Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15 - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update
mrs rose confronts arjun
n even arjun realises his mistake
n also he seems to know that he is falling for riya
hehehe riya told nabby that she met logan aka arjun n nabby was shocked n surprised
arjun called riya to meet him at 1am
n then then then he apologised omg...!!!
then to compensate the fun riya missed he took her to fun fair wwooww
hahaha the whole way riya was thinking that arjun is taking her to an isolated place to kill her
fantastic work
continue soon
Edited by cuteangel32923 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
loved it
do update next wala soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unressed comment!
😃 on pg 50
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update it was so funny that monica ran away n riya telling the truth that she is thinking that arjun will murder her the proposing part of monica was great n hw sweet of arjun to make remends for his mistake i like the convo of mrs rose n arjun bt i think the hrt of arjun is already stolen by riya

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear
loved it
Fun fair..wowiee!!
that too when no one was there.. it would be so much fun!
do continu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pink1 - Thank you for commenting dear.

Areesha -Thank you.

Skrafty - Thank you dear. haha I loved writing that part.

Cuteangel- I love your commented. Basically you squeezed my whole chapter in a small brief. Thanks.

Fairyshah- Thank you dear.

Madmadona- Thank you. Glad you liked it.

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Rraba- Thank you dear. Love your comment. I guess yeah, she may have done that crime. lol.

Godly Affection- GA, thank you for commenting. BTW i liked your signature quote. It actually helped me in a certain situation. Thank you for indirectly being a great help.
Sarita- Thanks dear.

Live life- I had to keep you last as you bombard my page with your essay type comments. I'm not complaining, I love it.


Don't shoot me!

oh yes I will. And you can as well do that to me. I have my hands up.


I know I haven't been commenting on a whole lot of updates and trust me I feel TERRIBLE about it! It's been very busy since I went to vacation and when I returned the new academic year started, which put a lot of pressure on me. There is still a lot of pressure and it seems to be increasing by the minute but finally I got to comment! I am so happy about it!

oh dear, good luck. And you are sherni yaar, goli mar pressure ko. 😆

Woppiiieee!

So comming to the update-s! I would firstly like the song you picked by Ed Sheeran! It was absolutely fantabulous. I mean he is like my favorite singer...or one of the favorite singers! And the song...Kiss me by him just brought back a whole lot memories! Ahem, I wanna about it.😃

That song is really close to me. Me too.

When I first heard it, it was like my new addiction. I literally used to keep it on repeat and listen to it every single day whenever I got to time. The lyrics are so...realistic yet...magical they always make me euphoric. I hear it everyday.

And the way Arjun sang this song man! It was like the icing on the cake for me. Double euphoria. well it was surprising that Arjun actually knew how to sing In my story Arjun can do anything lol. I will surprise you all with a lot of things. Probably gonna break the cop image we have seen of him so far...but nonetheless I am glad you did make him sing. That too my favorite song by the favorite artist! just too good. I was smiling at that part until my muscles hurt. Seriously! And Riya's reaction to it was expected haha. 😆Thanks!

And then comes Josh to the rescue! Well...there was definitely the silent discomfort that passed between Josh and Arjun. I wonder what that is about... You'll know soon. Don't rush. but it's good to be curious. Keep guessing readers.

Oh after that comes the Fair thing! Omg...that was totally cool. Shree and Monica totally gave Riya a surprise. A pleasant one of course! But I am glad both of them joined her. Now it looks complete. Yup. 😃

but of course...the Perfect night is spoiled by our Mr.Logan rajkumar ! Gawwd...Sometimes I don't get his actions. He pushes her away but can't stand the sight of her enjoying with someone else. That too Josh! That definitely poured salt of his wound. I wonder why...He is jealous. Unpredictable Arjun you see.

And he just drags her away...just like that. And the excuse he gives her for bringing her with him because he wants help in moving things to the Manor house! Like seriously dude, are you even for real? But then again it's Arjun aka Mr.Logan! What do you expect... Well when I wrote it, I was like having the same reaction. Lame excuse. But then it suits in that situation, as he couldn't explain why he brought her at the mansion. LOL. My hero has got communication issues.😆

Arjun hurts himself! Awww...well for a dreading moment I actually though Riya was just going to walk out on him but thank god! She is another cartoon you see. Her excuse was another great one. She came back. Or else...it would have been a cliffhanger! She nursed his wound. Even though she hates blood but she did. And I love how Arjun noticed every single detail about her...kuch kuch hone laga hai wink wink

bohot kuch badal raha hai!😛

OH...the Josh-Arjun Discomfort moment again...hmmm...questions questions! i'm sorry, will give them soon. Let the story unfold first.

Then In this recent update...Rosy...questioned Arjun for his actions. Well...even then the Josh-Arjun thingy was brought up again. Don't let history repeat itself those were her exact words. Omg! There is definitely something more to this AJ thing (Arjun and Josh) haha.

AJ THING! 😆

Wow! Shree proposed Monica!!!!!!!! Ah...that is sooo awesome. Finally the two love birds will...get married soon! Hehe. I am so happy for them. But Monica ran away. Aww! Well...every girl is nervous before these kind of situations. I would say mostly girls like Monica. She is a bit shy type isn't it.

But nonetheless...she was going to say yes. Woppiieee! And what do you know...I showed up after like a billion years. And I was singing! Oye hoye! I like singing. Hehe. Mind reader again Jo jo! I actually had to bring you in, as it was the whole town invited. See, that was a random guess actually.

Aww..ye kya...mein jaldi chali gayi. Oh well. But hey...Monica proposed Shree again. Everyone fell into the chorus of YES! Haha. And finally he said yes! My happiness doubled right then. Hayeee! Ye pyaar...and they kissed haha! So cute! I'm gonna blush lol. Sorry your parents actually were in a hurry and you know the Lordy rumour. But I'm glad you got an eye opener from Riya about Arjun. I imagine u as a little kid you know. haha

Aha! What do you know? Arjun messaged Riya to meet him outside. Ooo! Lol and poor Riya though that he was taking her to an isolated place to kill her. That was definitely funny. God! Sometimes she is so nave!Bichari, can't blame her too.

And he apologized for the second time! Oh my god...I almost fainted then. I know I am exaggerating but still it is kinda pleasantly shocking...in a good way. Yeah, i totally get it. 😳

OH my god! Today Arjun is hell bent on giving very shocking surprises! I mean seriously...he brought Riya to a FUN FAIR! I don't know what to say...maybe trust is falling back into pieces with him. He really can be unpredictable...in the most strangest of situations. I love what you wrote here.

And he leaves me speechless...every time...Mera haal aisa hai to pata nahi Riya ka kaisa hoga... haahaa...

Well As I KEEP saying this is a golden flying peagasus...Jo! And you are it's rider...You really do have a great talent. Keep writing...I love you and I am sorry for being beyond late for commenting yaar! Seriously...I hope you understand.

Thank you dear Naby. I don't think I write that well. But I love how you refer this story as a Golden Flying Peagasus. Just motivates me and keeps me going. I don't mind if you gonna be late in reading the updates, first priority give it to your real world. You can come back and read anytime, my pm's will be intact in your mail box. 😉


And thank you once again, HUGS!🤗


Edited by Jo_Pinchy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's really wonderful update dear
Arjyn asked Riya for friendship
it's great
their roller coaster ride was lovely dear
their pov was awesome
eagerly waiting to read the next part
continue soon dear
nd thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing update
the way u described everything was really apprreciable
while reading the update i was imagining ariya like that
ahh riya first enjoyed the pony tail ride n arjun controlling it
then the roller coaster
n even asked arjun to sit with her
but he plainly refused KHADUS
but riya is riya
forcefully took him there with her good job
so now i got arjun here also is a police officer but is scared of heights
but riya seeing fear in his eyes
held his hand tight assuring him
n then she found the photo booth
hahaha asking arjun for money
n got the full wallet
n when she started the machine
came arjun asking for his wallet
was there something really that important in it...
i think his n roshni's photo or maybe his id card...
n that flauss moustache hahaha
arjun n riya laughing whole heartedly
all of these lovely moments captured by camera...
omg arjun asked riya to be friends with him i mean seriously
riya just can't believe it
n me too included
she left the photos with him
except for the one with both of them laughing together
let's see what's coming next
continue soon
Edited by cuteangel32923 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww such a cute and kinda romantic wala update di
Loved it
Loved ta coaster ride n arjun being in fear while riya holding his hands n giving him assurance
Loved it
Thank you for the pm

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