Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

No no nooo

you stopped theree! AAHHH
So, Shree and Chotu were not involved in this - phewww😊

Feel so bad for Sakshi hope Arjun gets there on time! Get that Trivedi!!😡

I must admit I am cheating at work lol...it was so engrossing I couldn't stop reading hehe..and then when I was so into it, you stopped!🥺

Please dooo continue sooon! 😃🤗

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Usse trivedi ki toh mein 😡 😡

Go go arjun...go and save sakshi...she needs you 😛 😛

Very interesting update avni ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

An toh am waiting to see how arjun will be convinced that sakshi is innocent and also save her from trivedi ki bachi 😎

Thank you soo sooo much 🤗

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Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

I dont know Avni why are you thinking that the pace is slow!!!
For me, the pace is perfect. .
Pacing up will hamper the serenity of this story..
I have already told you that I feel an amazing peace while reading each chapter of this story..
Something unparallel..hat's off dear..
Coming to the story..
I am bit confused..Why Sakshi??
Do they know about Sakshi's aim also??
Ok..may be I am overthinking it..
Why are Chhotu n Shree also suspecting her??
Why was she trapped so badly??
Infact the precap is so scary..
Poor Sakshi is unconscious..
And that bloody Trivedi is gonna misbehave with her..
Hopefully Arjun will rescue her..
The way you change the scenes is really theatrical. .
Awesome. .and so artistic unparallely..
Waiting for next chapter Avni..
Take care..n thanks..

Edited by Amritamalhotra - 11 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

itna chotusa update? dats not like u...!

bt i loved this one...it cleared many things for me...
it even gave quite a gud reason to peep insight of th 'may b' culprit of sakshi's dad!

continue soon

love
Aisha

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sweetpari4u97

@sweetpari4u97

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

awesome updates.

read both 4 and 5 parts together.

fabulous work.

really sorry for late comment.

thankx for pm.

cont soon.

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

idhar bhi lollipop

This is cheating. Lady in Red mein unsaid rule tumne set kiya tha for lollipop & not here. Do not cheat warna main strike karugi. 😭

Yaha no lollipop pleej

Enough of my nautanki. 🤪
OMG she's behind bars
Upar se Tripathi ka innocent background jaankar to panic attack aa raha hai.Arjun se acche se joote khilwaana.I want to see him getting beaten with blue &black or any combination of colors around his eyes. 😡😡

Ok lemme be a bit serious.
I wonder if he randomly targeted Saakshi knowing the fact that she's a frequent visitor at the academy.🤔
Now that destiny will bring them face to face once again &I can sense where u r heading with this,I m super super exited for this MUSHKIL PREM KAHANI

but then will Arjun come to know about Saakshi whoz none but his mentor's daughter whom he tried searching.O God,kitne questions puchti hu main. 🤪

It was slow-paced one but then it seems more like it is just like heating up the battery of the car to start with the adventurous ride. Moreover the two's actual journey is about to begin when he brings her out.Am I right? I get it, what u r planning up to bring a big U turn in their lives. Lips sealed.

Two sequences that took me to the edge of the seat.one being her panicking in the lockup feeling helpless &eager to get out of the trap laid for her.She might have gone through the pain once more &could have realized how her father felt when he too was trapped for the same chargers. Honesty does takes more than required from a person. Secondly, her uncle state of mind when he came to know about Saakshi's arrest. When he fell down, for a second I felt he is no more but thank u, you r not that evil.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

*Edited*

Woah...baby, what was that, you have managed to clean bowel me this time my lady.😆

I am totally stumped. I thought Arjun had found something on Sakshi and set a trap but this is something totally different.

So Sakshi has fallen victim to the real villains. Even she is take by total surprise here, she wasn't expecting anything like this at all it seems.

So is she targeted because she is Ayesha's friend? Or do they know something about her that has fall right into their traps? Totally clueless here.😛

I hope Sakshi's uncle will be fine and Sakshi is saved on time by our hero.

So it is not a coincidence that Arjun is at the academy. So is being set up or someone truly wants him to find out what happened to his mentor?

I hope there are people behind him and he too is not being set up by someone like his mentor.

Okay so why do Arjun and team think the girl they arrested is involved in whatever is happening at the academy?

Looks like Arjun is in for a surprise when he realizes the girl is none other than Sakshi. I hope he is in time to rescue her and it is going to take some fast talking on Sakshi's part to convince Arjun that she is innocent, but I get the feeling she will do this without revealing who she is truly.

Okay yeah this one was bit slow placed as my friend above mentioned😉 But we forgive you this time.

Behna I too have a request for this one, please don't give us cliffhangers, it makes me want to smash something and want to pick your brain for the whole story in one go.😕

Please do update soon, and as always fantastic update and I loved every bit of it.

🤗

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

I really enjoyed the update and yea u are right Arjuns involvement makes sense in Sakshis arrest now
But the precap is more exciting
Why did u stop here? Now I wonder when u will update next
It is so interesting... Really waiting for arjun to meet sakshi in jail
Poor Sakshis uncle
Hope he gets better soon
And wonder how the people of the town will racy once Sakshi is back after a night of interrogation
Thanks for the pm and it's a humble request please update soon x