Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hiya! Thanks for the PM. It was lovely reading about Riya's new fresh start😊 Hope she manages to move on hehe and who was the angry man she splashed mud onto? Is it Arjun?😉
Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
So Riya finally reaches her destination... Who was that angry man was it arjun?! And is he the same guy that naby was talking abt?!

Thanks for the pm and please update soon x
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Posted: 11 years ago
Blood hell! *British emotional accent* I am over whelmed Jo! No one has ever done that for me...why are you so nice! *khushi ke aasooon* 😭Oh my Lord...I Thought I was the only cukking frazzzy one here but tu bhi ye hai mujhe nahi para tha...Seriously I am like doing the dramatic khushi ke as son right now...Tu puri ki puri Pagal hai jO! I though it was only a dedication..but Me being in the update...Oh my Lord jESUS...Ek minute ke liye I kept staring at the screen...I am saying this honestly Jo...you have made my day buddy...I love you sooo much...you have no idea..No one had ever done this for me...thank you again! God...i STILL can't believe you did that...😆 And I was speaking some weird language...that I didn't even know..but it was good to hear me talking like that...I sounded so cool #SWAG! 😛 Awww and Fluffy liked me and i LIKED Him too! solo cuweeteee! I love puppies btw! hheehe so thank you for reading my mind😳 Hehehe and Riya liked me as well that was a treat too thank you again! Cornwell indeed as really beautiful...God I wish I can go there one day...it sound so unlike the city...Well it has been added to my wish list for sure buhaha!

Oh Poor Riya she smashed her car into someone...hopeful the person didn't die...but he sounded scary though...😕 haillaaa kahi Akdu rawte to nahi tha???? 😲 Agar aiea hua na to I will surely do the lungi dance! Man...I just can't wait for his entry...kab ayega meta hotwa...*pouts* Jo...u need to bring him soon warna...I will go into depression...aur agar anti-depressant doc hi depression mien chala gaye to tera ky ahoga kaliya??? *Gabbar ishtyle* 🤣
Fluffy was so excited to come to the new city no?! Hehheeh...Animals these days! 🥱
It was cute though...and Me god Matty sounds sooo hyper hehehe! but she is sweet...hmm...Fluffy doesn't seem to like her much does he? well koi nahi main hoon na! 😉 And the uncle sounds so the-army-types-retired-man guy! hehe...oh and he doesn't like Dogs either...I know I wonder what it is with people not like dogs...I mean they are loyal unlike other animals! plus they protect you till their death...And i AM not kidding on that one...whee they actually do! 😃
oh...btw..who is this Lord guy freak?? that I was talking about kahin wo to Arjun nahi??
Maaadhuriii! Phir to yeah story Beauty and the beast mien transfer ho jayegi!
Omg! I love fairytales though 😉 hehehe!
And then Who is this Josh guy??? Hmm...so many mysterious
but I like the suspense 😃 God...I hope I don't die out of curiosity till the next update
I love you jO!
mUjhe abhi TAK KHUSHI ke asson aa rahe hai

Wach mein this mean a lot to me Thank you again gurl!! !
Love you!
🤗🤗
Continue soon and Thanks for the pm!

P.S---- I love rainbows btw...thanks for reading my mind again! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Live-life

Firstly I couldn't resist quoting this all again. I did go away for a while to breathe in a bit and wonder what am I doing this. 😳 Literally chocked to tears!

Blood hell! *British emotional accent* I am over whelmed Jo! So am I Naby! No one has ever done that for me...why are you so nice! *khushi ke aasooon* 😭Oh my Lord...I Thought I was the only cukking frazzzy I love that! one here but tu bhi ye hai mujhe nahi para tha...Seriously I am like doing the dramatic khushi ke as son right now...Tu puri ki puri Pagal hai jO! A bow in gratitude! I though it was only a dedication..but Me being in the update...Oh my Lord jESUS...Ek minute ke liye I kept staring at the screen...I am saying this honestly Jo...you have made my day buddy...I love you sooo much...you have no idea..No one had ever done this for me...thank you again! God...i STILL can't believe you did that...😆 Thank you actually for being such a wonderful being. Something about you that just motivates me to write along. I'm not kidding. I said this earlier. I had planned to stop the fiction once Arjun ended but here I am still writing ahead. Thank you! And don't wanna MISS OUT YOU ALL MY READERS TOO. *Sniff*

And I was speaking some weird language...that I didn't even know..but it was good to hear me talking like that...I sounded so cool #SWAG! 😛[Yeah cornish language. Which Riya as well pretty much got the swag.😉] Awww and Fluffy liked me and i LIKED Him too! solo cuweeteee! I love puppies btw! hheehe so thank you for reading my mind😳[I was wondering the same, what if Naby does not like puppies, then? But yeah it was a blind fall and it did fall in right place. Another thing I wanna say, Fluffy liked you and there was a reason why he did. *Mouthzip* laters! ] Hehehe and Riya liked me as well that was a treat too thank you again! Cornwell indeed as really beautiful...God I wish I can go there one day...it sound so unlike the city...Well it has been added to my wish list for sure buhaha! [It's in my book list too! just in awe with that place. My friends have been there, so I get a little raw research from their POV too.]

Oh Poor Riya she smashed her car into someone...hopeful the person didn't die...but he sounded scary though...😕 haillaaa kahi Akdu rawte to nahi tha???? 😲 Agar aiea hua na to I will surely do the lungi dance! Man...I just can't wait for his entry...kab ayega meta hotwa...*pouts* Jo...u need to bring him soon warna...I will go into depression...aur agar anti-depressant doc hi depression mien chala gaye to tera ky ahoga kaliya??? *Gabbar ishtyle* 🤣 [love that!😆 Hmm... jaldi patah chalega. stay tuned!]
Fluffy was so excited to come to the new city no?! Hehheeh...Animals these days! 🥱
It was cute though...and Me god Matty sounds sooo hyper hehehe! but she is sweet...hmm...Fluffy doesn't seem to like her much does he? well koi nahi main hoon na! 😉 And the uncle sounds so the-army-types-retired-man guy! hehe...oh and he doesn't like Dogs either...I know I wonder what it is with people not like dogs...I mean they are loyal unlike other animals! plus they protect you till their death...And i AM not kidding on that one...whee they actually do! 😃 [I know most men don't like dogs]
oh...btw..who is this Lord guy freak?? that I was talking about kahin wo to Arjun nahi??
Maaadhuriii! Phir to yeah story Beauty and the beast mien transfer ho jayegi!
Omg! I love fairytales though 😉 hehehe! [Hmm..! Won't say anything. I had long back stopped putting suspense in the story. My first fiction, every update you read it, there was always a suspense factor in it. But I found it too dragged. But now I'm back. Hopefully giving answers to all in next update.]
And then Who is this Josh guy??? Hmm...so many mysterious
but I like the suspense 😃 God...I hope I don't die out of curiosity till the next update
I love you jO!
mUjhe abhi TAK KHUSHI ke asson aa rahe hai

Wach mein this mean a lot to me Thank you again gurl!! !
Love you!
🤗🤗
Continue soon and Thanks for the pm! [[That jackie guy is me, holding your precious tears. Or better we both cry together. Happy tears*
A big big big tight Matty type Hug to you!🤗]

P.S---- I love rainbows btw...thanks for reading my mind again! 😆 [One more blind shot, aim acha tha mera. haha]

Love you Loads! This is exactly me right now in front of my mum.


Edited by Jo_Pinchy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

beautiful
awesome update
love it
cont soon


Thanks Sarita.😊
Indeed means a lot. *hugs*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: benaz

Hiya! Thanks for the PM. It was lovely reading about Riya's new fresh start😊 Hope she manages to move on hehe and who was the angry man she splashed mud onto? Is it Arjun?😉

Continue soon!


Thanks Benaz. She will move on!
For more next update ka wait karo pls😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: miss_precious

So Riya finally reaches her destination... Who was that angry man was it arjun?! And is he the same guy that naby was talking abt?!

Thanks for the pm and please update soon x


Thankooo Ms.Precious!

Ah that you'll know later😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkerbell

awesome beautiffuly written


Thank you Pinkerbell.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
love it
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jo_Pinchy

Love you Loads! This is exactly me right now in front of my mum. ROFL! 🤣God! You are too much...As I said we both are Drama queens! and how exactly can u get a branch in your eye?!! twig samaj mien at a hai..but branch????🤣🤣
Oh god! I love you Jo!
😆🤗❤️


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