Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Awesome start
loved it
we are not going anywhere so bring it on
hope it soon turns into FF
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

That was seriously, a wonderful update! It had the right amounts of everything!!!!
I have no idea who Sakshi's father was, but is he Arjun's mentor too?
Waiting eagerly for the next update!

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nice start...

I am assuming both Sakshi and Arjun are wanting to avenge Sakshi's dad's death...

so Arjun's mentor is Sakshi's dad too...so whats the trap and how was her dad's name maligned...

Both have a past which is mysterious as of now...

cont soon!

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Yoohoo Avni is back with a new story 🥳

Very interesting prologue indeed 😃 😃

So here we do know how much the officer actually means to Arjun...this going to be really interesting to know how arjun will prove the officer innocence 😛 😛

Excited to read how the story will mold into 😃

Of course we'll stick around to read this wonderful story and others also...whatever will happen to the show 😛 😛

Thank you for the pm and update 🤗🤗

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Ayay!!

One more work from you.

The start was good.. Loved it.

Waiting for them to meet!😉

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Res/unres

that was an awesome start dear😊👏

sakshi want to bring justice for his dad's dead...

is arjun mentor is sakshi's dad???

u always have unique style of writing...keep going...

will be waiting to read further...

thanx for PM...

sory for late reply...

Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

First highlight:Saakshi's character which i m looking forward to see how you'll explore &i m sure you'll do justice to her character unlike CVS.Anyways no point now
Second Highlight:No RR rift
Third Highlight:Arjun Saakshi's purpose in life which seems to avenge his mentor's & her's father's death respectively.Clash of the Titans or join hands to avenge the death of the most important person in their lifes
Last but not the least,Mushkil Prem kahani
Bring it on my dear😃Many highlights which gives me a reason to stick to the story.Its better to read sumthing worthy rather than watching the show limping with each passing days.

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
First highlight:Saakshi's character which i m looking forward to see how you'll explore &i m sure you'll do justice to her character unlike CVS.Anyways no point now
Second Highlight:No RR rift
Third Highlight:Arjun Saakshi's purpose in life which seems to avenge his mentor's & her's father's death respectively.Clash of the Titans or join hands to avenge the death of the most important person in their lifes
Last but not the least,Mushkil Prem kahani
Bring it on my dear😃Many highlights which gives me a reason to stick to the story.Its better to read sumthing worthy rather than watching the show limping with each passing days.

@ Red: Bwaha.. too early girl.. You actually fell for it? 😛

Thank you! 😳

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago

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sanjali

@sanjali

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Great start
Loved it
👏

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

A non-chirpy Sakshi Anand who was always taught to live with pride by her father and a no-nonsense cop Arjun Suryakant Rawte who has been in the journey of poviding justice to the needy ones and is taught to serve the nation with his head held high by his mentor.
Even though, they are different, they now seem to have a same target and determination.I guess it's the same person around whom their world revolves.
Another Brilliant concept.
I'm in for this story..
A weekly update sounds good, waiting for the next update.
Continue Soon.