Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
I know I have to unres the previous comment...but Kay karoon...I a. Getting time now...so I will comment on this one first.
And coming to the update...way beta wah!! Kya update thi...mat lab Riya gets locked in the room. I mean one of the common thing that happens with this scenes. But I
Ike them...cause it just turns put to be the push towards the actual love story!! Haayeee...

Hehe. Okay...aww poor Riya she was in tears...even I would have been scared, but why fear when Logan Lerman is here. Muhhaha. Hero to the rescue.lol. Hayeee...he was worried for her. So damn cute.

Plus now both of them are locked in the room. Mr. Smarty pants Logan Kay zaroorat thi. Itni zaroorat se Riya ko kitchne ki...but koi nahi I...I like the, better like this. Hum tum ek lamer mein band oh aur chaabi kho jaayeee! Lol.

And what do you know?! The guy actually apologizes for being rude. Huh! Some gentle man he is eh? 😆

And hamari Riya blurts out his 'pet name' LOGAN! Lol...I loved his reaction to it though...both the times...like he doesn't know that he his that sexxxyyy! Puh-lease. 😛

Aha...I like this 3 question game Yaar! It really is a good way to get to know others...hehe! And wow...I love the questions they threw at each other.

And Riya talking about her past did affect him didn't it? Well...sometimes talking to strangers is easier than talking with close ones.

And what do you know? He can sing! That too Ed Sheeran songs...MY PERSONEL FAVORITE!! man...Jo...you really are a mind reader you know that...and this the third time I am saying this..please please...do make him sing one of the awesomest songs by Ed. Waise to Uska har song hi awesome nota hai...but still hehe!!

I love you Jo Jo...and do update soon...and I will unres the previous one soon buddy. Hopefully 😆

Continue soon!

Love...nabi 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you guys for all the lovely comments and for hitting Like! GROUP HUG!



Rraba- Thank you for your comments and queries. I have answered them, hope you are clear on it 😳
Skrafty- Thank you dear.

Godly Affection- Thanks dear. Did the PM help? lol

Saritak- Thanks for being there always. hugs!

Cuteangel32923- Thank you dear. Love your comment.😆

Sweetpari4u97- Thanks yaar!😊

Shanafr- Thanks paji 😊 It's good to have you back. Hope your exams went well.

Rimi- Don't apologise dear. I know its difficult to write stories and along with that to read others stories. I myself have to read a lot of your updates. I will come back soon. Your questions will be answered, but let the story unfold it gradually. My mouth will be zipped!

Naby- Yaar naby, you don't have to write essay on my update LOL. A short comment will be great for me. But i'm glad you still came over to read it. haha yes one of the common thing. Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho...aur door jam hojaye.

Yeah, my hero is not bad at all. Its the circumstances that make him bad or do bad things. Ahem!

He knows now she is calling him Logan, because she said that to him two times in a row.

Loved writing the heart to heart convo between them. And you also get a small revelation on Riya's life too.

ED-SHEERAN is my favourite too. Read the next update. My fav song!!😛😳

A big thank you and tights hugs. Love ya!

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NEXT UPDATE SCHEDULE DATE: SUN 10th AUGUST. Do you guys want a spoiler? Ahem, let me know. Else I will update right away tomo.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome amez super update
loveitt
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
amazing
the song was just magical
loved it
is there something between Josh and Arjun
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
terrible update i think am understanding arjun feelings a bit tell me has arjun really not trust riya or he did not want to scare her with his terrible side n r josh n arjun linked with each other
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ah han Arjun opened up a bit.. i mean teeny meeny... Wow dats shocking...
Josh err wats between Arjun and Josh??? is it the dislik whole village hv for Arjun or sumthn more???

P.S: sorry for late comment/ no comment exam time 😡🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update was superbly awesomely fabulously fantastic 😆
woow arjun opening up a bit
hahahahahaha clever riya
made up a game herself to stop her chatter box from jamming 😆
now wat's this going on between josh n arjun
poor riya again confused
n with her me too 😆
Ahhhmmm josh caring for riya
continue soon
Edited by cuteangel32923 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
beautiful song
josh-arjun what's wrong with them??
waiting for next update
do continu soon
thankx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update Jo,,,

a night together inside a locked room...welll i loved it...

Arjun and Riya both are gradually getting attracted towards the other...

Arjun sang for Riya?? well he actually sang remembering his roshni...

Arjun has a troubled life..but what does he mean by 'She was always late?'
I am just equally curious like riya...

then comes Josh...and the Arjun josh silent rivalry..another angle to the story...

waiting for the revelation...do continue soon..😃😃

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