ARAKSHI TS : THE MISTAKE......pt2 pg16

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this is a new two shot
i hope you all will like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue

" tu yeh kya kar raha hai ?" sameer asked

" kya kar raha hoon mein ?" arjun asked

" tu saakshi ko itna pareshaan kyun kar raha hai ? if you love her then tell her directly instead of irritating her " sameer said

" sam jaisa tu soch raha hai waisa kuch nai hai " arjun lied

" haan haan mein jaanta hoon , jaisa mein soch raha hoon usse kayi guna zyada hai , I know " sameer taunted

" dekh sam ..." Arjun started

" dekh arjun , do you really think I don't know , I know tu kyun aaj kal uska har report reject karta hai , taaki wo late night tak kaam kare aur tu mahaan banker usse lift de sake , I know tu uske saath time spend karne ke liye bahana dhoondte rehta hai , bas farak itna hai kit u usse irritate karta hai , uski kabhiliyat pe shak karta hai , usse insult karta hai , so instead of doing all this tell her that you love her things will be easy" sameer said and left arjun's cabin

" sam is right , I should tell her that I love her " arjun decieded

***

She was angry , everyone understood it

" saakshi coffee ?" aisha asked

" nai zeher do " saakshi said angrily

" saakshi ... sab teek tho hai ?" shree asked

" nai ... kuch teek nai hai ...tum repair kar sakte ho ?" saakshi asked angrily

" saakshi..." Arjun started

" please arjun ... Baksh do mujhe atleast for today , apne insults bachake rakho kal kaam aayenge " she said and walked out of the conference room and went into her cabin

Aisha , shree and chotu were looking at each other

" yeh humaari all time happy saakshi ko kya ho gaya ?" shree asked

Arjun also stood up and left for his cabin

On his way he saw saakshi , she was crying with her head on the table

It somehow pained him

" kuch der ke liye usse akele hi rehna chahiye , she will feel better " arjun thought and went into his cabin

He was continuously thinking about her only

***

" saakshi , atleast tell us your problem , hum tumhaari help kar sakte hain " aisha said

" guys mera help koi nai kar sakta , mein boori tarike se fas chuki hoon " saakshi said inbetween her sobs

" trust me saakshi , mein tumhaari help zaroor karoongi " aisha said

" promise ?" saakshi asked

It confused aisha a bit , she thought for a second and then said " promise"

" ab batao bhi ki problem kya hai ?" aisha asked

" tum log tho jaante hi ho ki mere papa coma mein hain ..." saakshi started

" haan ...uncle teek tho hain , saakshi..." aisha started

" aisha... meri poori baat tho pehle suno " saakshi said

" haan haan bolo " aisha said

" thon a chachu hi mujhe sambhalte te , tho unhe na mere liye ek ladka pasand aaya , tho unhone mujhe kal sham ko call kiya aur uss ladke ka photo mujhe whatsapp kiya , tho maine joot bola ki mein kisi se pyaar karti hoon aur wo bhi mujhse pyaar karta hai..." She took a deep breathe

" tho unhone poocha ki wo kaun hai aur kya karta hai tho maine kaha ki wo police hai ..." saakshi said

" haan tho tu tension mat le ... mein tera boyfriend banke aa jaunga " shree said

" nai shree... tho na unhone naam poocha aur tabhi arjun conference room se bahar nikala tho maine arjun bola ...lekin wo maine chachu ko nai bola tha lekin unhone sunliya aur fir poocha kit um ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte se pyaar karti ho ? tho maine na haan keh diya " saakshi said

Aisha , shree , chotu and lisa were shocked

" saakshi hum sab jaante hain ki tum arjun sir se pyaar karti ho , lekin arjun sir ..." lisa said

" lisa yeh sab chodo ... tho tumhaare chachune kya kaha ?" aisha asked and saakshi started crying again

" saakshi..." aisha said

" wo arjun se milna chahte hain " saakshi said and aisha almost fainted

" what ?" aisha , shree , chotu and lisa asked in unison

" guys tum log meri maddad karoge na ? please arjun ko manao na ki wo mere saath nashik chale , mere chachu ke ghar " saakshi said

" tum pagal ho gayi ho saakshi " shree said

" dekho saakshi , tum thande dimaag se arjun sir ko samjao , I am sure wo samaj jayenge " aisha said

" haan , jaake arjun sir se baat karo " lisa too agreed

" akele , wo arjun tho mujhe kha hi jayega " saakshi said

" saakshi... shub shub bolo ... trust me jaake arjun sir se baat karke tho dekho " aisha insisted

So saakshi wiped her tears and stood up and walked to arjun's cabin

" can I come in ?" she knocked his door and looked back at her team who encouraged her to go in

She entered his room

" saakshi... are you ok now ?" arjun asked

concern was written all over his face

" I think he is in a good mood " she thought to herself

" arjun ... Wo actually...wo kya hai na ..." saakshi stammered

" kya baat hai saakshi ?" arjun asked politely

His softness shocked her

He knew she was in some problem , but she looked scared of him

" wo actually... " saakshi stopped and took a deep breathe

" kya problem hai saakshi ?" arjun asked

" problem tho hai...kya tum meri maddad karoge ?" saakshi asked

" kya problem hai ?" arjun asked

" wo... Actually... Kya tum do din ke liye mere boy friend ban sakte ho ?" she blurted out

" what ?" he literally screamed

To be continued...


i know its different and many of you may not like it...

do comment and give me your feedbacks


part 1 - 9

part 2 - 16

Edited by magati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my god...!!!
This is too good...
I grinned too long that everyone started asking me why am I griinning late night...
What to do... This is too good...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm very interesting! Loved it!
Can't wait for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb upd8
i want to arjuns reactins
eagerly for all ur story updates
thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I actually dint lyk it.. I jst luvd it!!! It ws minndddblwngg!!
Nd sakshi's sentnce "Kya tum do din ke liye mere boy friend ban sakte ho?" Lol 🤣🤣!! Nw wat ws dat 😆😆😆
By God!! Arjun to uski le hi lega nd dt 2u bht buri trh se 😆
Waitng 4 arjun's reactn.. do cntinue soon
nd thnx 4 d pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uff this starting...my "teeth" refusing to stay covered by my lips..😆
Sakshi is in great trouble..jhoot ki chakkar main sach nikal gayee...🤣

And her irritated reaction...nicely written.
And at last all pushed her to the tigers den!

It was a nice proposal if she skipped that "do din" words.

Beautiful start dear, waiting to see Arjun's raction, and hat they do in front of sakshi's uncle.

Do continue..thanks for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Damm good concept.. Do continu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really interesting one dear...

Is he going to meet her chachu as her boy friend..??

Please continue soon...please...

Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i guess the title says the mistake but it was the best mistake that sakshi could do 😉
arjun ka reaction thoda loud tha but i guess he must be thinking ki why only for 2 days
and why not forever 😆😉
second part soon pls
thanks for pm

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