Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15

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rraba

@rraba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

i read both chapter 2 n 3 they r just great u r just good with wonderful updates

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: rraba
well sorry i did not quite understand the little bit bt what few i understand was nice thanks for the previous updates

Hey dear, i appreciate your comment. Tell me what you didnt quite understand? Ill try to explain.

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Awesome update
Loved it
LOL arjun riya ko bachane aaya aur khud bhi phas gaya😆😆😆
THE 3Q game
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

awesome updates

loved it

its very interesting!

beautifully written

loved the game!

waiting to know more

continu soon

thankx for pm

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Megha32

@Megha32

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Hey that was fabulous
thank god finally arjun came to rescue riya from that storeroom
but but but himself got stuck there hehehehe
hmmm ariya now having heart to heart convo
good this way they'll get to know more about each other
riya shared her past about her parents n fiance with arjun
riya asked arjun to sing for her woow
will arjun oblige her request
continue soon

Edited by cuteangel32923 - 11 years ago

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rraba

@rraba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

riya for whom did she have feelings n did mr logan have any feelings for riya or it's a kind of care n concern for her

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: rraba
riya for whom did she have feelings n did mr logan have any feelings for riya or it's a kind of care n concern for her

Okay so if you have read it from the start you will know Riya is to love Amit. But he cheated her and broke her heart, which is why she comes to Cornwall to keep herself away from the mess in her life.

Here she meets Josh, but let me tell you, josh is smitten by Riya. Riya is not. She is not ready to love again and trust anyone with her heart again. However, when Josh is not around, she misses his company. I will say, take it as a friendship from her side. She knows no one in this new place, but because Josh is her age guy, she can relate to him and have developed a feeling but not love only friendship.

Then comes Arjun, aka Logan. Every time they meet, it didn't go well. Arjun was pissed with her, as she chucked mud on him, then she went into his property with any permission, fluffy/ sandy incident..so on!

Riya feels he is scary from what she heard from others, but from What Matty tells her, her view about him is bit changed, quite hopeful that he is a good person. She is just curious! And he is curous about her too.😆

However Riya feels a pull towards him, the last update chapter 13, she is starting to trust him. Telling him about her life, her fiance cheated on her, about her parents separation... but in that heart to heart conversation, arjun is not opening up much. but he will, as time comes.

So, Arjun kinda now feels bad for her as he misbehaved, so he apologises. But he too feels there is something between them. When I'm talking about a tug, a spark between them, this means they are unaware of their feeling. It takes time you know! The love process will be gradual.

So i would say, don't confirm right away that they are having feelings for each other. Its gonna be slow. Before that there is a lot to happen.

I really hope this helped. If not, you can bring your queries to me again. :)

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Sorry for late api
wow
Awesome amez super fab update
loveittt
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Guys if you want an update please comment. I need your response. Pls. :(

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Phew!!!!!!

Jo..i am really sorry...i had you pms intact, but didnt get the time to read...finally i have finished the pending chapters...all in one go...

Awesome progress in the story...loved them jo...

Riya is working at the mansion and in turn facing the arrogant Arjun...

but what about his past?? Arjun murdered rosh...offcourse not...but if its true i wouldnt mind either..😆

ariya moments were lovely..😆

and riya gets herself stuck inside the store room..this girl...🥱

do continue soon...though i might get late with comments...ill read them for sure..

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