koi langur paida nahi hua joh zara se panga le.. kidhar hai wooh..?

Before sik could speak thy heard a loud voice from a room..

Chodo mujhe mein tum sab ko khatam kar dunga chodo...

Sik: lo jag gaya sher.. ab zara isko thik kar..lagta hia drug ka agla dose dene ka waqt aa jaya hia..

Zara:yeh hia kaun?

Altaf:acp arjun suryakant rawte..sahib ka sabse bada dushman iski biwi ko mar diya tha iski akhon ke samne ...hero banke...aapna heroine ka badla lene aya tha.. par bechara hamare jaal mein fass gaya..

Zara: isko toh zara chuttiyon mein sambhal legi par apne tumhare pantaro ki zarorat nahi hia..

Altaf: par zara teri safety ke liye..

Zara: tu apni safety ka khayal rakh.. samjha zara akele hi kafi hia..mein atee hia usko dekhke..

Zara entered the room and saw a person in his late twenties struggling in his half senses...he had several wounds on his body...n was bleeding from d corner of his mouth...

Zara: toh yeh yahan hia.? Koi baat nahi apun ka kaam toh ban jayega..

Altaf came behind to give her drug injection..

Altaf: yeh de de isko yeh isko kamzor bhi banaiyega aur nashe mein bhi rakkhhega..

Zara: thik hia ja tu..

After altaf went zara goes to the person struggling hard to get off his cuffs...n d iron chains tied to his arms n legs.

Zara: ab apko chinta karni zarorat nahi hia mein aa gai hoon apke liye...

Arjun(in a feverly voice):Kaun ho tum?

Zara: apki riya arjun sir.

and hugged a very weak, trembling n almost senseless arjun...

Precap:

Will arjun be able to fight back?

Will rathod be able to track arjun?


U all would have guessed zara to be riya for sure.. intelligent readers hia meri family mein I know.. I hope u will enjoy the another part too..


scroll down for part 3 too..😳

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Part 3...

In the room where arjun is tied with chains ruthlessly...

He has become fully unconscious now...due to strong drug dose ,stress, injuries n starvation merciless torture...he didn't even know that his angel was there to save him...

zara sits down and caress his face...

zara: ab mein aa gai hoon apko kuch nahi hone dungi...apki riya apke paas hia arjun sir..

Suddenly her eyes fell on his arms ...she was shocked...at least 20 insertion points of syringes were there indicating that he has been forcefully drugged a number of times...and that too very brutally...tears stung her eyes...how badly she wished that she could heal all his wounds...n sooth his pains...and hold him in her arms ...but unfortunately she couldnot...she wiped her eyes n said boldly...

Riya(caressing his forehead): Arjun sir aap fikar math kijiye...aapke riya aa gai hai..

ab mein sik ko nahi chodungi..

usne apni dardnak maut toh aur bhi zyada dardnak manga hia toh use mein wahi dungi..

sik ko apke diye hue har zakham ka hisab apne dard bhari chikho se dena hoga...

apko diye hue har kharoch use bohot bharein padegi iska karz apne khoon se chukayega..

appka ka badla lungi mein..vada hai mera..

Ya toh woh apne pyar ko yaha se sahi salamat wapas leke jayungi..

warna issi pyar ke liye khud ko kurban kar degi par apko kuch nahi hone dungi...

Aapka baadla pura zaroor hoga aap roshniji k katil ko jaroor saza denge...ye mera aapse wada hai...

Par is waqt main kuch karungi to sik ko shaq ho jayega...main raat ko ayungi aapse milne...kuch nahi hone dungi aapko...aapne riya par bharosa rakhiye.

she caressed his wounds and come out..n meet sikander ..

sik: zara use itna kamzor banao ke hamare sawalon ka sach sach jawab de...

zara/riya mv: kamzorr wooh nahi tum banoge sik..

zara: Iss waqt toh behosh hai to kuch bhi batane ke halat me nahi hai...par mere paas esa ek tarika hia

sik: kya?

Zara: uske liye yeh drug injection nahi..bohot special injection mangavati hoon apne admiyon se..zinda lash ban jayega wooh bas kuch dino mein...

Sik: par wooh hame information denee ke baad..

Zara: haan yeh ek slow poison jaise kaam karega... par use pehle wooh dard bardash nehi karpayega aur humse aapni zindegi ki bheek mangega...tab sab kuch usske muh se hum ugalwa lenge...

Sik: waah zara kamal ki hi tu.. thik hai mangalo wooh injection..

Zara: thik hia..hojayega par uske liye mujhe bahar jake ye injection lana hoga..

Sik: thik hia..zara ek drug deal hia tumhe altaf ke saath jana hoga...

Zara: par altaf ko bolna ke muh bandh rakhe..warna..

Sik: altaf soch samajke..

Altaf: jee sahib...

Zara and altaf reach the place where the deal is to be done..

Zara: mal kahan hia..?

Dealer: tum ho kaun?

Altaf: yeh nai(new) ladki hia kaam ki hai

Zara: time khoti mat karo.. maal kahan hia..?

Dealer: yeh lo sample aur wooh raha maal..

Zara checks the packets n puts a powder on it..

Zara: altaf paise do.. maal thik hia..

Altaf was about to give money when suddenly they could hear police sirens..

Altaf: police.. kahin kisine deal ka info leak toh nahi kiay,zara kahi tune?

Zara: ee satkele..mere toh har waqtt tere samne thee na toh phir..ab ek kaam karo yeh maal dealer tum apne paas rakho aur altaf paise adhe tum rakho aur adhe mein... aur haan alag disha mein bhago adde pe milte hia..

Altaf: thik hia..par tu aa jana warna.

Zara slapped him hard..

Zara: dubara mere ko dhamki diya toh yainch tapka dalungi tereko..

Looking at the dealer..

Zara: tu kya picture dekhneke liye ruka ...chal nikal..aur dubara maal kahan lana hia yeh hum bataiyenge.

All three ran into different directions bt police easily caught all the drug packets and the dealer too...

Altaf could save himself and he reached the factory after few hours and zara she reached where was supposed to..

She reached a place a huge tall building having a board..

" special officers wing"

ETF OFFICER RIYA MUKHERJEE REPORTING SIR"

Aooo riya ya zara... well done we could get all the drugs easily n the dealer too,..

Zara/riya: my duty sir.kya mein agee ke plan discuss kar sakti hoon mujhe jaldi wapas jana hoga..

Officer: ok riya come..

Riya settled down n inserted a pendrive..

Riya: waise thank abhi mujhe iss mission mein shamil karne ke liye..

Abhighyan shikhavat special officer narcotics wing..riya's friend and well wisher..

Abhigyan: com on tum jiss junnon ke saath arjun ke liye yeh sab karne ke liye taiyar ho toh I was supposed to help aur phir humare desh ke bhalai bhi toh isime hia..

Waise arjun kaisa hia?

Tears rolled down riya's eyes remembering arjun's conditions.

Abhigyan: riya ..

Riya: wooh bohot taklif mein hia uss sik ne unhe buri tarah drug kiya hua hia aur bahot torture bhi but ab esa nahi hoga kyonki mein unhe drug dose nahi antidots dungi sik se yeh kehkar yeh ek tarah ka slow poison hia..ek baar arjun sir ko thik tarah hosh aa jay to wooh sik ki zindagi ka akri din hoga..

Abhigyan: unhe tuj par koi shakh?

Riya: nahi jaise hi unhone mujhe dekha aur meri history jane he trusted me aur agar unhone kuch background search kiya bhi toh unhe wahi milega joh mein unse kahungi..

Abhigyan: riya I thought ke arjun ko dekhke shayad tum kamzor pad jaoge par nahi riya u are very strong n ur love for him is way more stronger..

Riya: mera pyar mere arjun sir meri takat hia abhi..bt mein yeh nahi kar pati agar 2 din pehle tum mera saath na dete

Flashback..

The day before whn arjun went on leave riya was continuosly monitoring his actions bt she could not do it alone she needed some1 very strong n trustworthy so she chose her good friend special officer abhigyan from narcotics department ..

Few hours..A girl waiting in a restaurant impatiently...

Girl: Ye abhi kaha rahe gaya?

Just then a man enters the resturant and smiles at her...

Man: Hey riya...sorry thoda late hogaya...ek important case aa gaya tha...

Riya: Abhi, I need your help...pls help me out.

Abhi: Kya baat Hai Riya? Sab thik to hai na?

Riya: kuch bhi thik nahi hai... Abhi, Kya sikkander ka case tumhara dept handle kar raha hai?

Abhi's jaw stiffens..

Abhi: Sorry riya cant tell u...main aapne dept ka info leak nahi kar sakta...I cant betray my duty...

Riya: Pls abhi I need to know...kissi ka zindegi isse juri hai...aur main bhi ek police officer hoon...so why cant u tell me?

Abhi: Par Riya mai...

Riya: Main tum aur tumhara dept ka isme help kar sakti hoon...sik bahut bara criminal hai who bachna nahi chahiya...pls tell me abhi...

Abhi(silent for a few seconds): Ha ...sik ka case officially..anti narcotics dept ko diya gaya hai...aur is case ko main hi Lead kar raha hoon...hamara team ko kuch leads mili hai...but koi thos sabut hath nahi aya hai...we r planning an undercover opration taki hame uske sare illegal deals ke bare me sabut mil jayee...thenwe can conduct a raid...

Riya: Abhi...mujhe is operation ka hissa bana lo pls...main is mission pe as an undercover jaungi...

Abhi: No way riya main tumhare jaan khatre me nahi daal sahta...dost ho tum mere...sik is very dangerous...no u r not going...waise bhi etf is case me involved nahi hai so..no.

Riya: Etf is case me already involve ho chuke hai, abhi.

Abhi: What???

Riya: Ha..Arjun sir kal se leave pe hai...n I am sure wo sik ke piche gaya hai...we cant stop him...aur is bare me team aur rathore sir ko kuch nahi pata ...but u know sik ke informers charo taraf hai ...agar arjun sir ko kuch...nahi nahi...I cant leave him alone...mujhe unke help ki liye jana hai...aur roshni ji ke maut ka badla lene me unko support bhi karna hai...

Abhi(smilling): Oh !so ye sab Arjun sir ke liye ho raha hai? Tabhi main sochu tum aachanak meri madad kyun karogi...maan gaye tumhe...uss kharus ki itni fikar...itna pyar..

Riya: Abhi pls...arjun sir kharus nahi hai...he is very good at heart...unke sath itna kuch huya phir bhi woh aapne wife ko insaaf dilane kiliye aapne jaan ki baazi laga rahe hai...He is truly a loyal husband...

Abhi: Ok Ok bas...Arjun sir ki tariff baad me karna...filhal ye batao...r u sure about this?

Riya: yes ,dead sure mein wahan jaungi..

Abhi: Ok then u r in...Kya tumhe koi idea hai ke wooh kaha gaya hai ...?kyunki abhi tak uski location trace nahi kar paye hia.

Riya : Ha ...u don't worry...kal sir jab sik ke piche jayenge hame us jagah ka location pata chal jayega...n u can send me as undercover...

Abhi: location ...kaise?

Riya(blushing):Wooh maine unke locket me ek transmitter chip fit kiya hai...

Abhi: WWHat!! Arjun sir ke gale me ghanti bandhi???...kya baat hai meri sherni...waise ye kaise kiya tune, huh?

Riya(blushing hard): woo sab chod...kal milte hai bahot tayariyan karni hai...

Abhi: Ok Bye kal milte hai...bt riya take care

Riya: sure abhi..

They leave...

Flashback over...

Present:

Abhigyan: ok riya joh bhi directions tumne diye hia uske mutabik mein ek force ko prepare karta hoo for attack tab tak tum arjun ko thik kardo..

Riya: haan abhi mujhe ab chalna chalna chahiye.aur suno yeh sik ke paise hia use khilaaf hathiyaar kharidne mein kaam ayenge..

Abhi : ok see u soon..

Riya: yess bye..

Riya was coming back at the factory.bt it was too late.. coz altaf reached 2 hours before.

Altaf: sik sahib mujhe lagta hia Zara ne hume dhoka diya hia..wooh abhi tak naih aye wooh hamare adhee paise lekar bhag gai..

Sik threw a chair in anger..

Sik: sik ke dhokha bohot mehnga padega tumhe zara.. altaf mujhe wooh ladki chahiye zinda ya murda..

Then a voice came from behind...

Main aa gayi hoon...

Precap:

Has riya lost sik's trust?

Will she able to bring arjun back safely...



hope u like our maha episode.. and hope it was really a " good" one.. please share ur comments..


love ,

titi n pinku..

Edited by pinkerbell - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. Love it.. INteresting.. Unconditional love of riya for arjun.. Risk taken by her.. Uncommendable..Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ds s cld real dobl dhamaka
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsumm Pinkuz!! Kya mast ladki hai Zara!!!! Oops..I mean Riya! Loved It...Superrb! So she will be helping Arjun..Also loved Abhigyan!! ❤️ Intrestingg Precapp! Thanxx fr pm...Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ARJUN IS IN CAGE OF SIK
ZARA IS RYA


LOVE TH UPDT
CONT SOON
THNX FR PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...

Superb...
Fantastic...
Amazing...
Love this new avatar of RIYA...🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣
I m speechless...sorry...😳😳😳
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dear
Wonderful
Kya drama tha too good
So riya is zara as undercover
feeling bad for arjun 😭
Hope riya n arjun together kill this sikander
loved it
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update...loved this riya...👏continue soon

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