Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15 - Page 26

ur story is just terrific

the story is just good from the beginnings to the last updates am quite impressed with the way the story is going evry scene has a great effect

both pov seems to be on the same track tell me did riya have any feeling for josh thanks for these beautiful updates

Awesome update
Loved it
I think Arjun wanted to say sorry
but couldn't say😆😆
Ri locked in store room
ab kya hoga?
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Hey this story is just wonderful
found this story just now
n i must say u r a great writer
the way u conveyed the emotions characters are going through was really appreciable
how dare that bl**dy amit cheat on riya
that too for that blondie
ahhh really sid n monica make a great couple
loved the way ambi n sid supported riya they really r great friends
hahaha first day in cornwall was just so adventurous for riya
i think josh kind of likes riyafinally the entry of arjun
i think arjun also likes riya as he said that when she will come to know about him she will also go away from him
so arjun wanted to apologize to her but she didn't give him a chance
omg riya inside the storeroom n the door got jammed
do continue soon n pls accept my buddy request

SPOILER!!! SPOILER!!!

He gritted his teeth and walked towards me, grabbing me by my arms. "What the f**k are you doing here? Do you know how much worried you got me?"

I stood in pain and shock at his behaviour, at the words he just threw on me.

"" I.. " my voice whimpered against his face close to me, tears pooled in my eyes. I bit my lower lip holding them back. My mind quickly registered his words... Do you know how much worried you got me?"

I will update this chapter soon. But I don't get a good response guys. I understand because my updates are always delayed, and seriously I apologise for that and thank you guys for being patient. I have already written this chapter, just hoping I will get good response.

THE NIGHT chapter is split in 3 updates. One is already up and 2nd you got the SPOILER. Will update it in this week. Tomo or Friday, you never know. I promise. This week it is!

Waiting for your thoughts on this spoiler.

Thank you to readers who have commented on last chapter. Naby meri maa, res ko unres bhii karogi?😆

Cuteangel32923, welcome dear and thank you for your lovely comment. I will accept your Frnd req soon. Enjoy reading. 🤗

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Awesome teaser
Arjun worried for Riya😉
interesting
update soon

well sorry i did not quite understand the little bit bt what few i understand was nice thanks for the previous updates