Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Chapter 8:

This line gave me goosebumps and i got butterflies in my stomach:

"Arjun immediately looked away, not being able to withstand the pained look her tired eyes held. He hesitated for a second but then decided to do it anyway. Without another thought, he swept her into his arms and began walking towards the door with Lisa behind him."

I hate the villagers for blaming Sakshi like that...their words hurt me as well as they questioned her character😡

But then he was there with her, throughout, protecting her..a mere stranger and yet something more that he doesn't realise yet. Hayee I am falling in love with Arjun once again

Again, every emotion was beautifully penned down... My heart just broke into tiny pieces thinking about what Sakshi went through🥺

I hope it all gets cleared soon..sighhh

Thank youu for PMing me the update! 🤗

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Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Hi Avantika..
The chapter was awesome. .n mind blowing. .
I simply loved the way Arjun stood by Sakshi..
The way he supported her..
Their silence wad so beautiful. .
N you made every second they spent together beautiful with you words Avni..
The depth was so graceful..n serene..
This story always gives me peace..
I am commenting this since long..
N somehow I wanted their time together like this only..
N you hava made it..

And the twist..
The chat history. .
N thats why I have described this chapter as mind blowing. ..
So they were connected...
Please reveal more dear devil sweetheart..
This was so amazing..

Waiting for long next part..

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Avni avniii yet another beautiful update ..which kinda tore my heart to bits at most of the places but also brought a smile to my face towards the end (which was totally unexpected😳)

My most favourite lines:

"Trust me, when everything seems to fall apart, there's always a tiny window of hope, you know.. You just have to find it.", he said honestly.

Weakness is a state of mind, Sakshi.. It doesn't exist for real..

"He wasn't exactly a friend; ..." I was confused at this point as to who this is but then of course the ending cleared things up😃 that chat convo was the best ever! It brought a hugeee smile to my face and kinda reminded me of a friend of mine...we used to chat online at least once every week... but he is rather distanced now...

Anywaaay..coming back to the update that scene by the stream was just so beautifully penned down. I felt like I could hear the stream gurgling by..and then the pine trees around...did I mention I am in love with pine trees?😳

That bit about the key chain was mysterious..what's in a key chain?😕

Absolutely loved the end to bits..waiting for some moree😃

Keeep writing and thank youu for this update!🤗

Oh and another biiig sorry for the delay!

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yams.s

@yams.s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Really a long long update

Emotions were beautifully portrayed.

Scene between Saakshi and her uncle. Especially the conversation between Arjun and Saakshi were awesome. It was written beautifully

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