Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15 - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
both the pov's were nice!
aww..riya doing arjun's dressing!
cute convo!
dock was beautiful!
waiting for next update
do continu soon
thankx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super amazing awesome update
loveitt
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
it is amazing
awesome
gr8
aww arjun is falling for riya
jealousy...hehe
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Advance apology to all the readers.
I won't be able to update this week. I will be away for a wedding and will be back on Monday. I hope you will understand. I won't be able to write as i'm heading to my friends house now. And in the wedding chaos, you know. Hopefully, i will update once Im back. Very sorry to disappoint you all.

Love
JO.

P.S Will.miss you all. Thanks to all you lovely people who have commented and liked the chapter 16.
Bye now. Until laters! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update JO..

the beginning part of Arjun's POV was the best..ariya gestures talks and their arrogant yet helpless gradual weakness was described well..

both care for the other unknowingly..and both are confused about their own self..😳

then finally riya had to again call josh but that infuriated arjun...why...the biggest question i have now...

shree ri moment was good..kiera got paid..good..

continue soon...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm back. Wow the wedding was awesome. How are you all?
NEXT UPDATE ON THURSDAY 11th OF SEPT.

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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update he sad sport to her and
Take her fun fair update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
just loved it
amazing
Sid and Monica part was superb
And Arjun
unbelievable
Poor Riya😆😆😆😆😆
kya kya soch liya😆😆😆
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Don't shoot me!

I know I haven't been commenting on a whole lot of updates and trust me I feel TERRIBLE about it! It's been very busy since I went to vacation and when I returned the new academic year started, which put a lot of pressure on me. There is still a lot of pressure and it seems to be increasing by the minute but finally I got to comment! I am so happy about it!

Woppiiieee!

So comming to the update-s! I would firstly like the song you picked by Ed Sheeran! It was absolutely fantabulous. I mean he is like my favorite singer...or one of the favorite singers! And the song...Kiss me by him just brought back a whole lot memories! That song is really close to me. When I first heard it, it was like my new addiction. I literally used to keep it on repeat and listen to it every single day whenever I got to time. The lyrics are so...realistic yet...magical they always make me euphoric.

And the way Arjun sang this song man! It was like the icing on the cake for me. Double euphoria. well it was surprising that Arjun actually knew how to sing...but nonetheless I am glad you did make him sing. That too my favorite song by the favorite artist! just too good. I was smiling at that part until my muscles hurt. Seriously! And Riya's reaction to it was expected haha.

And then comes Josh to the rescue! Well...there was definitely the silent discomfort that passed between Josh and Arjun. I wonder what that is about...

Oh after that comes the Fair thing! Omg...that was totally cool. Shree and Monica totally gave Riya a surprise. A pleasant one of course! But I am glad both of them joined her. Now it looks complete.

but of course...the Perfect night is spoiled by our Mr.Logan rajkumar ! Gawwd...Sometimes I don't get his actions. He pushes her away but can't stand the sight of her enjoying with someone else. That too Josh! That definitely poured salt of his wound. I wonder why...

And he just drags her away...just like that. And the excuse he gives her for bringing her with him because he wants help in moving things to the Manor house! Like seriously dude, are you even for real? But then again it's Arjun aka Mr.Logan! What do you expect...

Arjun hurts himself! Awww...well for a dreading moment I actually though Riya was just going to walk out on him but thank god! She came back. Or else...it would have been a cliffhanger! She nursed his wound. Even though she hates blood but she did. And I love how Arjun noticed every single detail about her...kuch kuch hone laga hai wink wink

OH...the Josh-Arjun Discomfort moment again...hmmm...questions questions!

Then In this recent update...Rosy...questioned Arjun for his actions. Well...even then the Josh-Arjun thingy was brought up again. Don't let history repeat itself those were her exact words. Omg! There is definitely something more to this AJ thing (Arjun and Josh) haha.

Wow! Shree proposed Monica!!!!!!!! Ah...that is sooo awesome. Finally the two love birds will...get married soon! Hehe. I am so happy for them. But Monica ran away. Aww! Well...every girl is nervous before these kind of situations.

But nonetheless...she was going to say yes. Woppiieee! And what do you know...I showed up after like a billion years. And I was singing! Oye hoye! I like singing. Hehe. Mind reader again Jo jo!

Aww..ye kya...mein jaldi chali gayi. Oh well. But hey...Monica proposed Shree again. Everyone fell into the chorus of YES! Haha. And finally he said yes! My happiness doubled right then. Hayeee! Ye pyaar...and they kissed haha! So cute!

Aha! What do you know? Arjun messaged Riya to meet him outside. Ooo! Lol and poor Riya though that he was taking her to an isolated place to kill her. That was definitely funny. God! Sometimes she is so nave!

And he apologized for the second time! Oh my god...I almost fainted then. I know I am exaggerating but still it is kinda pleasantly shocking...in a good way.

OH my god! Today Arjun is hell bent on giving very shocking surprises! I mean seriously...he brought Riya to a FUN FAIR! I don't know what to say...maybe trust is falling back into pieces with him. He really can be unpredictable...in the most strangest of situations.

And he leaves me speechless...every time...Mera haal aisa hai to pata nahi Riya ka kaisa hoga...

Well As I KEEP saying this is a golden flying peagasus...Jo! And you are it's rider...You really do have a great talent. Keep writing...I love you and I am sorry for being beyond late for commenting yaar! Seriously...I hope you understand.

Continue soon Jo jo!

Until later's!

Love,

Nabi

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